Date: 03/05/12 03:38 am Title: Chapter 2/5
oh, jeez. lovely, charming, drunk-ass Tom probably scared the bejeezus outta Bill. *grab, latch on, sway*
Author's Response: Whatdaya mean drunk-ass Tom isn't charming? He thinks he's *always* charming! ;D Just because he's trying to feel up a total stranger... oh, sober Tom sees your point. Hope you keep enjoying! And thank you so much for reading!
Date: 03/04/12 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 3/5
i totally laughed @ 'bathroom troubles' too much fruit can really make things extremely easy XD
Author's Response: That was such a bad joke, I thought, but it seemed like something a crude young guy would say! :D I'm so glad you thought it was funny and not too much. Bill sure seems to love his fruit! Thank you so very much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 03/04/12 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 3/5
I didn't post any reviews before because i couldn't stop reading your story. I started tonight (it's 12:40am here).
So your story is really interesting ! Funny and adorable ...
And well written ! :)
Im feeling bad for Bill, he has no friends and his look seems to be too "diferent" for other people, so they avoid and hate him just because of what he looks like. That's unfair ! Anyway there is "Great Spirit Tom" ! amazing Tom. He's trying to make Bill more friendly, sociable. He wants to help. So kind of him ! I can't wait to read the moment when they will really meet and talk to each other (not only saying
Author's Response: Ah, I'm so sorry you stayed up late reading! I really hope it was worth it! :D Thank you so much for the lovely review and the wonderful compliments! You made my evening! ^__^ I'm really glad you got the feeling of Bill that I was going for. I definitely can't imagine Real-Bill as shy or insecure, but this Bill is all kinds of anxious, poor guy. I hope it all comes across through the story. Tom turned out so much nicer and sweeter than I've ever written him, but I hope it worked, too. I'm just so excited that you like this! Thank you very much, and I hope you enjoy the rest just as much!
Date: 03/04/12 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 3/5
Yay! Thanks so much for the early update =D I really liked this chapter. The way you wrote the conversation between Mr Miller and Tom was perfect. It made me feel so bad for Bill, who has to endure that type of behaviour all the time... and I like Tom’s reaction to it, how he’s feeling protective of Bill already. I love it! Of course I really enjoyed the conversations between Bill and Tom, so so cute and hilarious. Good to know that Bill is interested in Tom even if he doesn’t realize yet he’s the hot guy Bill is talking about =) I wonder how Tom is gonna end this charade too! Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Oh, you're so welcome! Without all the encouragement, I always feel bad posting too much, too soon. I don't want to be spamming THF! (But I am putting up chapter four right now.) I'm so excited that you liked this part. I'm very glad it got across a little bit of why Bill feels so insecure because he thinks no one likes him. Tom really turned out to be so mature and sweet and nurturing in this story! I really, really hope you enjoy the rest. I'm so nervous now whether or not you'll like the conclusion or think it's too far-fetched. Thank you again so much for reading and enjoying! :D
Date: 03/04/12 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 2/5
Hehe, I wonder if Bill will mention stumbling into a drunk neighbor to the great spirit Tom. I'm interested in hearing what Bill thought of him. :D
Author's Response: Ooooh, you'll have to read the next chapter to find out! ;D I can't spoil anything! *zips lips* Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I really love finding out if you thought something was funny or not, or whether the characters worked, even as OOC as they are. Thank you very much! :D
Date: 03/04/12 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 1/5
I can just visualize problems occurring where Tom meets Bill in person and Bill recognizes the voice and thinks Tom was messing with him, or thinking he's a spirit in human form. This is definitely cute!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you think it's cute so far~ I hope that continues! :D Ah, I never thought of Bill wondering if Tom is a spirit in human form! Wow, I could have worked something out with that, but it probably wouldn't have ended well (or as funny). Tom definitely couldn't have kept up the act. He has trouble enough keeping his stories straight now! :D
Date: 03/03/12 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 2/5
Oh my gooood! This is so adorable and well written. I seriously need more! Already loving your story A LOT! :) Please update soon, awesome!
Author's Response: Ah, thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked this so far! :D I hope you enjoy the rest just as much. Thank you very much for reading!
