Date: 07/26/14 03:49 am Title: Chapter 3:: Angel In Disguise
Glad to see this hasn't been abandoned. I vote 1, 2 and 4. =)
Date: 04/02/14 12:57 am Title: Chapter 1:: Welcome To The Circus
Very interesting, I'm curious what's going to happen here. :3
Date: 02/02/14 07:36 am Title: Chapter 3:: Angel In Disguise
I am so happy that you are writing this story again :)
I would like to see 4, 5 or 6 :D
Date: 01/30/14 01:57 am Title: Chapter 3:: Angel In Disguise
Honestly? I love ideas #1-7! Hehe. I read this story a long time ago, and I'm glad you came back to it. Sadly, I don't think I reviewed back then because I was too nervous, but I really love this story. I hope your muse inspires you because I love the idea of Bill being this caged and beautiful, fragile thing and Tom saving him. And the last line was great. Great job :)
Date: 01/30/14 12:15 am Title: Chapter 3:: Angel In Disguise
1,2 or 4.
Thank you thank thank you for updating this story...absolutely love it!
Date: 01/29/14 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 3:: Angel In Disguise
This story is intriguing. I'd like to see all from you list except for #3.
Date: 01/29/14 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 3:: Angel In Disguise
Bill performing for the audience .....or more loving gestures from to. That would be sweet bit could you please make the chapters longer that would be great.... =D update soon babe I will be waiting anxiously
Date: 07/24/13 07:42 am Title: Chapter 2:: Something About You
love it :D :D
Date: 01/25/13 04:55 am Title: Chapter 2:: Something About You
very interesting o.o hope you update soon!!
Date: 11/19/12 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 2:: Something About You
Ouch... I guess things are not that simple and beautiful and magical in that circus. I love the way it rolls though, the brutality, the freal aspect. Some twisted part in me hopes that Tom's obsession is not necessaryly any better. I hope for dark tones, not fairytales.
We'll see if we get that. :)
Date: 11/19/12 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 1:: Welcome To The Circus
I appartentöy missed this cpmpletely when you first posted this? Anyway, this sounds interesting and I want to see where this is going. The background story sounds fdelitefully twisted and a bit surreal, so I'm all for it.
I also noticed that it took me exceptionally long time to read, because of such coplorful and kind of complex (in a good way) language you use. I'm not a natuve speaker, so I took it slower to catch all tones, but it's actually something I like. Interesting.
Date: 11/18/12 12:44 am Title: Chapter 2:: Something About You
Yipie! So glad to see that the story is back on its feet again :D I think Cirque Du Freak would be a good name :) Oh yeah, and if you need anymore help on your story feel free to send me an email at B-schafer15@hotmail.com
Date: 11/16/12 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 2:: Something About You
it wasnt bad. i thouht it was great from a readers point of view. just keep writing.
Date: 11/16/12 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 2:: Something About You
Oh wow, poor Bill! He's too beautiful that it surpasses beauty humans can achieve... and thus they treat him so poorly. :( I hope Tom can help Bill soon.
Date: 11/16/12 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 2:: Something About You
Omg You updated! I realy love this story, poor Bill though... can't wait to read what happens next c:
Date: 11/16/12 07:15 am Title: Chapter 2:: Something About You
My heart hurt when he thought the last sentence.... Please write more soon?
Date: 11/16/12 05:12 am Title: Chapter 2:: Something About You
I'm very sorry for your loss *hugs*
This is an incredible beginning, and you'd never know that these two chapters were written so far apart in time and mindset.
I wish I could give you a name suggesion, but we really don't have enough info on the circus or the universe for me to come up with a name that would do it justice.
Is this some sort of alternate universe where people being treated like that publicly is fairly norm? Or possibly futuristic society? As it stands right now its not jiving that a bunch of people would just accept Bill's treatment without some explanation or outrage or something. Unless its some sort of kinky 'adult circus' like the series 'circus' by Gaja
How long had Bill been there at this point? He seems to be falling into 'worthless' mindset awfully fast.
This is an amazing beginning though, despite my confusion, and I really look forward to seeing more. Keep up the fabulous work!
Date: 11/16/12 02:59 am Title: Chapter 2:: Something About You
I'm very sorry for your loss :(
I'll be reading this, and most likely enjoying it :)
Date: 11/16/12 02:01 am Title: Chapter 2:: Something About You
poor Bill :( it's so sad what they are doing to him. I just want to rescue him and take him home. Make him warm and give him something good to eat. Bill will never be a freak to me or Tom lol.
Date: 11/15/12 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 2:: Something About You
I'm sorry for your loss. I hope writing helps with the healing. I'm glad you are back anyway.
Still an intriguing beginning. Looking forward to more.