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Reviewer: mikki15xxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/12 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 1/5

Aw, thanks ma'am :D

Author's Response: I don't even remember what this was about, so I'll just offer you hugs. *HUGS*

Reviewer: kazenoarashi Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/12 06:57 am Title: Chapter 5 -- The End

Can I handle that last image of a Gustav in diapers and baby wings? Hehehe!

Loved this fic :)

Author's Response: I still have that image burned into my imagination! It's already Easter but that Gustav!Cupid is still stuck with me! D: Actually, it's a pretty adorable mental picture, so I'll keep it. I'm so happy you enjoyed this story, too. Thank you very, very much! ^__^

Reviewer: mikki15xxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/12 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 1/5

Why thank you, my good lady :D

Author's Response: You are so welcome, my fair maiden! ;)

Reviewer: Ema21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/12 07:28 am Title: Chapter 5 -- The End

Awwww, I absolutely loved reading this story!! You're so good at telling sweet little fairytales like this. That's what it feels like to me, like your story is told so well, and so personal and quirky, that it could just be a cloud I float away on as I fall into a peaceful sleep. :) In fact, I've stayed up later than even my unusual sleeping schedule permits, reading this fic, and now I'm gonna fall asleep dreaming of shy Bill and spirit-Tom I think. Lol. This story was so perfect. You have a gift with coming up with unusual characters and situations and weaving them into a perfect love story. I hope you'll write more twincest. I love it. Thank u for making my night w this cute fluffy little fic. :)

Author's Response: I have to tell you that I had the worst week last week in every single way, but I kept this review open in a tab on my computer. Every time I got overwhelmed and wanted to go crazy or give up, I read this and it made me want to cry (in a good way). So, thank you, thank you, thank you for your incredibly kind words! You'll never know how much it really meant to me and how great an impact it had on me! I'm beyond flattered by the way you described my writing. I'm just so happy that you enjoy it, and I'm thrilled that it could make you smile. I do hope you got some sleep eventually and had very pleasant dreams. :3 I'm so glad you liked these characters because they are very out-of-character (at least for Bill), and it's exciting that you think it worked anyway. I just can't thank you enough for this review and everything you said. I hope I'll be able to write more soon and live up to your standards. Thank you and have a lovely weekend!

Reviewer: i_is_anonymous Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/12 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 5 -- The End

This story was so cute and adorable. I loved the confusion and misunderstanding that started it all. It was so very well executed. Humor can be dangerous and easy to go too far. But this story stayed within the bounds. So charming, so cute. One of my new favorites.

Author's Response: THANK YOU, thank you, thank you! I cannot tell you how much your reviews have meant to me this weekend. Thank you! It's so wonderful to find out what people really think of a story -- whether something worked out well or was truly awful. After all, the only way I'll ever improve is to have feedback, good or bad. So, thank you very much for letting me know what you enjoyed. You've made me smile and walk on air all weekend. I'm really happy you liked this fluffy story, and I'm thrilled that you thought it stayed within the limits of humor. You're right, it's a fine line, and I worry about crossing it too much. I'm very excited that you thought this worked. Thank you again so much! *___*

Reviewer: lilliephoenix Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/28/12 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 5 -- The End

so cute and cheesy!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love cheese of all kinds! ^__^ I'm glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: mikki15xxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/21/12 03:58 am Title: Chapter 1/5

lol! Your Welcome!

Author's Response: Such a sweetie you are! ;D

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/17/12 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 5 -- The End

LOL, the end with Gustav was too cute. Great story, thank you so much!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm really glad you enjoyed this story! ^__^ I love Gustav so much; I always have to fit him in somehow! Now I can't stop imagining him in a Cupid's outfit. xD Thanks again so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Wintera Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/15/12 01:22 am Title: Chapter 5 -- The End

Sorry I didn't comment sooner, I got so busy this week! D: But I really liked your ending, it was romantic and funny :)

Haha I had not predicted that Bill would think Tom has a wife and kids, but it all explains why he was angry at him! Fortunately, everything has been resolved and he knows the truth now :)

The lines “I can do all that for you,” Tom said. “Plus I can do things that spirit Tom never could.” AND “I suppose we can give it a try. If you really want to be with a loser like me.” were my favorites! It illustrates well the two characters I think lol, Bill's low self-esteem (poor him :() and Tom's seductive personality!

Aaaww the past two paragraphs are lovely, where we find out that cupid-Gustav was actually summoned by Bill and that he helped set up the two guys together :) It was a good surprise! And I hope Georg meets his soulmate at the party ;) lol

Author's Response: Yay, I'm so excited you liked the ending! ^__^ Thank you! I knew from the beginning that Bill would assume Tom was with the woman and kids he saw the night of the fire alarm, and Tom buying kids' medicine was just the last straw. At least, I wanted a real reason for why Bill would be angry, assuming that he didn't want a married father (some people are into that, I don't know). After finding out that truth, I think Bill was definitely hurt that Tom lied about the spirit thing, but not as angry. Like I said before, it all sounds good in my head, but I don't know if I got it to translate to the page! I'm so glad you liked the little Gustav cameo -- he always has to get in a story somehow. I love him! :D Thank you so much for reading and for all your encouragement and support! You're great!

