Date: 02/29/12 01:18 am Title: I Think I love you! ;O
well why did you stop there? :D
Author's Response: Lost inspiration ): Glad you wanted to read more ;) Lol.
Date: 02/27/12 12:46 am Title: I Think I love you! ;O
That explains it XD
Author's Response: Oh yes I was really into like writing but lost my inspiration its all coming back now and this piece was the last thing on the drawing board.!!
Date: 02/27/12 12:16 am Title: I Think I love you! ;O
it ended just before anything good could happen; just an attraction. decent start though. crazy typos are a bit distracting.
Author's Response: Like I mentioned in the beginning this was just basically the build up to the main point of a scene I actually haven't finished so there are whacky typos everywhere this doesn't really lead anywhere it was a test for this style of writing. Thanks for the critique. (:
Date: 02/26/12 07:05 pm Title: I Think I love you! ;O
Okay haha the ending was so abrupt I was confused xD
Author's Response: Oh yes the ending!! I originally was going to make it longer but lost inspiration half way :P
Date: 02/26/12 12:13 am Title: I Think I love you! ;O
I'm a little confused .-. is this the end or is there more?
Author's Response: No, this is the end(; rnHaha
Date: 02/25/12 04:25 pm Title: I Think I love you! ;O
Fucking loved it, the song was absolutely perfect for it!
Thanks for sharing :)
Author's Response: Thank you!(:
Date: 02/25/12 03:39 am Title: I Think I love you! ;O
very nice! But it totally need a sequel :D
Author's Response: Thank you, but I'm not making a sequel to this I'm making like a series of teasers.
Date: 02/25/12 12:44 am Title: I Think I love you! ;O
OH MY, please do continue, this is hot hot hot, song sug. byz - do you wanna or pornstar dancing, or animal by defleppard
Author's Response: Thank you! rnI'll check them out soon!
Date: 02/24/12 09:13 pm Title: I Think I love you! ;O
i liked it :)
Author's Response: Thankssss!
Date: 02/24/12 06:58 pm Title: I Think I love you! ;O
nice, i like it
Author's Response: Thank you(: