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Reviewer: Barbiexoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/12 04:00 am Title: Out On The Town

:D I like it



Author's Response: Thanks for liking it, and taking the time to let me know so.

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/12 02:58 am Title: Out On The Town

I'm really liking this so far. Can't wait to read more! XD

Author's Response: I'm happy you're enjoying this. I hope you continue to. I miss your writing. How are you? Haven't seen much of you on twitter as of late.

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/12 12:49 am Title: Out On The Town

*hugs lonely billy*

Author's Response: He doesn't want your hugs, he wants Tom's.

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/12 12:28 am Title: Out On The Town

If I cry for more, it's simply because your chapters tantalize! I understand your reasoning why you don't want to update more than once a week, though. ;_;

Bill has very valid needs and desires! I'm happy to see Tom so supportive of his "growing up" in this sense. He and Tom are sweet together. Interesting that Tom didn't recognize his own jealousy...

Author's Response: He's not jealous, he's just looking out for his brother. ha.

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/26/12 05:51 pm Title: Interference

Interesting. I'm struggling to write twins/Ria fic on my own, but it's really struggling right now. I find this absolutely interesting and I definitely keep reading... This is such a huge topic to write, but you're handeling it well. :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much, that means a lot to me. I really struggled with the balance between her being a bitch, and just being a girl who really craves time alone with her boyfriend. Who wants a chance for things to progress between them but recognizes the obstacles between them. I hope I was successful, and that you continue to enjoy the story. Please keep letting me know what you think.

Reviewer: Tinie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/26/12 04:23 pm Title: Interference

I always love in fics, but always keep being amazed when the twins just don't seem to understand (or do, but don't give a s**t) that their behavior is very boundless. Not only their touching and whispering, but also when Ria had left how Tom went immediately to lie down in Bill's lap. I love it, but I think it's boundless still. This is a promising story, I look forward to the next part!

Author's Response: When you say boundless do you mean they don't have any boundaries around other people? For the twins in this story it is just so natural for them to be close with one another. It's what feels right, and it's easy for them to forget that there are other people they need to be considerate of. I think their world probably does shrink around to just them in real life and they forget that they aren't the only two people in the world.

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/12 03:43 pm Title: Interference

Promising opening chapter. Looking forward to the next one.

Author's Response: I'm happy you liked the first chapter. I hope you keep coming back and keep reviewing.

Reviewer: hexenhasel Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/12 01:41 pm Title: Interference

Great start to the chapter - really enjoyed reading it :) I have to be honest that I'm worried Ria will be portrayed as the shrill, unreasonable girlfriend always putting up a fuss... it isn't easy writing the girl that comes between the twins and not make her the total villian. I love that Bill is sensitive to Tom and Ria's relationship and not just 'whatever, he'll always be mine'. LOL, sorry this got long! I'm looking forward to what is coming next :D *bounce*

Author's Response: It is definitely hard not to turn her into the villain. I hope you see a sort of balance in the way I write her, but when it comes down to it she wants more of Tom and she's going to do what she can to get what she wants. Bill wants his brother to be happy, and if Ria makes him happy he's willing to make the effort to include her and be considerate to their relationship. Lots of stuff to come, that's for sure. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Shibby Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/12 12:48 pm Title: Interference

You already know that I love it! Can't wait for more! XD

Author's Response: *hugs you* thanks Shib, you're the best. I hope you enjoy this.

Reviewer: ChunyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/12 12:34 pm Title: Interference

I'm wondering if Ria will suggest that she and Tom get a place of their own o.o;; Lovely start! :D

Author's Response: *shrugs* Ria definitely wants more private time with Tom, and who can blame her?

Reviewer: Ninel Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/12 11:09 am Title: Interference

hahaha Bill always is and will be 1rst to Tom!!!! hahahahaha see you Ria? :D

Author's Response: hahahaha. Before I had a title I called this story Bros before Hoes. I don't want to give anything away, but the title says it all. hahah.

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/12 09:47 am Title: Interference

Ahhh I'm excited! This came as a surprise, and what a welcome one! Great set-up chapter, I can feel the tension all around Oblivious Tom already, hehe. :D Thanks for writing this! I'm looking forward to seeing how it unfolds. *_*

Author's Response: I really hope you enjoy the story. I've worked really hard on it and I hope it's everything you hoped it would be.

Reviewer: Barbiexoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/12 08:38 am Title: Interference

I liked it :) I need this next chap as quick as you can write! Yeei! I just noticed, today is Wednesday!



Author's Response: I'm happy you like it so far. I've already finished writing the story, now it's about posting and editing it mainly.

Reviewer: Phuong Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/12 02:50 am Title: Interference

Yah, yah, I know you never post a fic unless it was finished (You said that after completing your last update of "Photographs of an American Summer") so, can you plz tell me how long does this one last??? I'm really really into this already!!

Author's Response: This one is 11 chapters, I'm thinking about separating one into two so maybe 12. I hope in a few weeks to be able to switch to two posts a week in about 4 weeks or so.

Reviewer: strssna Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/12 02:48 am Title: Interference

It took me a while to decide if I should click and read or not. To me, it's always twins and other pairings, especially with this Ria thing, just make me really uncomfortable. I guess ridiculously my biggest concern was that she'd be all lovely in this. Well luckily I didn't feel that way, so am very interested in seeing where this is going :) Thanks basically for expandening my horizons.

Author's Response: I am all about the twins myself. I think they only belong with each other. haha. I don't read het, threesomes, Torg, Billshido, Bilorg, none of that (well het if Bill or Tom is a girl and they are still with each other). I loved this prompt and I often wonder what the deal is with Ria and this is my chance to show, to a degree, what I think their relationship is like. Thanks so much for deciding to read it after all.

Reviewer: Phuong Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/12 02:45 am Title: Interference

??? Just A chapter A week??? You've got to kill me!!!!

Author's Response: Sorry, don't mean to kill you. haha. I'm just so busy and for me posting takes a lot of work between a last look through, and answering reviews. I'm really happy you like it though.

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/12 11:30 pm Title: Interference

*pokes you*
off to a promising start...*glares at ria* they need to add her name to the list of characters, cuz in no way is she a "celebrity"

Author's Response: LOL, I know right. And she's not OFC...They'll probably break up before she gets added. haha.

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