Date: 03/04/12 10:56 am Title: Gustav
I do find your story a little hard to follow with all the flashbacks, but I'm starting to get it now. It's beginning to make sense and it's so sad. Poor Bill being made to feel he should be a female when he's happily lived as a man all these years. And all those probing questions to his friends and lovers. I'm glad Gustav was so defensive of him and wouldn't take shit from the therapist. It's a very clever concept and now I've gotten into it I'll keep on reading as long as you continue writing.
Author's Response: Oh, I know it's hard to follow and even harder to make any sense of, it IS a strange little story. A tip is to read the flashbacks carfull, there are a lot of hints in them that probably doesn't make any sense until the last chapter. This story is only five chapters long, are waiting for my beta to send back the two last parts so it won't take so long before it's all posted. And yeah, I feel sorry for Bill too, it's far from easy for him, and as ju say, Gustav is very defensive of him. The question is, is that only a good thing? I'm glad you took your time to read and review it, thank you!
Date: 03/02/12 08:05 pm Title: Tom
Omg. This seems really unique and interesting and I'll definately track this!! Can't wait for more :D
Author's Response: Thanks, it's a bit different at least. I hope you will like the rest of it too. Thansk for your review.
