Date: 06/29/12 11:00 pm Title: Lost in this Moment
keep going!!!!! trina HAS to tell tom!!!!!!! i love it so far :)
Author's Response: Yay!!! I"m glad that you do! I'll work as fast as I can on this! :)
Date: 06/28/12 07:50 pm Title: Lost in this Moment
When I write anything, I'm always thinking that it's total shit, but then people say it's good. We are most definitely our own worst critics.
I know it's easier said than done, but you really shouldn't worry. You are a wonderful writer and in the end, it is your story. If people don't like what happens, than that's really unfortunate. I have a story where there have been a few people die, and many readers have said they are done reading anymore because of that. It's hard, but at the same time, it's how I see things happening. Same goes with this story. You know what you want to happen and have a plan (I assume you do anyways), and you can't always make everyone happy.
I can't help but call her coffee-shop-girl lol I'm glad that me calling her that, makes your day =D I'm not gonna lie, I'm probably going to keep calling her that LOL
Have a great one, hun! =D
Author's Response: Sometimes I have a plan. Sometimes I wing it. lol It makes life more fun that way! And I'm totally ok with you call her that. Seriously, it's awesome. I don't know why you would ever want to stop calling her that! haha I have to give you props, though. I'm not sure I could kill off any of my characters. I like having them all around to play with. If I did kill someone off, I'd most likely forget and then they'd show up in a later chapter and people would get super confused. lol I'd have to be like 'April Fools!...maybe?' haha
Date: 06/27/12 10:14 pm Title: Lost in this Moment
YAY!! THEY'RE ENGAGED!!! The proposal was beautiful! I'm not going to lie, I shed a few tears. Beautiful, hun, absolutely beautiful!!
And, YAY TOM DIDN'T BRING COFFEE-SHOP-GIRL!! lol I actually thought he wasn't going to bring her.
Well shit, is right! lol I cannot believe it ended like that! Ugh! I wanted some Tom/Trina action. Even if it was them talking. Maybe even Trina finally telling him how she feels lol Although, it might not be a good idea to tell him while he's intoxicated haha
I think I love this story more and more every time you post a chapter. It's so damn good! I feel like I'm right there, like a fly on the wall, taking it all in.
I cannot wait for the next chapter!! Eeek! I'm so looking forward to what's to come =D Thanks for the update, hun!
Author's Response: Awwwww! I'm really glad that you liked the proposal. I say it for practically every chapter but: there's always something I'm worried people won't like. I guess we're our own worst critics, huh. But yeah, that was the plan all along: coffee shop girl wouldn't be there ;) I love how you keep calling her that even though she has a name. It pretty much makes my day. I'm really glad that you liked the chapter and I'm even happier that you're so excited for the next one! :D hurray!!!
Date: 06/27/12 04:25 pm Title: Lost in this Moment
please update soooon pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease!!!!!
loooooved the chapter :):*
Author's Response: Haha yay! Glad you liked it. :) I'll update as soon as I can! I promise!!
Date: 06/27/12 04:08 pm Title: Lost in this Moment
Awwwww. So cute! But now I'm going to die in anticipation to see what happens with Tom and Trina.
Author's Response: Haha No dying! :P I do not approve of this plan. But I will update as fast as I can so that you don't have to deal with the anticipation. :D
Date: 06/23/12 08:59 am Title: Some Nights
this actually made me cry. you can't leave it there, you must update asap.
Author's Response: Oh no!! I'm sorry! I didn't meant to make anyone cry! I'll update as fast as I can :)
Date: 06/22/12 08:04 pm Title: Some Nights
OMG! You little shit LOL Even though I knew Trina was probably dreaming or whatever, I still can't believe you! I was all smiley and shit when I read this and then, you...you broke my heart
Not really, but yeah =D
I got so emotional when reading the last part. I just wanted to cry for Trina. Damn, Tom is a douche! I sure hope he doesn't bring coffee-shop-girl (Yeah, I know her name is Alexa, but I don't like her lol) to the dinner. Not only will he be upsetting Bill, but making Trina feel much worse. Ugh, I can't believe it lol
I have to say, good on you for pulling my leg (and probably many others lol). I for sure thought Trina was going to say it and then I was thrown for a total loop. I was thinking that the girl would be there, but that was when 'day dream Trina' showed up at Tom's. I wasn't expecting it for real.
This makes me sad. Tom's got some explaining to do. He's hot and cold. So confusing and I understand Trina's frustration and her not saying anything about her feelings. It's like Tom has this Alexa chick as a back up for when Trina doesn't do what he wants.
I'm rambling, lol. I just have so much to say HAHA
Anyways, I am SO looking forward to the next chapter. Have a great weekend, hun!
Author's Response: LOL I'm sorry. Sorta. I do like that you called me a little shit. I call everyone that! lol I apologize for making you emotional. And for throwing you for a loop. You know I have to, though! It's how I do things. If I didn't, you wouldn't love me as much as you do. ^_^ At least, that's what I tell myself. Just in case. However, I DID warn everyone not to hate me. Lol I knew this was going to cause a riot, but I had to do it anyway. I actually had that little dream sequence part written up during the second part of the story...hehe oh well. I'm not giving any more away because it's all too important! :) Sorry. lol also, I like it when you ramble and leave long comments. It makes my day so much sweeter. ^_^ I like reading long comments. When people rant, it makes me happy. And I WILL have a good weekend! You better too!
