Date: 06/30/17 03:20 am Title: New Perceptions
ok so it's been a while but PLEASE finish it off, it'd be so fun to see bill and david's reaction to tom getting with georg
Date: 07/29/12 05:53 pm Title: An Unexpected Revelation
Oh oh oooooooooooooh! Loooooved this chapter!
The twins are so sneaky and I love how they always manage to corner David XD
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it.. I like how sneaky the twins are too and how David never says no to them.
Date: 07/25/12 02:27 pm Title: An Unexpected Revelation
I was surprised I could read the whole thing because just endless smut with almost no plot doesn't really do much for me. But it was pretty good. The only thing that ruined the sex scenes for me was that you called it "issue" instead of "cum". Oh well.
6/10
*****
Author's Response:
Well, I am glad that even though it wasn't what you normally read that you were willing to give it a shot. I tried to add a bit of plot but mostly this is my PWP story. I hae no idea why I used that word because in most I would say cum but I guess for me it just fit. I am glad you liked it and hope you will continue looking for updates in the future.
Date: 07/24/12 04:41 pm Title: An Unexpected Revelation
So hot. Loved the threeway. Loved Tom's revelation at the end. Loved that it's not just about the sex but real love and feelings in there too. It's funny in a way that although David's the older man, it's the twins who are very much in charge. Excellent chapter.
Author's Response:
I loved writing that threeway. It is the first real threeway with three people all going at with each other at the same time so it was different for me to write. I liked Tom revelation at the end I wanted us to see him kind of fall into the idea of loving not only his brother but his manager as well. I think the twins are probably a force of nature in real life so no one can control them and anyone that thinks they can is deluding themselves. David seems more then willing to give up the reins to his young charges. I am glad you like it. I wish I could tell you when the next chapter would be up but I honestly don't know.
Date: 07/24/12 02:26 pm Title: An Unexpected Revelation
Sequel????
Author's Response:
This story has been marked as finished since the very first chapter. It is just because I am not sure how far I wanted to take this story so there may one more or ten more chapters after this it just depends on when my muses hit. The last chapter was written over the course of two months. There will be another chapter but who knows when it will be up.
Date: 04/20/12 12:36 am Title: Bill's Need
rofl
the ending was great!
thank you.
I would have liked more sexy time, but this works too.
tom topping david...that would be really interesting, hahaha
Author's Response:
I am so sorry it has taken me this long to respond and update. I am working on Summer Dreams and I am trying to get out a very interesting chapter with some role reversals so it is taking a bit of creativity. I will get it out as soon as possible. I hope you are still looking for reviews.
Date: 04/13/12 03:08 pm Title: Bill's Need
UNF UNF UNF!!!
My brain just melted from this chapter *_*
Tom topping David would be soooooo hot!
Author's Response:
I am glad you think so and it is definitely in the works. Thanks for the review.
Date: 04/13/12 03:45 am Title: Bill's Need
I think the balance of plot to sexy time was just about right. I really enjoyed this chapter. That Sieran, she loves her Tom bottoming, but you wrote is so good. Any of the three options would be good, or a combination like a three-way where Tom tops David while David is simultaneously topping Bill.
Author's Response:
That is what I meant by on person being in the middle but I suppose I could combine all three. That's a good idea thank you for contributing.
Date: 04/12/12 09:08 pm Title: Rape
thank you so much.. I love the story (even though im still hoping tom will rival davids topposition :P Somehow i see them more as equals 'fighting' a bit over dominance which i see also in the writing on love you do) Anyways i totally love it and hope this will continue for some time :) (And andi is cute yes)
Author's Response:
I am so sorry it has taken me so long to respond. I have no idea why I didn;t respond before. Gross neglect on my part. I am glad you like the story and I am sorry it has taken me so long to update I am just really swamped and trying to keep my other multi-chapter Summer Dreams working. The story lines don't cooperate so it was confusing the way I wrote the relationships in both stories. Thanks for the review and I hope to update really soon.
Date: 04/01/12 05:51 pm Title: Tom's Secret Desire
awesome chapter
Bill and Andi are silly
I can totally see them act like that in real life
looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
I know I can totally seen this too. I like writing them like it is fun. I will try to deliver the next chapter soon.
Date: 03/21/12 11:56 pm Title: Rape
hehehe
it would be hard
Author's Response:
I have a feeling that you words have dual meaning. *raises eyebrows*
Date: 03/21/12 06:22 pm Title: Rape
yeah
really funny
..come to think of it...i dont think thats ever happened before in a fanfic LOL
Author's Response:
I don't think it ever will. I can't so it. I think it would feel right.
Date: 03/20/12 07:21 pm Title: Rape
ok
3some BotTom (B&T) YAY
ooo, i wonder what david would think if one of the twins dominated him ROFL
Author's Response:
That would be funny.
Date: 03/19/12 10:07 pm Title: Rape
yeah
3some?
Author's Response:
Well I have a few ideas that I am working on so it might be a bit before that chapter comes up but it will happen.
Date: 03/19/12 05:37 pm Title: Twins
LOL
i really liked that
BotTom next? LOL
Author's Response:
You mean Tom bottoming to Bill right?
Date: 03/19/12 05:25 am Title: Twins
I think it's a good idea to tie Tom up for a change.
If you tie up David it will probably kill him...
Please continue...
Author's Response:
Yeah I don't really want to kill the manager, he's too much fun to play with. I am glad you like it.
Date: 03/19/12 05:08 am Title: Tom
I Would love to read al situations, so the story won't end that soon....
Author's Response:
I hope you meant all situations because if you meant al situations i have no idea what that is. I am glad you like it.
Date: 03/15/12 06:18 pm Title: Tom
I want some with bill and tom fucking each other(maybe BotTom), but I dont think that would happen, according to Tom
Author's Response:
We'll see what I can do with that. I don't think it will be BotTom but I think twinsie time is in the near future. Thanks for the shout-out.