Date: 03/15/12 06:06 am Title: Tom
TOM AND BILL NEXT!!!
ARGH LOVE LOVE LOVE IT !!
MORE MORE MORE :D
hehehe can you tell im excited???
Author's Response:
Will do. Twinsie time next. Thanks for the shout-out I am glad you like this story.
Date: 03/14/12 04:43 pm Title: Tom
This story is perfect!
I love how Tom is so curious and how wicked Bill is *_*
Author's Response:
I am glad you like it so much. I try to write the characters how I feel they would be in real life, if of course they did this naughty stuff.
Date: 03/14/12 08:50 am Title: Rape
whohoo lovely! would definately love more chapters :) I would love to read tom topping david actually.. loving the threeway relationship dynamics, which deserve another couple of chapters as well; 2 manly men and bill who of course controls the whole thing..
Author's Response:
I am thinking of doing a chapter of Tom topping but I have always liked botTom stories. Tom topping is a definite must. I like the three way dynamic too and even in this chapter I still managed to make Bill the controliing factor here. I thought everyone would like the fact that Bill was still in control despite the obvious "not planned" aspect of this chapter. I am glad you caught onto that.
Date: 02/20/12 04:36 pm Title: Three-Way
Lovely, really lovely! Thank you for adding the realisatic, conflicted emotional dimension to this story with Tom's appearance. Three-some with Tom? Hotness. Rimming Tom? Even more so!
But yeah, it was really nice and interesting move to write down also the emnotional side of this all. I love the twins' relationship here.
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked that. As far as I can tell Tom really is straight and I think any straight guy would have conflicted emotions abouthaving a three-some with their brother and his boyfriend. I thought I would add that. I love the relationship here too it's very sweet and understanding.
Date: 02/20/12 04:06 pm Title: Birthday
Well, well, Bill. You have some excellent bday presents there, young man. :D
I like the way Bill is actually topping from bottom all the time. That's our Bill, I'm sure. :)
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked the birthday present Bill presented. I like how Bill is really in control when bound as well. I'm sure Bill is really like that in life too.
Date: 02/20/12 03:48 pm Title: Rape
It's walking on thin ice when writing Bill/David, but I'm glad that I decided to read this. Especially the role play partt was interesting - almost confusing of not knowing how to feel exactly. Anyway, liked it a lot and I also liked the way you shortly wrote about Bill & Tom's relationship. :)
Author's Response:
I am glad you decided to read this story. I am also glad you liked it. I am facinated by twin relationships. I have a younger brother and we've never really had the whole sibling rivarly thing going so I always felt like he was more my twin.
Date: 02/19/12 07:05 pm Title: Birthday
I enjoyed reading this but, this chapter and its' premise are almost identical to another work that's already on this site: "Afterparty" by DarkMistress.
You should probably make it clear in an author's note that this was unintentional, as it seemed to be just that, before another author reports you.
Author's Response:
I have read that story and I read over my chapter and realized you are right. That was not my intention. Thank you for letting me know. I will definitely make it clear in the notes that I did not write it that way.
Date: 02/10/12 06:57 pm Title: Birthday
thank you so much for this
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it. I don't know if I'll do another one. If you have an idea that goes with the theme I might do it.
Date: 02/08/12 11:38 pm Title: Rape
k
Author's Response:
Second chapter up not nearly the same thing but I hope you like it anyway.
Date: 02/08/12 03:51 pm Title: Rape
either or both
LOL
Author's Response:
We'll see the mood kind of comes and goes. I have lots of weird stories that are sitting on my hard drive just begging to be finished. I do have a good idea though so keep your eyes open for the sequel but no promises.
Date: 02/06/12 08:28 pm Title: Rape
really nice!
i want more, hehe
Author's Response:
More as in a sequel or just more like this?
Date: 02/06/12 11:24 am Title: Rape
That was great, both the creepy non-con part and the tender loving ending. Thank you.
Author's Response:
Lots of people seem to be liking the way I wrote it. I am glad it went over so well. I thought I would be disappointing the fans who liked creppy David and the ones that liked loving David. I am glad it went over so well.
Date: 02/05/12 07:02 pm Title: Rape
^.^ that makes me happy hope you like them
Author's Response:
Me too.
Date: 02/05/12 06:15 pm Title: Rape
i hear ya
I am also sort of ashamed to admit rape scenes are hot. ya and dont waoory my skin was crawling the good way. um would you mind chekingout my storys.... well only if ur ok with tomxbill
Author's Response:
I am definitely ok with twc most of my stories are unrelated twc. I would be happy to check out your stoires.
Date: 02/05/12 05:38 pm Title: Rape
holly shit that made my skin crwal and my face burn up when it was all cosplay. like how amazing of you!!! loved it should do more<3
Author's Response:
I am really glad you liked it. I hope you skin crawled in a good way. This is my first David and Bill fic although I have read quiet a few. I like how they interact when they are a real couple but I am sort of ashamed to admit rape scenes are hot so I found a way to combine the best of both.