Date: 04/11/12 04:25 am Title: Part Six
|*blows air into her eyes*
I'm not crying, I swear!
The tenderness and love between them just...makes me want to read this forever. Oh Kish, how is is possible that you make me hold my breath, just as Tom himself does every time his Captain is near? I'm so HAPPY that they found each other and that it was Tom himself that found him. The bit with the locket at the end here REALLY got to me and how Bill wants to have Tom's picture taken. It may be premature, but it's the rough promise of a future and in my heart of hearts, I do hope they get to achieve that future, together.
Date: 04/11/12 03:39 am Title: Part Six
I'm so happy to see you've updated! I loved that they got to have some kisses in this chapter. I'm
So happy Tom found him. Gus has barely said 10 words total and I love him. He's such an amazing friend. But he's observant, he knows things he isn't vocalizing, but it's good that he keeps his mouth shut and just gives support. I'm really excited to see what happens next and I love the new banner. Ghostie has really captured them both.
Date: 04/04/12 03:28 pm Title: Part Five
I love this story. Please update soon?
Date: 04/01/12 07:14 pm Title: Part One
miss this story, it is so fantastic. i hope you are able to update soon!
Date: 03/27/12 02:58 am Title: Part One
please don't abandon this wonderful story! or if you have a writers block, I will cross my fingers and hope for inspiration. Right now I log on every morning just looking for and update to this story. As you can see it crawled riiiight under my skin :)
Date: 03/14/12 07:15 pm Title: Part Five
Oh wow. What an intense and incredible chapter. Seriously, you are SO talented. The way you wrote this chap made me feel everything Tom felt. And that last paragraph? Genius. Gave me chills. Thank you so much for the update!
Date: 03/14/12 05:04 pm Title: Part Five
i am glad tom found bill!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: 03/14/12 02:04 pm Title: Part Five
had to hold my breath at the end a little. good job with this story!
Date: 03/14/12 01:49 am Title: Part Five
Oh my....so much running through my mind as to what can happen next!
Date: 03/14/12 01:32 am Title: Part Five
Oh my....so much running through my mind as to what can happen next!
Date: 03/14/12 12:38 am Title: Part Five
Tom always finds Bill. *smug*
Date: 03/13/12 10:02 pm Title: Part Five
AWWW!!!!! I love the ending!!!!!
Date: 03/13/12 07:40 pm Title: Part One
O.M.G. I don't think I can wait another week for an update; this one just about freakin' killed me! Heart in my throat for most of the chapter, thinking about things that happen in the fog of war.
Amazing writing, Kish! Please update soon!
Date: 03/13/12 04:53 pm Title: Part One
This chapterhas done it,here's a revievv! I vvas vvondering vvhen the vvar vvould come crashing back. Or even crashing at all! It vvas all to happy for being at vvar! I'm so fucking glad Tom found Bill! I vvas living this chapter so much,thank you for vvriting it!
Sorry about my vv,the right key is broken ;)
Date: 03/13/12 03:40 pm Title: Part Five
Phew! Bill is safe. I'm glad he's safe for his sake, but also for poor Tom's sake! War sucks.
Date: 03/13/12 01:40 pm Title: Part Five
Holy crap, your writing is magical. A lot of authors try to write suspense on this site and it frequently falls flat, just a little bit. But wow, I was holding my breath (metaphorically, for the most part) this whole chapter =O
Soo relieved at the end.
Date: 03/13/12 07:54 am Title: Part Five
You had me crying there for a second! DX But I loved every second of it
Date: 03/13/12 07:52 am Title: Part Five
*gasps with gratitude* Oh, oh, oh. Brilliant comment as always -- just... OH!!!