Date: 02/13/12 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 5
Gorgeous!!! I love it!! I want more!!!
Date: 02/12/12 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 5
Love that Tom battered that guy; he's an amazing brother. It was harsh of Simone and Gordon to just spring the visit to his father on Tom and not even give him the opportunity to discuss it or say goodbye to Bill. I can't really understand why they feel its a good idea to split the twins up when they've only just found each other again. Surely it would be better for Bill to have stability rather than change right now. Or are they just afraid Bill is becoming too dependant on his twin? I'm really afraid of what will happen to Bill while Tom is away? And will he blame Tom and think he's abandoned him for leaving without saying 'bye. Great chapter. Thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you for another awsome review. Yaeh it is unfair that Simone and Gordon split the twins up but I am going to sort of try to explain why they did that in the next chapter. That is not the last we have seen of Derek he is going to be in this a lot more...unfortunately. I am sorry that I haven't updated it yet I am going to try and get the next chapter up before I go to bed, I havent really had a chance to finish it yet :/rnAnyway thanks again for the awesome review :D
Date: 02/12/12 10:42 am Title: Chapter 5
This is awesome, I feel bad for Tom though because he obviously doesn't want to leave Bill for any amount of time :O :)
Author's Response: I know I wouldnt want to leave though...Working on the next chapther now though so it shall be up soon :)
Date: 02/12/12 09:02 am Title: Chapter 5
That Dereck is a aghhhhhhh! I hate him! Now Bill will be aloneeee! ..... And tom is so good big brother :)
i love this fic! xD
Author's Response: Haha I hate him too. Really glad that you like this fic and I am in the process of writing the next chapter now, so it should be up soon xD
Date: 02/12/12 06:54 am Title: Chapter 1
No, I didn't get it!
abi-rocks@hotmail.co.uk
There you go heh, I know It's a bit vain, I made it up when I was like...7... aha :)
Author's Response: Nah not vain at all... I like it :D
Date: 02/11/12 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
I know, people ask me all the time if I cut myself because I'm emo, I tried once because some one punched me and I wanted to forget the names and shit... I pussied out because I'm afraid of pain, It barley grazed me and I felt bad because that really wasn't a reason, If you ever need to speak, email me! :) It's at the bottom of my THF profile :) Hope you're alright :D
Author's Response: Hey I cant find your email adress on your profile. I contacted you though, hope that worked. :D
Date: 02/11/12 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 4
Aw poor Bill! I admire your writing, you don't think people just cut themselfs because they want to die, sometimes they just want to block out some other pain by replacing it! Awesome chapter but I feel sorry for Bill! It's horrible being bullied and I hate imaining it :'( aww but you filled this chapter with so much emotion and made me feel bad for Bill and Tom and I always love it when the writer can bring out the emotion! I hope things go good for the boys aswell though :) heh, awesome stuff can't wait for the next update and thanks for the speedy updates :)
Author's Response: Hey Thanks for the amazing review. It really pisses me off when people say stuff like that. You dont cut because you want to die, it's a way people cope with things to carry on living. I know because I have and sometimes still do cut myself. I am very pleased that you think I got the emotion in there though, it is really hard get it all in there though and it takes me ages to write a decent chapter. Next update shoule be soon I am working on it now. And thanks again :)
Date: 02/11/12 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm glad that Tom discovered what was happening with Bill, but sad at the way he had to find out. Tom was so good taking care of his twin. Hopefully Bill will now feel able to tell Tom whenever shit happens to him. Not sure how the twins will take it if Simone and Gordon start trying to seperate them. Great chapter. Please update again soon.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review, I really do appreciate it a lot :). Bill might still struggle to talk to Tom though :( Anyway I am working on the next chapter now so it shouldnt be too long before it is up. If not tonight definatly first thing in the morning :)
Date: 02/11/12 05:34 am Title: Chapter 3
This chapter is Woawsome... That means "Wow and awesome" Heheh :) I feel sorry for Bill, I can't do maths either... I had a test on it yesterday and only answered 1 question.. anyway, He shouldn't get bullied for being bad at lessons! That's just nasty *Le disgusted face directed to le stupid boys* :) great work:)
Author's Response: Hey thanks for the review :) Heehee Woawsome...I like that :D Next chapter will be up soon :)
Date: 02/11/12 01:53 am Title: Chapter 3
Poor Bill, just when he begins to understand some of his school work he has to start dealing with bullies. I can understand why he won't tell Tom but Tom will be upset if he discovers Bill didn't confide in him. Looking forward to the next chapter to see whether he tells or not, and if he does what Tom will do about it.
Author's Response: Hey thankyou for the review :D next chapter will be posted later no today. Thanks again
Date: 02/11/12 12:45 am Title: Chapter 3
Ohhhh..... Poor bill.... I hope tom make things better and no
worse but I'll only know the next cap! :D
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Next chapter will be up later today :)
Date: 02/09/12 10:01 am Title: Chapter 2
I just read it!!! I liked it!!!! I can't wait for more!!! :P ;)
Date: 02/09/12 04:14 am Title: Chapter 2
I feel really sorry for Bill that he's so far behind in his education because of the awful life he's led, but its lovely that everyone - even his Maths teacher - is so encouraging and willing to help him out. A really sweet chapter.
Date: 02/09/12 01:32 am Title: Chapter 2
looking forward to more
man its late, im gonna go to bed myself LOL
Date: 02/08/12 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great to see the twins joking about even though Bill is nervous about going to school. I guess he didn't really get much education in his prevous abusive life, so will he be well behind everyone else? Its lovely the bond the twins are already developing with Bill helping Tom with his hair and them squishing up in the same bed. I'm feeling nervous for Bill about his first day at school though, so please update soon.
Author's Response: hey thanks for the reviewim lad you like this so far. I am just finishing the next chapter now so it will be up soon :)
Date: 02/07/12 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw yey! I'm glad you made a sequel, they way Bill and Tom interact with each other is cute XD This is amazing as usual and I can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: Hey thank you for the good review, much appreciated. I'm very happy you liked this chapter and there will be another one up tomorrow. :D