Date: 06/15/20 11:27 am Title: Chapter 1
this was a really good story!!
Date: 12/31/16 10:35 am Title: Chapter 1
Sexy and well written. I enjoyed reading. I wonder if you would be open to a slash version. Either way; well done. xx
Date: 10/03/14 01:25 am Title: Chapter 1
O. M. Fucking. G!!!! That was sizzling!!
Date: 04/06/14 11:46 am Title: Chapter 1
Now THIS was something entirely differend... but good.
I hope that you will write more. Either a sequel or a new story.
Date: 08/23/13 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
DO IT DO IT DO IT THIS WAS AMAZING ..........O.M.F.G......!!!!!! THIS SHIT WAS INTENSE ......SERIOUSLY ....IT WAS A.W.E.S.O.M.E.....!!!!!
:D
Date: 01/25/13 02:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh god this was so hot. Please add another chapter. Please :) This was so well written. I love it. Can Tom possiblely like spank Billa for mastrabating or touching herself in the shower? I think that would be very hot. Not sure why but I was thinking about it. Great job this is one of my favorite stories ever. I hope you post more
Date: 07/10/12 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
u shuld write a second chapter, it feels like there should b more to the story!! i liked it, it was good!!
Date: 04/01/12 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was incredible! Good work! You should definitely write another chapter. :)
Date: 03/29/12 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
I don't even know what to write here as a comment... seriously.
A/ I don't read HET...like ever.
B/ I don't like incest stories if it's not twc, go figure:-)
Still here I am after I don't know how many re-reads. Blame it on your banner which was stunning and pulled me in:-)
That thing, that thing you created here was explosive! Should I bite my tongue of for saying that a sequel would be nice:-)
Date: 03/17/12 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
continue this story, please, many ppl would read it!!! xoxo
Date: 02/28/12 10:12 am Title: Chapter 1
yessssss please do!!!
Date: 02/28/12 09:20 am Title: Chapter 1
What Billa just said; it got hot in here.
Date: 02/28/12 04:16 am Title: Chapter 1
Sounds like she's about to be pregnant and that is NOT attractive. You also should choose a tense (past vs present) and stick to it. I found that u repeat the same words too much sometimes, and the dirty ones stick out too much. Sometimes the fic is a little too graphic to be sexy, but not cuz of the actions, more cuz of the way you're describing it, which is unfortunate. Also, I would have loved to see more personality in the way they talk, something that isnt so generic. I would have loved a bit more of a personal connection between them, rather than so much description on their raging hormones. While I enjoyed reading this fic, (btw, thanks for writing something this ballsy and dirty!!!), actually pretty sexy, I found I kept hoping for small changes. I really wish it was more real. I just didn't feel the connection between them, the type where u feel like you're in their head and you totally understand why they're fucking eachother so unappropriately. lol. Hope u get what I mean. Anyways, I still liked it somehow (probably cuz I'm such a sucker for incest), I'm really glad I read it. Hehe. Well done, and keep up the dirty fics!!! :)
Date: 02/27/12 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was haawwwt :) i agree to another chaptern:) heheheheh
Date: 02/27/12 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was really good, i think you should add another chapter! great job!!!
Date: 02/27/12 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm so going to hell for this but it was WORTH it :D haha
Date: 02/27/12 09:02 am Title: Chapter 1
This is written very very good! Pssh, i couldn't even say a few words, or understood what they meant! LMAO! You have a way with classy and smut. BRAVO!
Date: 02/27/12 08:55 am Title: Chapter 1
Very hot! Wow, i could picture Billa and Tom! Add another please!
Date: 02/27/12 08:50 am Title: Chapter 1
EWWWWWW this story is DISGUSTING! TOTALLY UNACCEPTABLE! SHOULD BE BANNED! Ahhhh who am i kidding? It turned me on, and i actually really loved it! More please??? :D