Date: 04/30/24 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
You’re super gross that you would write something like this about the most adorable boys on this earth even if it’s fiction, like not even remotely explaining jr either or solving it in the end, entirely gross
Date: 04/30/24 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
You’re super gross that you would write something like this about the most adorable boys on this earth even if it’s fiction, like not even remotely explaining jr either or solving it in the end, entirely gross
Date: 08/04/13 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Poor Bill... Tom is a true monster here.
Date: 02/25/12 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh... I'm left with very confused feelings about this. It's not a bad thing. It's like the partys where Bill - even if hesitant and scared - liked it and wanted Tom were so hot and Tom guiding him almost gently... and then forcing, raping, mean Tom made me feel a bit uncomfortable. So eventually I find this both hot and sad. Weord feeling... But very well written, good fic! Age difference and virgin!twin are always hot with them :)
Date: 02/22/12 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
I rea it again judt had to and please make this into a story its so amazingly good it still made my skin crawl. :)
Date: 02/22/12 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
So sad, Bill's wonderful dreams shattered when he's raped by the brother he adores. Great writing.
Date: 02/22/12 09:25 am Title: Chapter 1
damn that's crazy!!! i feel bad for Bill! you should do a sequel, seriously!!!
Date: 02/22/12 03:27 am Title: Chapter 1
oh gott poor bill i wanna beat tom up for doing that
Date: 02/21/12 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh Shizzle!! Poor little Bill. That was intense. But also really interesting, and I think you wrote it well. The plot you came up with for this was really intriguing, but also heartbreaking. It makes me want to give Bill a big hug. I want to know more about what happens later in this fic! :) I liked reading this. Thanks for writing something ballsy like this. :)
Date: 02/21/12 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow! intense! more?? there has to be!!!
Date: 02/21/12 11:57 am Title: Chapter 1
HEY it's not finished yet! more we want more D:<
Date: 02/21/12 11:18 am Title: Chapter 1
Sequel please :OOO PLEASE!!!
Date: 02/21/12 10:57 am Title: Chapter 1
this is sad!
u should make a sequel!
Date: 02/21/12 08:16 am Title: Chapter 1
nooooooooooooo, u can't end it there u little cock tease!lol...seriously I love that tom or whoever that guy was, was older and BIGGER than bill, u have material to write a short story (kicked the ball to ur field)really as perverted as this sounds I love it and at least u could finish it for real...or a sequel will be great too...please?