Reviewer: BeiBillZuSein Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/13/12 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 5 -- The End

Awww I love how they never even met "for real" before, yet they fit together perfectly :') Really cute and beautiful story really! Special :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm so happy you liked this story! ^___^ I think that Tom can draw Bill out of his shyness and help him find his self-esteem and strength. Then Bill will be the one to shine on stage, with Tom beside him, and they'll have their happy ending. That's what I like to imagine, anyway! I'm really glad you enjoyed this, and thank you very much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: mikki15xxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/13/12 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 1/5

I already knew I was going to love it!

Author's Response: That because you're so full of looooooove! And I'll take it! Thank you! ;)

Reviewer: music55 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/13/12 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 5 -- The End

So, again, i really loved reading your story, i read a lot of stuff on here, but this was one of the funniest story ive read for a while now ;) I hate that the story is finished already and i really hope you're gonna continue writing, i'd definitely read it

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I'm really flattered that you thought this was so funny! ^__^ I love comedies and happy endings, and I think that's where my better writing is. I've somehow managed to turn out 17 stories so far (I can't believe it's that many already!) and there's not a really serious one among them. I'm so happy you liked this. Thank you very much for your lovely reviews!

Reviewer: mikki15xxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/13/12 01:48 am Title: Chapter 5 -- The End

Suger-y Sweet!
Just like you said :D

Author's Response: Hahaha, I warned you! :P It was like cotton candy and Cherry Coke, but those things are all right every once in a while. I'm so happy you enjoyed it! ^__^

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/12/12 01:51 am Title: Chapter 5 -- The End

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaw :3 one shot later, hmm? this was adorable and just what I needed...only, it's over now and now idk what to do with myself xD. it's so cute that bill's little seance really did conjure something~Gussi the love fairy. in THOSE boots, I'm sure :P idk why you need to go on hiatus cuz seriously, you're already great, but if your writing improves I can't wait to see it! *hugs*

Author's Response: I cannot get rid of the mental image of Gustav in a traditional Cupid's diaper. XD This is going to stick with me forever! The poor guy! He would look absolutely adorable, though! I'm so happy you enjoyed this story. I kept wondering what if Bill's summoning had worked -- what would it have conjured? I didn't want some horrible demon to devour him or anything, and then the Gustav in my head sighed and said he would do it. But only if he got some Georg lovin' off screen. I was happy to oblige! Thank you so much for saying that about my writing! You are way too sweet! I guess I'll just wait and see after the FQF if I'm inspired by anything. There are a couple ideas bouncing around. Thank you again for all your encouragement! *hugs*

Reviewer: bink257 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/11/12 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 5 -- The End

I'm glad Bill wasn't completely oblivious and that him and Tom were able to work through it. Tom will be great for him in real life. :)
I LOVED the part about Bill having summoned the cupid hotline instead in the demon shopping network.

Author's Response: Oh yay, you did read the ending! I'm so relieved that you liked it! ^___^ I think Bill was trying to put the pieces together, but he was afraid to admit that it could be Tom, especially since he thought Tom had a family. I'm glad that came through in the story. I think Tom will help him come out of his shell eventually, and Bill will be the one shining on stage then. Hahaha, I'm glad you liked the little end with Gustav. I wanted to work him in somehow, and I kept wondering "what if Bill's spirit conjuring wasn't off the mark? Who would have showed up then?" The idea hit me and now all I can picture is Gustav as Cupid. x) It's a nice mental image though! Thank you again very much for reading and especially for your reviews. Your encouragement means so much to me!

Reviewer: myself225 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/11/12 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 5 -- The End

Awww, that was so sweet!! :D

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm so happy you enjoyed it! ^__^

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/11/12 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 5 -- The End

Awww!! This was so sweet and adorable! I loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it! It just seemed like a good time for something fluffy and sweet. I'm happy you liked it! ^__^

Reviewer: WavyNavy Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/11/12 09:14 am Title: Chapter 5 -- The End

This one was so cute ! I love it ! I wasn't expecting it at all. I was worried about Bill's anger at the begining but all went good. And Gustav did his job, such a good Cupid !
Thank you ! :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story and the ending. I was really stressing about the end after so many people started liking the story! ^__^ I figured that Bill would be angry, but more hurt than anything. I think that Tom can win him over and help Bill find more self-esteem and they can have a happy ending eventually. I love Gustav, especially as a Cupid! xD This was his easiest assignment ever since Bill and Tom already wanted it and did all the work. He basically got a paid vacation! Thank you again so much for your lovely reviews! They mean so much to me!

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/11/12 07:47 am Title: Chapter 5 -- The End

this was such a good story!!
u should do a sequel to this!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm really glad you liked it! ^__^ I have no plans on a sequel for this because I like to believe Bill and Tom will make their own happy ending, eventually. (Gustav might have to check in on on them every once in a while.) ;) But, I'm really flattered that you would read more. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: inlovewithTom Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/11/12 05:58 am Title: Chapter 5 -- The End

This is amazing. I especially love the ending.
I wasn't expecting that at all.
I was getting really nervous when Bill had gotten angry because he found out..
But all in all I loved the storyy

Author's Response: Oh, thank you very much! I'm so happy you enjoyed this story! ^__^ I'm glad you liked the ending. It was always meant to be a fluffy, get-together story, but I could only imagine Bill being hurt more than angry with Tom when he found out. It will take Tom a while to make it up to him, but I know they'll have their happy ending! ;) I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much!

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