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Reviewer: CrimsonClaudia Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/13 01:32 pm Title: Morning

you might wanna cheack something lol/
Tom and Bill are not brothers in this story and they bearly know eachother.

Also, it is not long, and not very full of action, just something I wanted to put in words.

Tom lied next to Bill, who had just awoke. Sun was shinig between curtains and it was terribly cold. Bill had been sleeping like an angel. Bill sit up and looked Tom sweetily. He didnīt see, whether his brotherīs eyes were closed or not. It seemed like he was sleeping, so Bill stood up and walked to kitchen.He was hungry like hell and his stomach crowled. Tom watched him walking. His brotherś hips moving, turned him on. He heard Bill making coffee and he tried to get back to sleep again.

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/15/12 04:32 am Title: Morning

nice story

Author's Response:

thank you!

Reviewer: onion5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/15/12 03:06 am Title: Morning

Aw! That's sweet but a really sad ending because Bill obviously kinda loves Tom and he's not going to see him again! d'aww! Awesome work :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!:D

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