Date: 03/03/12 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 2/5
aww am sad for bill =( but hes so cuteeee!! your chapters need to be longerrr XD
Author's Response: Poor Bill has a little way to go yet. I'm so glad you enjoying this! I hope you like the rest just as much! Thank you very much for reading! :D
Date: 03/03/12 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 1/5
hahaha, this is such a cute story idea! wow, Tom is such a shoddy great spirit xD but it's okay, it'd be weirder if he playacted. not integral to the B/T, but Tom with that little girl was priceless. ssooooo adorable! he'd make such a good daddy, and that attentiveness might be what this childish, lonely Bill needs :)
Author's Response: Hey stranger! :D First a review from you and now an email -- you totally made my weekend! I'm so happy you're enjoying this. It's nothing but fluff and sweetness, but I wanted something happy and light. Tom is really bad at remembering he's a great spirit because at heart he's a very honest guy. That and he's too distracted by Bill! (Who can blame him!) I absolutely love your observation of Tom and his attentiveness. I knew he was this nurturing, caring character, but I never put it together with the neighbor kids and then Bill. Thank you for pointing this out and making me think! These two are so completely OOC. I just hope I pulled it off in the rest of the story!
Date: 03/03/12 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 2/5
Oh dear...I'm just so torn over how this is all going to turn out, because if anything, Tom is just coming into the quick realization that he's enjoying talking to Bill way too much. And Bill still has no idea who he is outside of their nightly talks. However, even I can't help but just want to be Bill's friend, because at least he's reaching towards the occult and not anything like alcohol or drugs or even suicidal thoughts, you know? Just because he feels alone in the world. I just hope that Tom really does think wisely about how he's going to help Bill become the person he wants to be, to make him realize that he doesn't need a guiding spirit from the great beyond to make his dreams come true.
How he doesn't need Tom to tell him what an amazing person he already is, as long as he believes in himself more and opens himself up to people that DO want to be his friend.
Lovely update!!! Can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your awesome review. It's always so wonderful to hear what people really think in detail because these characters come alive for me, but I want to know whether I make that work for other people. So thank you VERY MUCH for reading and telling me what you think! *___* Poor Bill will try to explain himself a little more in the upcoming parts. He's so OOC because I can't even imagine real-Bill having social anxiety or being shy. This Bill is completely different. And Tom turned out to be a much better guy in this fic than I ever imagined him in real life. lol I really hope you enjoy the rest of this, and I hope it lives up to expectations. I'm always afraid that I set up these big characters but I don't follow through. I'll be waiting to hear what you think! And thank you, THANK YOU again!
Date: 03/03/12 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 2/5
Awww! Bill is just one of the most adorable character ever! They are so cute together... it's an unconventional way to ``meet`` but I hope it works for them in the long run. I'm proud of Tom, not being mean and following Georg's plan... Tom is a good man =) Thanks for this update!
Author's Response: Hee-hee, I'm really glad you like Bill. He's so wildly out of character because I can never imagine real-Bill being shy and insecure. But in this story, he just kind of ran away and hid. Then Tom ended up being so *nice* and sweet, which I wonder how OCC that is too! :D I'm so glad you've stuck with this, and I hope you like the rest just as much. Thank you so much for reading and for the rec on Twitter. You're the best!
Date: 03/03/12 10:41 am Title: Chapter 1/5
This story is so cute! Please continue writing it! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! ^__^ The story is all done, so I should be updating every couple days. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Hope you enjoy the rest!
Date: 03/02/12 01:29 am Title: Chapter 1/5
Aww poor Bill lol. Tom is cute playing along. I like it.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it, thank you. Poor Bill has a way to go. ^__^ Hope you enjoy the rest!
Date: 03/01/12 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 1/5
I can't help but think Bill will be terribly embarrassed to learn later about who his great spirit Tom really is and I couldn't help but laugh at the whole exchange yet I know Tom doesn't mean any harm by it. He is intrigued by Bill and I can't say I wouldn't do the same if I wanted to get to know someone as...mysterious as this Bill seems to be! Looking forward to Saturday so I can read the next one!!
Author's Response: Poor Bill has a way to go yet. This story was always meant to be so funny and fluffy that the potential for Tom to make it go so wrong never hit me until I was almost done. I guess the Tom in my head was just too nice and caring that he never once thought about screwing Bill over. ;) He's definitely intrigued by Bill, I love the way you put that. And I totally agree with you -- if I got to talk to someone like Bill by faking it, I'd pretend too! I really hope you like the rest! The other parts are pretty short, but I hope you enjoy. Thank you so much for reading!
Date: 03/01/12 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 1/5
Woohoo for new fic!! You know I like your fics with other pairing but twins is definitely my favorite one so I'm even more excited to see this new fic from you!
Omg I LOVE this Bill! He's just so adorable and I can't wait to find out more about him! Really like the plot so far and I can't wait to see where you're gonna take it. Glad there's lot of fluff too, I love fluff =D
Author's Response: Yay, thank you very much! ^__^ Your reviews always make me feel warm and fuzzy! I hadn't written the twins in so long, it felt almost weird! This one is short and very sweet and fluffy. Bill turned out so extremely OOC, but I hope I made it work. I'll be eager to see what you think. I hope you enjoy it!