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Reviewer: Summer_Crush Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/12 07:27 pm Title: The Truth Always Comes To The Light

OMG this is so cute ! I love the last scene

Reviewer: pinkyth Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/12 05:18 pm Title: The Truth Always Comes To The Light

aaaaah finaly :D  burn riaaaa fuckin bitch >:P
tnx for update ,it was perfect as always!

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/29/12 04:10 pm Title: The Truth Always Comes To The Light

Aww, the last scene... So påretty, so lovely, just the way it should be - twins together and the rest of the world not there. I like it.

SAnd haha, BUSTED, Ris? Farewell, bitch! :P

This has been such a dfun ride, so I'm a bit sad to see it coming to an end soon, but I think the next chapter will be lovely. Welcome back home, guys. :)

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/12 08:26 pm Title: The Truth Always Comes To The Light

Aww, yay! Being forced apart only caused them to get closer together in the end! Like a rubber band, you pull it and let go, and it tangles in on itself more. ^_^ Yay for happy endings! Well, not ending because there's still another chapter and the epilogue, but you know what I mean!

Reviewer: Barbiexoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/12 01:31 pm Title: The Truth Always Comes To The Light

really good:D I like this story, it has excitement and surprises:D

waiting for Thursday

Reviewer: Tinie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/26/12 04:27 pm Title: The Truth Always Comes To The Light

I found great relief here, along with the twins. Very satisfying that they came to find the truth. And Ria had been wearing Tom down, really, for a while, and it feels plausible he would be able to "shrug her off" easily. So wonderful to see them close together in the end, so close, right where they belong.

Reviewer: green_and_blue Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/12 03:15 pm Title: The Truth Always Comes To The Light

Lovely chapter.

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/12 02:28 pm Title: The Truth Always Comes To The Light

Wow, so much has happened in this chapter! I'm kind of blown back, I need to process this and read it again, I think! Bill realized what's not right for him...then he and Tom finally found their way to each other and both discovered what's right for them. That's what I've taken away from this.

It was so, so satisfying to see Tom figure it out and confront Ria over what she'd done. He was so mad, he wasn't gonna give her another chance, she'd done something unforgivable so he cut her off right there. Good for him! It was sweet to see Bill sympathizing with her point of view, at the same time, even if neither of them were going to forgive it. Bill understood where she was coming from. Both those reactions were so true to character for me.

I love love love that last scene. The two of them making the most out of their closeness, everything they are wrapped up in being twins, but also sharing a love beyond words or boundaries. Just beautiful. ♥ Bill is home and what a wonderful thing for both of them!

Reviewer: Phuong Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/12 01:52 pm Title: The Truth Always Comes To The Light

OMFG!!I love this chapter!!! it's so sweet!!

Reviewer: Shibby Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/12 10:59 am Title: The Truth Always Comes To The Light

YAY! I'm so glad that that got sorted with limited drama. Fucking Ria...hah!

LOVED this, can't wait for Thursday!

XD

Reviewer: Eva_Gaya Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/12 10:23 am Title: The Truth Always Comes To The Light

Awwwwwww I love this ! *applause*

Reviewer: MissGiaDarcy Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/12 08:35 am Title: The Truth Always Comes To The Light

I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm glad Bill is finally back!

Reviewer: TimePassed Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/12 06:08 am Title: The Truth Always Comes To The Light

Woah, i wanna know how ria reacts to this

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/12 05:22 am Title: The Truth Always Comes To The Light

This was the most beautiful chapter. I do feel sorry for Nick because he was a nice guy, but he never really stood a chance. I'm so, so happy that Tom told Ria to get lost. And Bill was so sweet, wanting to make sure Tom was certain about breaking up with her, still thinking of his twin's happiness although he must have been aching to have Tom all to himself again. And now they both know that there's no one else for them. Loved Tom's little speech about conjoined twins. Just loved the whole thing.

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/12 04:24 am Title: The Truth Always Comes To The Light

YAY! The truth is out! Tom dumped Ria! He and Bill are reunited! And everything is right with the world! Great chapter XD Can't wait to read the epilogue!

Reviewer: zuzana899 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/12 03:06 am Title: The Truth Always Comes To The Light

Poor Ria >:D. No. I am happy that she is out the way. :D Nice chapter, the scene in bed was beautiful...

Reviewer: nessavonkaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/12 01:52 am Title: The Truth Always Comes To The Light

oooooooooooooHHH MY GOSHHHHHHHHHH
MY HEART
OOH GOOD LORD ALL the feelings
i dont like it I F LOVE IT
EVERYTHING IS PERFEKT FINALLY ohhhhhhh MYYYGOSHHH..................ohh goshh i cant breath OMYYYY crying sobbing Good lord aslkdjasklajsdkalsdja
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OMGGGGGGGGGG
ok calm down calm down
i think i almost faint hahahah
TuT
to much beautiful and perfect TuT i really love it OMGGGGGGGGGGGGG OMG i cant OMGGGGGGGGGGGG
im sorry im such a mess right now
OMG
.............
if i could make a wish i would ask for this to be true OMGGGGGGGGGGGGG OMGGGGGGGG
sorry sorry
im going crazy this is just a beautiful chap
omg i cant believe already the epilogue TuT im going to make an altar for this fic is so f EPIC OMG OMGGGGG
can you believe even my sister read it and she hates TH fiction this is just amazing is one of the best fics i ever read OMGGGGGGGGG
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hahaha ok
now a proper comment sorry about before haha
well mmm
at first i was like OMG they are boyfriends hahaha nick and bill ahah did you mention boyfriends in previous chapters i must re read again cause it really surprise me ahhaa
but if this is true one day i would be really happy for bill i really can picture him with a beautiful boyfriend, not more than him obviously, haha xD well who knows i better shut up silly me xDahaha mmm.
dear lord thankssssssss BILL you finally tell those words and Tom finally question about it OMGGGG i was like yeahhhhh F YEAHHH FINALLY
and when he tells Bill to come home immediately OMG so beautiful alksdjaskd
and LORD hahahha F PHONE F RIA BI@#$% hahaha i swear I scream and scratch my skin when they got interrupted by the phone OMGGGG hahaha xD >u<
and the end nooooo OMGOMGOMG i cant describe well you could imagine me maybe my craziness hahhaha i must read it again its so perfect OMG OGMOG well i shut up now
thank you so muchhhhh AshesPashes you are really an amazing artist i admire you so muchhhhh god bless you
thank you so much

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/12 12:54 am Title: The Truth Always Comes To The Light

in the way??? she dared to refer to bill as being in the way??? god, you gotta let me punch her!

no?

okay, fine.

*settles in to glare for 2 more chapters*

i'm rather fond of the end of chapter cuddling.

Reviewer: ladyfarcly Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/12 12:05 am Title: The Truth Always Comes To The Light

yummie

Reviewer: nessavonkaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/12 01:27 am Title: Bros Before Hoes

PERFEKT END ksladjaskldajsd so amazing chap re reading cause you punish us today hahaha ok no xD
i just will be here pressing F5 constantly in hopes to see that 12 number ahaha
thank you so much for share with us this fantastic chap aksldjaskda and Fic its just amazinggg AshesPashes

Author's Response: I had the chapter all ready to post and totally forgot until about an hour ago and it's way too late to post it. So I will post tomorrow around 10pm EST in the US. That's usually when I like to so I have some time on the top before being buried by the het explosion that seems to happen every night.

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