Date: 03/08/12 05:41 pm Title: Oral Presentation
Het fluff??? What is wrong with me? :D
Yeah, I have to admit that het fluff is still not my cup of tea, but I also have to say that the smut part was almost disturbingly hot. I wouldn't mind if ut either. Ops, did I just say yhat? :D.
Good job. :)
Author's Response: Het fluff is amazing, okay?! =P I'm so glad you thought it was hot, regardless of the pairing. ♥
Date: 03/07/12 03:25 pm Title: Oral Presentation
Loved it! The sex was hot, but my favorite part was Ria asking Tom to let her see his tongue after. I melted thinking of Tom showing her. Tom, get your tongue pierced!!! lol
Author's Response: I think it'd be awesome if Tom got his tongue pierced. And these days, who knows what the boy is gonna do. Bill has gotten him to pop his tattoo cherry and it seems Tom's starting to get into all sorts of things now. lol
Date: 03/05/12 10:04 pm Title: Oral Presentation
Gurl, you know how much I love your writing. Even though you don't write out the Het that much, this just SO delivered. Not only was the sex hot, but after when they were talking it was very authentic which I LOVE. You're awesome!
Author's Response: Gah, I'm so happy to hear you saying these things. I was so nervous about this one because not only is it het, but I've never in my life written oral het and...man, it's been a while since I'd written any kind of het period. Sooo, coming from you, I'm taking this review as a huge compliment. So, thank you. ♥ ♥ ♥
Date: 03/05/12 08:42 pm Title: Oral Presentation
Now that is a wake-up call. Wow!
I don’t know how you are such an incredible writer. You manage to get plot in your fluff and this whole serious look at the difficulties in their relationship. The ending was so sweet.
Oh, and the sex was really, really hot! More good het, please! (And also I really loved how you wrote the two little dogs! They stole that scene!)
Author's Response: I don't know how you've concluded that I'm such an incredible writer. I think you took a wrong turn somewhere. =P
But no, seriously, I'm flattered that YOU could ever think so because I admire pretty much everything you do.
Date: 03/05/12 01:40 pm Title: Oral Presentation
Wow...just wow, I'm totally speechless. This was amazing!
Author's Response: Awww, thank you. =)
Date: 03/05/12 12:38 pm Title: Oral Presentation
oh gosh, this was so amazing!!!! great balance of smut and fluff, and even a little suspense, with Tom freaking out and all. purely amazing.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you thought it was balanced and not overly fluffy. =D
Date: 03/05/12 01:01 am Title: Oral Presentation
Good job. Your actually good at the whole "Het" thing :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I love het, I just don't get a lot of practice with it. lol
Date: 03/04/12 11:04 pm Title: Oral Presentation
Girl, you're amazing. This was hot as hell and completely perfect. ♥
Author's Response: You're sweet. Thank you. =)
Date: 03/04/12 09:19 pm Title: Oral Presentation
I love you so much for this. JSYK.
Author's Response: I love YOU. I was so nervous about this because I've never written this before. haha
Date: 03/04/12 08:44 pm Title: Oral Presentation
awwww....so cute :) i love it
Author's Response: Thank you. =)
Date: 03/04/12 08:13 pm Title: Oral Presentation
This was awesome great job :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. =D