Date: 05/22/12 11:32 pm Title: Bros Before Hoes
I'm glad Tom is standing up to Ria. Maybe if she keeps pushing he will get rid of her. =)
Date: 05/20/12 07:20 pm Title: In Confidence
OMG I hate this chapter ! I mean Ria... God, she's just a ****** for doing this ! I'm so sad for the twins, actually i got tears :(
"Great" chapter though :)
Date: 05/20/12 11:40 am Title: Bros Before Hoes
I had this mischevious little grin on my face, when I read Tom coldly leaving Ria to keep her own company for the night. I can't help it, but she just don't get it in this story and... well, if I could choose, nobody would come between the twins. Ever. Definitely bros before hoes!
I see something nice happening in the next chapter, am I right? I wish for it anyway.
Date: 05/20/12 12:27 am Title: Bros Before Hoes
Awww, it's so obvious that all the twins need are each other! But all these people and situations are getting in the way. I like this story! I like how it's going and how the twins are exploring how well they can live without each other.
Date: 05/19/12 11:26 am Title: Interference
I love this story, and can't help but feel a bit for Ria. I know everyone takes the twin's side on this, but I think if Tom isn't that interested, then he should be more clear, make her stop staying over so much and just be honest, but then, it wouldn't make for such an awesome story, now would it. Great job with this!! One of my favorites that gets posted regularly.
Date: 05/19/12 07:00 am Title: Bros Before Hoes
I couldn't stop smiling. They are just perfect together. And when sentences like “Will you come with me? Sleep in my bed?” come from Bill's mouth, it sounds so cute and super sweet but also so deliciously dirty:-)
What's going to happen next? Sleeping? Talking? Crying? Mutual confessions? Something else?
Update sooooooooooon, can't wait for the next chapter:-)
Author's Response: YAY! They are absolutely perfect for one another. I hate them being apart like this. Isn't it weird how Bill can be all of those things at once? It is cute, sweet, sexy, provocative, and naughty all at once. To me that's just Bill.
Date: 05/18/12 03:51 pm Title: Bros Before Hoes
I love it !!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm happy you're enjoying the story.
Date: 05/18/12 03:45 pm Title: Bros Before Hoes
Ugh when is tom going to find out that Ria was the one that told bill to move out? He needs to dump that dumb tramp! D:
10/10
*****
Author's Response: I know, I hate Ria too, she needs to be out of the picture, like yesterday. The same goes for the real Ria. BTW what does the 10/10 mean at the end of your reviews?
Date: 05/18/12 01:43 pm Title: Bros Before Hoes
Beautiful chapter , it's cute how they ae so happy together, I want twc! *o*
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm a TWC lover myself. I like it in any form, related or not. This is only mu second related story, and the other was a long one shot. I just love Bill and Tom together any way I can get them. haha.
Date: 05/18/12 12:47 pm Title: Bros Before Hoes
so short!!!!! I sue you for so short story, c´mon man, like now it was all getting even more interesting:D please update like... now!!! plz plz, it is remarkable story!!!:D
Author's Response: haha. Sorry it was short, the two subsequent chapters are much longer so I hope they make you happier. haha.
Date: 05/18/12 11:44 am Title: Bros Before Hoes
Brother love. You have the way to make this story sounds really real. Please, keep that up. I'd love to have a little hope
Author's Response: Thank you so much for saying that. I love that you think it seems real, but I hope to god it isn't. I would hate for Ria to be getting between them in real life. I hope that she really is just a beard, a scapegoat so no one knows the twins are together in real life. I would hate to see either of them with anyone else.
Date: 05/18/12 10:47 am Title: Bros Before Hoes
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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perfect perfect just perfect
TuT
sobbing uncontrollably
hahahhaahha
f"#$& awesome chapter after all the pain from last ones TuT
the last line OMG
let me die so beautiful
die die ria you too a little nick hahaha ok no but
just BILL AND TOM JUST twins just twins aahaahahaha
sorry i went crazy ashes
thank you so much for the chapter dying for the next one TuT
Author's Response: Awww, you may need more tissues. haha. I really like Nick. I wish he and Bill could have had more of a relationship, but they just weren't meant to be. It's Bill and Tom all the way, no one else stands a chance in my book.
Date: 05/18/12 03:31 am Title: Bros Before Hoes
I could feel Ria's frustration come through in this chapter. it's a wonder she isn't bald...she must be tearing her hair out wondering just what she has to do to seperate Tom and Bill and get Tom to commit properly to her. I'm glad Tom didn't allow her to intefere with his plans to stay over at Bill's. He's actually really good,firm with her but not nasty. So happy the twins are spending time together. Great last couple of sentences.
Author's Response: I'm happy you're enjoying this so much. I love your reviews because you really see the characters and the situation. Someone actually begged me to make her bald as payback for what she did to the twins, I'm sure that she will eat away at herself without interference from me.
Date: 05/18/12 02:22 am Title: Bros Before Hoes
oh, he want's, alright...;)
Author's Response: haha. He wants to have his brother close again *innocent face*
Date: 05/18/12 01:54 am Title: Bros Before Hoes
Ooooohhh what's gonna happen in that bedroom? ;D Wonderful things, I hope haha
I'm glad that Tom and Bill seem to be reconnecting. And I think Tom is beginning to realize that Ria's been acting weird since Bill left their home, since she wants to speed up the "staying together" process...
Author's Response: I guess it all depends on your definition of wonderful. haha. They miss each other s much, it's nice for me to be able to write situations for them that are a little less tense for them. Ria isn't waiting, she's trying her best to take what she thinks is hers. Silly Ria, Tom will ALWAYS belong to Bill no matter what.
Date: 05/18/12 01:11 am Title: Bros Before Hoes
Great way to begin a new day :) I liked this chapter very much. Next time you could write the whole chapter without Ria ;))) I wouldn't mind it, at all :D
Author's Response: I'm happy you liked this so much. As for a whole chapter without Ria... >_>
Date: 05/18/12 12:07 am Title: Bros Before Hoes
im thinking bill wants to do bad things to tomi LOL
Author's Response: Who doesn't? He makes me drool. haha.
Date: 05/18/12 12:04 am Title: Bros Before Hoes
story continues to be excellent. ria continues to be a whore. well done!
Author's Response: Lol. Technically though, she's not a whore, she isn't sleeping around unlike like another character in one of your stories. haha.
Date: 05/14/12 05:40 pm Title: Settling In
They come in a pair, Ria, okay? Nobody should try to prevend twins calling and texting and being overall number one in each other's lives. It is bittersweet to read how they both try to get separate lives while they shouldn't or even want to. Just come back home, Bill, please?
Author's Response: Exactly, they come in a pair. She doesn't seem to understand how much they really mean to each other.
Date: 05/13/12 04:12 pm Title: Settling In
I really like this story:D Bill and Tom are funny, being so stuck in eachother:) but this is more than understandable. Poor Ria also, she wants Tom for herself so bad:S
Next chap, and please,sooner, be so kind!!!!:D
lav ya, bye!!!!!(K)
Author's Response: We can't always get what we want now can we? Ria may or may not learn that lesson very soon. haha.