Date: 11/02/12 10:43 am Title: 19. Lost
Hm, I don't like how she treats him in the first part here. But I do understand her situation when he denied being her boyfriend. Complicated, right? Because they made a lot of mistakes. Being so close as they were should have made it easier for them to spit out the truth. That's what I think...
Author's Response: Sometimes it is easier to spit out the truth when you're so close, my best friend is a guy and we have a nest of trust, but sometimes when you're so close you worry about ruining things, and sometimes you think that you're saying or doing things because you're attracted to them and not just because you're close friends x
Date: 11/02/12 10:20 am Title: 18. Breaking
Poor guys,never left alone ha ha. There must be a catch here...
Date: 11/02/12 09:52 am Title: 17. Pretences
Oh, good to hear that! I mean the mutual "I love you". Yes, OOOHHH...
Date: 11/02/12 08:45 am Title: 16. Bridges
1. Awesome food fight, need the ending though! 2. Tom softens? Good news! BTW, I love how Bill protects Effie all the time...Oh, you had such a bad day? Of course I'm too late to ask, but I hope it wasn't so bad...Like your hospital visits too. Hope you feel better now.
Date: 11/02/12 07:30 am Title: 15. Chances
Good start. I'm freaking patient here, you should appreciate that, because I'm actually dancing on my toes to see what happens!
Date: 11/02/12 07:05 am Title: 14. Tactics
I loved how Bill has the nerve to stay hidden and ask her that question afterwards. Why does someone have to interrupt them each time? Argh!
Date: 11/02/12 07:03 am Title: 14. Tactics
Huh...? Who's that?!
Date: 11/02/12 06:33 am Title: 13. Bombshells
Love that he's trying. But her? Honestly, isn't she a bit too stubborn...?
Date: 11/02/12 06:04 am Title: 12. Invisibility
So much pain and noone sees it?! The love I mean. Hm, they must both have a problem ha ha. Let's see what happens next...
Date: 11/02/12 05:34 am Title: 11. Rewind
No. Not lost, not again! Oh, come on!I must go further, I'm an impossibly optimistic person, or maybe just scared of bad endings?
Date: 11/02/12 05:11 am Title: 10. Morning
Oh God, what a beautiful way of losing your mind...
Date: 11/02/12 04:49 am Title: 9. Dependency
I like this more and more. You know, sex scenes have alwatys been tricky, I've always said that they can make or destroy a story. Yours do not happen in strange places or funny ways, and still are so very hot. Simple and warm, just great. I like how everything comes out of your fingers.
Author's Response: :* thank you...my fingers are pretty impressive at times lol x
Date: 11/01/12 12:32 pm Title: Jigsaws
yey! finally.. been waiting so looooooong.... :)
Author's Response: :) sorry!!! Hope you liked it x
Date: 11/01/12 11:07 am Title: 8. Storms
Okay, I'm kinda mixing the flashbacks with the present, but I'm fighting to get things clear. I'm going further now, too curious!
Author's Response: Oh, I hope its not too confusing! Sorry if it is, I get a bit over excited with flashbacks :) x
Date: 11/01/12 10:48 am Title: 7. Distance
oh my, I always cry at moments like that, but only if they are well put into words.Which is the case. Now I finally have my answer. Well, half of it, because I still need to see why Bill never looked for her. Tom probably didn't tell him, but he could do some research himself...hm, let's check the next update.
Date: 11/01/12 10:12 am Title: 6. Patches
Poor soul...So tender, so hot, so perfectly fit for Bill character. I've written about him and I've read stories about him, so you can trust me when I say "your" Bill fits so well in his real skin, that's one of the things I like most in a TH fiction. Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, it really puts a smile on my face when I read things like this because I sometimes worry I'm going too far down the Prince Charming path with his character.....anyway, thank you for making my bad day at work so much better x
Date: 11/01/12 07:13 am Title: 5. Work
friends? ha ha, of course they are more. i wonder what bill did to make effie so angry. can't wait to find out!
Date: 11/01/12 06:51 am Title: 4. Truths
oh God, I have a suspicion, but I'll get to the next chap, I won't let it develop, it's so rare that I get to read chap after chap from a story I like. That's all now, I need to hurry and read more!
Date: 11/01/12 06:34 am Title: 3. Falling
I love the childhood flahbacks, they show so nicely how the love was built from their friendship. At first I thought it was stupid from them not to understand what the other one felt for all those years, but now it's clear. The only thing I still don't get is why six years? Why were they separated for so long? But I guess I'll see later. Good work!
Author's Response: 6 years is such a long time but, sometimes people need to grow and such, I'm so glad you're enjoying it x
Date: 11/01/12 06:09 am Title: 2. Collision
Great! I don't know why I haven't read this before, especially that this pairing has become rare now...Sorry. It's delicate, intense and well written.
Author's Response: :) thank you very much, and better late than never I always say ^.^ x