Date: 03/13/12 04:13 am Title: Part Five
GAH! I seriously couldn't breath for almost the entire chapter! From the second Bill disappeared up until the very last line. Please please pleeeease get the back to the camp safely or I just might mad!
Date: 03/13/12 03:28 am Title: Part Five
Amazing.................
Date: 03/13/12 03:15 am Title: Part Five
I am so glad that Tom found Bill. I love this story, so so very much, btw. I am sure I've been quite out of it, and haven't told you thus far, but I do.
Date: 03/13/12 03:09 am Title: Part Five
-happy crys- yay he found billa ^^
Date: 03/13/12 02:40 am Title: Part Five
I think we are connected with some sort of ESP. I was just saying, "I would love if Kish updated tonight" and you did. This isn't the first time this has happened either. I'm feeling lightheaded because I held my breath through 80% of this chapter. I love brave Bill. And I love it even more that Tom went out to find him. When Tom almost killed that guy I had my hand over my mouth whimpering. I'm such an idiot. I seriously forgot where I was. This was so good and so worth staying up extra late. I know you're busy but I hope you can update again soon.
Date: 03/13/12 02:19 am Title: Part Five
Oh dear god, Kish. I am reading this on no sleep before work...I think my heart stopped quite a few times along the way. I reached the end though and no point going to sleep NOW but...I swear, I'm going to bawl if they are separated against past this point! I don't think my heart could take it. This was enough agony of separation.
Date: 03/07/12 09:40 pm Title: Part Four
I love this story so far. I'm glad its gone on longer than you originally anticipated. I look forward to more.
Date: 03/05/12 01:18 pm Title: Part Four
oh, the suspense!!!! i hope its nothing too bad!!!! :O
Date: 03/05/12 02:43 am Title: Part Four
Nnnnngh it's hard to hate plot twists when they're written so well. I love love love this story though, and I'm always excited to see there's been an update =] Seriously, it's incredibly well written and I LOVE how you've written Bill's character, so spunky and relatable (for Tom) and Tom is just so timid and adorable and.. and.. squee! But really though, if you kill one of them.. I might cry. Scratch that, I will cry.
Date: 03/04/12 06:14 pm Title: Part Four
Yes please do let the story takes its own pace, I really don't mind reading more of it =D The first kiss, hidden by the horses was so sweet and romantic. I really loved that. And the whole chapter. Should I be worried for them now? I really hope they'll be safe. This story is brilliant.
Date: 03/04/12 04:20 pm Title: Part Four
I try to make this a favorite again but it's only possible once. You deserve so much more than my brief stuttering. I'm sailing on a blissful, beautiful cloud as I'm reading. Still I'm becoming fearful. The warnings, that you ask us to condider... The impending war...for a short while I was afraid that Bill might just play with Tom, but then he gave him the heart... I hope I'm wrong about that D: If you originally planned to kill Bill in the war, I hope with all my heart that you for some reason change your mind and keep him/them both alive. But I can only hope. They are so precious to me, to us all... And you write like a goddess. Since I write myself I know the challenges, and I know it takes such skill and hard work to make something as crystal clear and perfectly flowing like this. You hold a golden pen in your hand, thank you for sharing with us.
Date: 03/04/12 03:25 pm Title: Part Four
This is a AMAZING story.....please keep writing and keep Captain Bill safe....:)
Date: 03/04/12 02:56 pm Title: Part Four
O.o what next what next?
Date: 03/04/12 11:55 am Title: Part Four
they kissed!! *squees and awes while melting! this fic is pulling me in more and more with every update you make on it. i hope that nothing bad happens to tom and bill that pulls them apart from each other forever. that would be tragic.
Date: 03/04/12 11:21 am Title: Part Four
Ahhhh nooooo *tears out hair and makes incoherent noises*
Why why why why why ;----------------; if you hurt either of them Kish I swear to all that is twins I will...do something really mean D: or cry DDD:
Ahh but the kisses and the cuddles and Biiiilll and will Tom ever play his song for him? Beautiful chapter was beautiful, incoherent Ghostie is incoherent ;-;
Date: 03/04/12 09:35 am Title: Part Four
Awesome!!!!!! I loved this chapter so much! Thanks for updating!
Date: 03/04/12 07:13 am Title: Part Four
They're so sweet! But now I'm worried. ;-;
Date: 03/04/12 05:32 am Title: Part Four
nice chapter!
i hope bill well be ok
an i cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: 03/04/12 03:14 am Title: Part Four
AHHHH THIS CHAPTER
ALL THE FEELINGS
You're like this...giant teasy tease. Sobbing. From the depths of humiliation to the heights of rapture to the brutal uncertainty of war. I'm going to pull my hair out!
Date: 03/04/12 02:12 am Title: Part Four
I was kind of hoping that this fic would gloss over the war part. I'm as scared as Tom is!