Date: 02/09/12 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was your first fic? Wow, great job! I really, really like this!
Maybe it'¨s the harsh reality that tastes so much of what could really be. This is not explaining things better, feed the day dreams, flirt with readers. This was just plain hash, sad and toucjhhing in its simple way. Ther emotions were both glat and strong at the same times. In a way numbness can be decribed.
Thank you for bringing up this connection between Tom and women, fans, celebrity life, his life. Very interesting and well portrayed possibility.
I will definitely keep following this. :)
Date: 02/08/12 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
very interesting
im tracking this, so you know
Date: 02/07/12 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like it. I cant wait to see what you do with it. No bad comments from me. :) keep it up.
Date: 02/07/12 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like it. I cant wait to see what you do with it. No bad comments from me. :) keep it up.
Date: 02/07/12 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
dont cry, tom is, cant have you both doing it. That said this is really good and I want more please, I mean this is really good
Date: 02/07/12 11:01 am Title: Chapter 1
Aw, poor Tom. It's good Bill's there for him :) I really like this so far and I'm interested where this is going to go! Looking forward to more :D
Date: 02/07/12 10:38 am Title: Chapter 1
You describe Tom's confused emotions really well. Really interested to find out what happens next.