Date: 02/18/12 12:51 pm Title: 1/1
So very hot! Love jealous!Tom so much and the end results to their argument were very, ahem, satisfying! ;)
Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad you thought it was hot! Jealous Tom is fun to write and they both sure enjoyed the results, for sure. ;) Thanks for your review!
Date: 02/18/12 12:24 pm Title: 1/1
OMG. I will never be able to look at the picture of Bill again without visualising this bathroom scene. So amazingly hot.
Author's Response: I'm glad to keep that image fixed in your head ;D Thank you!
Date: 02/18/12 12:21 pm Title: 1/1
*_* So HOT! My god, can't think of something coherent to say. Possesive!Tom is always a turn on and this one was just perfect. I love the plot, love your writing as usual. Always the best surprise to see a new fic from you =) Liked that they didn't fuck but it was still so intense. And the pictures... wow. Love how you incorporate the twins persona on the app. This one-shop feels realistic! Thanks for posting =D
Author's Response: Thank youuuu~ Oh yes, I adore Possessive!Tom asserting his claim on Bill. ;) So happy you enjoyed it! That was definitely something I wanted to be realistic about, they're too careful to actually do that in a public bathroom, haha. The best compliment is hearing you thought it was realistic! Thanks for your review. ♥
Date: 02/18/12 08:55 am Title: 1/1
This is GREAT ! :-)
Bill made me laugh at times mwahaha he was such a teaser xD
But they're both so cute (in a way) ^^
I think i love this App
Author's Response: Yay, thank you! Oh yes, I fully believe Bill can be a tease like that. XD But totally cute together, right? Glad you enjoy this app-inspired story~
Date: 02/18/12 06:36 am Title: 1/1
nice story!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 02/18/12 06:10 am Title: 1/1
lol...well, that's definitely a happy take on ria, haha...damn, hot stuff. hottttt, u know what this makes me think of? how awesome it's gonna be when the kits finally get down and dirty xD nudge nudge
Author's Response: Or willful blindness on my part. ;) I'm glad you enjoyed it! Ohhh...yes, I've started working on kits again, just finished another chapter this week! Thanks for the nudges. XD
Date: 02/18/12 03:57 am Title: 1/1
Very hot argument in the bathroom and it was a thrill they didn't 'do' it for real.
I liked how Tom was indeed pointing out what annoyed him about Bill's appearance when in reality it turned him on.
Author's Response: Glad you liked all of those things about the story! ♥
Tom is always knocking Bill's appearance (and vice versa) so I feel like there has to be a reason behind it, you know? ;)
Date: 02/17/12 11:29 pm Title: 1/1
Wow, that was hhhoooooootttt xoxo
Date: 02/17/12 11:29 pm Title: 1/1
Wow, that was hhhoooooootttt xoxo
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 02/17/12 10:40 pm Title: 1/1
This is one of my favorite fills on the kink meme. I know I drooled all over myself in my comment there, but this just pushed all my buttons. *___*
I love arrogant Bill snarking on Tom who is all angry and possessive. The way you got in Bill's head was amazing and realistic. From the pics and comments on the app, I can totally see this happening. (In my dirty imagination anyway...)
Every detail you used, especially Tom's jealousy masked by insulting Bill's outfit, was outstanding. Then we get the really good part, with the humping and uhnnnnn. You always write smut that's so sensual and vivid, and this frottage was fantastic. Add the thought of Tom taking photos during and what that would capture and you pretty much fried my brain. Even critical Bill can't find fault, another perfect detail.
If just ONE of the twins' photos like this would leak, it could fuel us fans forever! :D In the meantime, we can get by with more incredible fic from you!
Author's Response: That means a lot to me, and I was so so happy you commented on it! ♥ Like I told you, I totally wanted to favorite your tweet plugging the story. ;)
That's definitely something I strive for, the "hey, that SO could happen" vibe, and I'm really pleased that they seemed so realistic in the story.
Tom is always knocking on Bill's outfits - I feel like there has to be a reason for it ;) And, ohh, Tom taking photos of Bill at the height of his passion...omg want so much. *drools uselessly*
I'm glad this is a good substitute for what we ought never to have. ;D
Date: 02/17/12 10:28 pm Title: 1/1
*drools all over keyboard*
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! :D
Date: 02/17/12 09:52 pm Title: 1/1
Thank you for inserting somewhat of a story with the smut. I never knew the term "beard" until I read this and urbandictioanried it. The bitchy banter between Bill and Tom really created the mood for this, and I love that instead of real sex, they just sort of did an imitation of that instead (I know there's a weird word for that). Somehow that was sexier, plus more realistic for where they were. Great job and thanks!
Author's Response: I do like there to be a bit of substance even with PWP stories! :) Glad you enjoyed the mood, and the practicality of the smut ;) Thanks for your review!
Date: 02/17/12 09:48 pm Title: 1/1
I LOVE insecure-possessive Tom. It's so cute and sweet and...Just really adorable XD Well done, Fyredancer-san ^-^ There was one grammatical mistake... somewhere near the top... I don't remember what it was, but the word started with an "M." I'm sorry I don't remember the mistake =/ (The rest of the story made me forget with it's awesomeness XD). Anyway, awesome job on this, and I can't wait to see what you come out with next ^-^
Author's Response: And he's quite insecure and possessive here! ;) I'm pleased you enjoyed it so much and thought it was awesome, thank you!
Date: 02/17/12 09:39 pm Title: 1/1
loveing this ^^
Author's Response: Thank you! :D