this was soo sad. this is why people shouldnt juge who you love it can fuck you up badly. i can't stop crying  i loved it thank you for writing it :)

Hmm, interesting. Good idea with the plot. I think it's sad however that they didn't run off and die together. I think they both could have jumped off a rooftop hilding hands. I feel like them dying separately is more appropriate after having been separated from eachother for a year by their mom, and because they can't live without the other so they both choose their 1-yr anniversary to commit suicide. That just makes a bit more sense to me. Anyways, other than that (and a few typos) I liked this story. :) Oh, I should also say that I completely skipped and didn't read the song lyrics, I think I breaks up the story unnecessarily. Well done on this fic. It was good to read, flowed well, and it kept me hooked to find out how the twins end up sexing n then dead. It's a great tragedy for V-day!! :)