Date: 04/09/12 09:28 am Title: Give A Little Bit
It's really sad that the twins are so far apart. I could feel Bill's pain, and poor Tom sensing the distance between them. Both of them feeling unconfortable with the other, even with sharing a cuddle. Ria is such a little bitch, dissuading Tom from approaching Bill and asking what's up because she knows Tom will go crazy if he finds out what she said to his twin. I do like Nick, he seems like a nice guy, but unfortunately I don't think he stands much chance because Bill's heart isn't really into starting a relationship. Another good chapter. Looking forward to the next one.
Author's Response: YES! YES! YES! Stop reading my mind! Haha. I'm so happy someone caught, and mentioned that Ria was trying to keep Tom from forcing Bill into talking about things because it would come out that she was causing all of this unhappiness. Others thought she was concerned for Bill but she totally wasn't. Nick is a nice guy, I like him. We'll see more of him in upcoming chapters.
Date: 04/09/12 05:59 am Title: Give A Little Bit
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So close! He should have just told him!
Loved this, as usual! Can't wait for more!
XD
Author's Response: What fun is it if there isn't a little angst. haha But seriously, it breaks my heart just writing it. I don't want them to be this way with each other...
Date: 04/09/12 04:10 am Title: Give A Little Bit
Oh god, this is going to hurt so bad. >_
Author's Response: It really is, just warning you now.
Date: 04/09/12 02:59 am Title: Give A Little Bit
NO BILL! He almost told him! I can't wait for more! Great chapter XD
Author's Response: Almost...but as they say, close only counts in horseshoes and hand grenades. haha.
Date: 04/09/12 02:07 am Title: Give A Little Bit
Oh, I'm definitely liking this.
It's good to outright hate fictional Ria, sometimes. She's such a meanie here.
Tom, on the other hand, is really sweet and so over-protective of Bill. I can't help but hate fictional Ria a tad bit more.
Thanks for sharing. I'm really enjoying it!
Author's Response: I know, she has had many threats in the reviews. She wants what she wants, and she wants Tom. She's going to do whatever she has to to get him, even if that means breaking the twins up. I'm happy you like it so much so far. Thanks for reading.
Date: 04/09/12 12:34 am Title: Give A Little Bit
The last part is so sad, I had tears! I can't wait for more!!!
Date: 04/09/12 12:26 am Title: Give A Little Bit
The last part is so sad, I had tears! I can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response: *hands you a box of tissues* It was a bit heartbreaking to write as well. I could totally see it in my mind and poor Bill, poor Tom.
Date: 04/08/12 11:29 pm Title: Give A Little Bit
okay, i cannot handle a pouting tom! he misses his twin? *dies*
*continues to glare at ria*
Author's Response: I bet Tom knows when to throw a pout or two Bill's way. haha.
Date: 04/08/12 03:18 pm Title: Keeping Secrets
ahh can you please please please update the next chapter?? And let Bill tell Tom what's going on?? I can't stand this haha. Love your story! :)
Author's Response: I'm happy you're enjoying the story and excited enough to want more, but if I'm not posting I'm usually really busy or still tweaking a chapter and it will be up as soon as I'm done with it. I hope you enjoy the update I just posted. Hope to hear what you think of it.
Date: 04/05/12 06:33 pm Title: Keeping Secrets
This is breaking my heart. No, not like this. Stupid, stupid Bill for making this mistake. It's really heartbreaking. But that is also a good things. Strong emotions are always good.
Author's Response: I'm happy its bringing out such strong feelings in you. It breaks my heart to write it and I always hope people feel as strongly as I do when I write it. I wrote a scene for another story the other night and I was holding back tears. I had to have someone read it for me to be sure I expressed it as well on paper as it was playing in my mind.
Date: 04/05/12 06:22 pm Title: In Confidence
Oh no, you just didn't, Ria?
I really likle the way you make things so complicated whern they don't talk. I understand both of the boys really well in this. But damn, my heart will break iof they move to live on their own!
Author's Response: Oh yes she did. I'm happy that the characters come out so clearly for you. I hope you can understand them each a bit, and what motivates them.
Date: 04/05/12 05:56 pm Title: Testing The Waters
Sorry it took me awhile to read these chapters. I've been out from THF for couple of weeks.
Anyway, Tom is so cute in his oblivious way. Things that are obvious to him are not necessary normal to us. I feel a bit sorry for Ria, but tbh, not much. Tom is not meant to be alone and we know it. :)
Author's Response: I feel a little bad for Ria as well just because she wants him so much, she wants to be with him and have a future, but she will never have all of him. Not with Bill in the way.
Date: 03/30/12 05:34 pm Title: Keeping Secrets
Love this story. I feel sorry for Bill trying to do what he feels is right, and also for Tom sensing that something is wrong but not knowing what it is. I can't imagine what Tom's going to do when he finds out what Ria said to Bill.
Author's Response: *zips lips* I hate responding to reviews because I always want to answer them with spoilers. haha. I'm going to shut my mouth and say, "thank you so much and please keep reviewing" before I ruin the story. haha.
Date: 03/30/12 01:11 pm Title: Keeping Secrets
Hmmmm, well I hope that the twins get things sorted out from this misunderstanding.
Author's Response: ...I don't know what to say without giving things away. haha. Thanks for the reviews though, I always want to know what people think.
Date: 03/30/12 01:05 pm Title: Keeping Secrets
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Sorry you had to wait so long, but it's up now. XOXO. I miss your work. I hope you're well.
Date: 03/30/12 12:57 pm Title: In Confidence
Aww! Poor Bill! Ria's a bitch!
Author's Response: Isn't she though. hahaha.
Date: 03/30/12 06:37 am Title: Keeping Secrets
Oh poor Tomi he doesn't know anything , Bill shud tell him what ria said!
can't wait to read what happens next :3
Author's Response: I feel bad for them both really. Bill wants to tell Tom so badly, but he feels like he can't just yet.
Date: 03/30/12 12:31 am Title: Keeping Secrets
Aww, I knew Tom couldn't be that dense. He's such a sweetheart, taking care of Bill like that. The last sentence of this chapter is so poignant - he's doing his best to give Tom what he wants. ;_; My poor boys, each of them wanting to do right by each other, with this terrible misunderstanding cleaving right between them. This is definitely building up to a tense situation!
Author's Response: I couldn't have said it better myself, this really sums up the whole story so far. I really love to build the tension, Angsty-Drama should be my middle name. haha.
Date: 03/29/12 11:26 pm Title: Keeping Secrets
I really can't wait for the next chapter!! Awesome job so far :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much. It's so nice to hear that people are enjoying the story.
Date: 03/29/12 11:23 pm Title: Keeping Secrets
stupid boys! they need to talk everything out! and then ria needs to get punched in the face!
Author's Response: for the 100th time, I'm not writing you into the story so you can kick Ria's ass.