Date: 06/22/12 05:04 pm Title: Some Nights
Oh my God.. I hate you.. that was so mean. I should've known it was too good to be true.. and the way Tom was acting.? That should've been a dead give away. God I hate you so much right now.. but I still love you. Lol. I can't wait for the dinner. I have a feeling a lot of shit is about to go down. Shit is about to hit the fan.. and all them other cliche phrases about a time like this. Haha. Can't wait.!! x)
Author's Response: Awww I am sad that you hate me. Lol also, you're right. A lot of shit is about to happen. You'll see. I promise it'll be good though lol
Date: 06/22/12 04:22 pm Title: Don't Ever Let It End
I guess updating now works too. Lmao.
Author's Response: I do what I can lol :)
Date: 06/22/12 04:20 pm Title: Don't Ever Let It End
Oh my God.. so many things I can't wait for.. I don't think I can name them all. Well I can but.. it'd be a really long list. Lol. And I'm glad SOMEONE is getting as upset over the whole situation as I am. You go Bill.!! Rip off their heads if they don't agree.!! Haha. I love it. I can't wait for the next chapter. So curious about which song BVB is going to do too. Update soon please. xD
Author's Response: Haha I'm sorry you can't wait. Lol and I'm glad that you like Bill being mad. I like it when Bill is mad. Its funny to me haha ;)
Date: 06/22/12 03:38 pm Title: Some Nights
that is a clif hanger :(
what the hell????
update soooooon :)
pleeeeeeeeeeeease!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm sorry for the cliff hanger! Lol but I asked you not to hate meeee lol love you!
Date: 06/19/12 02:58 am Title: Don't Ever Let It End
loved it!
Date: 06/19/12 02:57 am Title: Don't Ever Let It End
loved it!
Date: 06/18/12 09:20 pm Title: Don't Ever Let It End
Next chapter is the proposal, right? Trina better knock 'Em dead with her outfit (well maybe only Tom and not in the literal sense lol) I'm so glad Bill said No to coffee shop girl attending with Tom. I hope Trina goes stag as well.
I think Trina needs to not think about telling Tom how she feels, but just do it. No point in prolonging it (and I'm not just saying that because I want her to tell Tom lol). I do wonder if Trina would say how she feels if Tom says something first. Hmm, I just don't know.
I'm glad to see some more of Andy. He livens things up a bit lol I never know what to expect in this story and I think that's why I love it so much! You keep me on my toes lol
Have a great week, Hun =]
Author's Response: The proposal is NOT in the next chapter. But it is very, VERY soon. You're incredibly close on your count! Congrats! Lol I'm really glad that you like having Andy around along with the fact that you can't predict everything. :D It makes me feel happy about myself a bit. haha yay! I hope you have a great week, too! I always love it when you comment. You're always so nice. :) So thank you!
Date: 06/18/12 06:06 pm Title: Don't Ever Let It End
So this means that Trina will fess up about loving Tom soon, right!? =D
Author's Response: Lol yes yes. Quite soon. No worries. ;) couple chapters max. Promise. Lol
Date: 06/18/12 04:21 pm Title: Don't Ever Let It End
cant wait for moooore :)
please update sooooon :)
Author's Response: Haha no worries there! I definitely will! Thanks!
Date: 06/14/12 10:54 pm Title: Coffin
Omg.!!! This is pissing me off.!! I swear if I was one of the bystanders I would've bitch slapped both of them by now. And then I would've locked them in a room until everything came out in the open and everybody was happy. Then I would run off with Gustav. Lol. I hope this gets resolved VERY soon. I just want Trina and Tom to be happy. To become a dynamite again. Haha. Get it.? T.N.T.? Lmao.
On a side note, I meant to tell you this sooner but, have you ever heard the song She Ain't You by Chris Brown.? Every time I hear that song I think of Hey Jealousy when Tom was with Giselle but was missing Trina. Every single time I hear it I automatically think of that. Lol.
Author's Response: Awwwwww! I love that you think of my story when you hear that song! That's awesome! It makes me super happy!!! I'm sorry that they're taking forever. I promise it'll happen soon though.
Date: 06/14/12 09:30 pm Title: Coffin
Wow! This chapter was full of so much good stuff! I absolutely loved that it kept going back and forth from Trina's POV and Tom's POV. I'm not gonna lie, I so wish this chapter never ended. I want more lol
I can feel Trina's pain, but I can also feel Tom's. She's afraid he is going to reject her and want to be with 'coffee shop girl' and he's afraid that he'll be wasting his breath by saying anything abou how he feels. It's a good thing they both have friends who like to stick their noses in their business lol I can't see any feelings being revealed or any 'I love you's' being said without the help of their friends.
Trina has to stop running away from Tom and her feelings and instead run towards him. Pretty sure she isn't going to be disappointed!
Great chapter, Hun! I really enjoyed it =]
Author's Response: Ahahah wow! That is a huge compliment coming from you! I'm glad that you loved it so much! It makes me blush and makes me humble. :) I love your comments! They always make my day. :) I'm really glad that you liked the switching of POVs. I was a little worried but I guess it worked! :)