Date: 03/04/12 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
lol
its okay
i was feeling a bit sick anyway
Author's Response: Aww I hope you feel okay now.
Date: 03/03/12 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 11
ROFL
i got alot of laughs out of this
i also got kinda dizzy picturing Bills arm
Author's Response: Haha glad that it made you laugh :) Also I'm sorry if ya felt queezy imagining Bill's arm :/
Date: 03/03/12 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 11
Aw, that was really sweet! Gordon is definatly rafical! ;)
Author's Response: Haha thanks, yeah Gordon is pretty "groovy" as he might say :p
Date: 03/01/12 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 10
omg
please update ASAP
Author's Response: The next chapter should be up really soon, I'm just working on it now :)
Date: 03/01/12 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 10
Aw! Poor Billa neinneineneineneinneineieneieneijneijn igjbjidkasdfghjk. Right, Okay... So... Bill.. Tom... *breaks down crying* THIS WAS SUCH A BEAUTIFUL CHAPTER I JUST! :)
Author's Response: Haha sorry if it upset you...Thankyou I'm glad you thought it was a good chapter :)
Date: 03/01/12 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 10
You are so good...you manage to out so many twists in this story. I did not expect Tom to be using a blade too. Would he really have cut himself if Bill hadn't shown up? Was he doing it just to show Bill a lesson? I hope Bill will be okay; sounds like he needs antibiotics for that infection of he'll end up with septicaemia (blood poisoning). Another terrific chapter.
Author's Response: Haha thankyou :) Tom was just doing it to show Bill a lesson, he wasnt actually going to cut dont worry. I am working on the next chapter, hopefully it will be up by tomorrow. Thankyou again for the review :D
Date: 03/01/12 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 9
nein! poor Tomi, now he must be REALLY confused XD aww *hugs Tom~* :)
Author's Response: Poor Tom...It's gonna get worse before it gets better though :/
Date: 03/01/12 04:49 am Title: Chapter 9
Wow. That was good. Tom was so sweet looking after Bill when he had a nightmare and the falling out of bed bit was funny. I didn't expect Tom to find out about the cutting from Derek. I really hate that guy. I hope he'll get what's coming to him some time soon. Poor Tom, so shocked and upset. I hope Sarah can help him. And Bill must be terrified of Tom's reaction. Dying to know what happens next.
Date: 02/29/12 02:58 am Title: Chapter 8
Aw this is awesome! Poor billa for having to lie but atleast he stood up for himself:) nice work as uusual, cant wait for more :)
Author's Response: Haha thankyou :) I have just submitted the next chap so hopefully it wont take long to be validated :D
Date: 02/29/12 02:51 am Title: Chapter 8
I forgive you. So happy Tom is home, but sad that Bill is lying to him. I guess ill thinks Tom will reject him if he tells the truth and he's already suffered enough rejection and abuse in his life...it would kill him to have Tom turn on him too. I guess Tom will eventually find out, but what will his rection be. Really looking forward to your next update and wondering what will happen.
Author's Response: Yay I am happy to be forgiven :D Tom will find out pretty soon and I have a plan for his reaction that might be a bit of a surprise. Thanks for the review, I have submitted the next chapter so it will hopefully be up soon :)
Date: 02/29/12 01:12 am Title: Chapter 8
"sighs" oh bill
please update soon
Author's Response: I know Bill has been really bad lying to Tom. Next chapter will hopefully be up soon :)
Date: 02/22/12 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 7
Awesome as ever :)
Author's Response: Thankyou!! :) Oh dear, I'm sorry that I havent updated in a while, my internets been down and only just come back on. Hopefully there will be another update tonight though :)
Date: 02/16/12 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 7
aww poor bill
please update soon
Date: 02/16/12 09:17 am Title: Chapter 7
Aww this is beautiful! I'm sorry about the banner, I'll downsize it so It wont get taken off again, I'll send you the new link ASAP :) I feel really sorry for Bill, and I hate Derek. :z grgrgrgr :)
Author's Response: Hey dont worry it's fine :) haha I hate Derek too, next update will be soon :)
Date: 02/16/12 03:24 am Title: Chapter 7
Bill's got a real dilemma hasn't he? If he goes to school he'll be beaten; if he skips Tom will be disappointed with him and so will Simone and Gordon. They might even decide to keep the twins apart even more as punishment. But also, if he goes to school the stress might make him cut some more and that will also upset Tom. So, not sure what he can do. Poor Bill. Hope he doesn't decide to run away or anything stupid to escape the situation. Thanks for updating so quickly, I'm really enjoying your story.
Author's Response: Hey thankyou so much for reviewing, I am happy that you like this story. Yeah Bill has a major dilemma and I am working on the next few chapters now so it wont be long before you find out what he decides to do. Thanks again :)
Date: 02/14/12 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 6
Yeah is very short me quede con las ganas de read more but its ok i understand! :D
next capi very soon please and more large :)
Date: 02/14/12 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 6
really short but good
Author's Response: Hey thanks for reviewing. Sorry this was short, the next chapter will be way longer though promise. :)
Date: 02/14/12 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 6
God, that was sad. I never thought Bill would cut hinself again because he's missing Tom so much. That was totally unexpected. Tom will be so upset that Bill did that over him. I still think Girdon and Simone have been really harsh seperating the twins so suddenly, even though Tom was in trouble with the school for fighting. I really can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Sorry that it was a depressing chapter, Yeah Gordon and Simone are being harsh but sometimes parents do stuff like that and think it's for the best you know. I am going to get the next chapter up as soon as I can.
Date: 02/14/12 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 6
Aww the end is so sad! I feel sorry for Bill because Tom is like the first person he's had to depend on and he's just been ripped away from him : awesome work! :)
Author's Response: Haha thankyou, I'm sorry it was so sad :(, I will get the next chapter up asap! :)