Date: 02/05/12 01:19 am Title: Chapter 2
I won't tell you how amazing this story is, or how fantastic you are- because you are and it is, but I will tell you to keep this coming, I need this in my life like I need air and pain killers, k?
Author's Response: Oh, baby, I love you, and I wish I could supply more help to you to ease your pain! I'm so glad you're enjoying this! I'm very thrilled that you like it! Hopefully I'll get the next two parts up in a couple days. By then, maybe you'll feel better and it will be a celebratory story! ^__^
Date: 02/04/12 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 2
As a reply to your reply, are you kidding me? I love everything you write. This might be my favorite yet though.
Great chapter, I love Bill's conflicting thoughts xD And his reasons for topping... I died at the last. Fair enough, Bill. Fair enough.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! *__* I'm very glad you're liking this one. Poor Bill is very confused. I have to admit that writing his reasons made me laugh at myself. I just couldn't resist that last one. It's just such a male response to things! x) I hope it made you laugh!
Date: 02/04/12 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 2
I just noticed how you started the chapter with Bill's brain train reaching the Gustav-was-a-fucking-god station, and you ended it with Bill's brain train not thinking about fucking Gustav but fucking Gustav and the train derailing. :3 The first mention of trains was like the engine, and the last mention was like the caboose. A nice clean, coherent, and flowing fanfic train, Zephy~ Chugga chugga. ;)
Again, I love Bill's rationalization. Someone has to look out for the band image. Lol, Bill -- you keep telling yourself that. XD
Gustav has a nice caboose. I'm pleased Bill noticed.
Author's Response: Heeee, I'm glad you liked the little bit of imagery I was trying to parallel there. Poor Bill, he's finally discovered what the rest of us always knew about Gustav, but at least he's in a position to actually do something about it. Maybe. Will he or won't he? Or would Gustav even be interested? ;) I like Gustav's caboose too! Bill has good taste. Choo-choo, darling, toot your whistle! More will be coming SOOON -- really, real soon not TH s**n.
Date: 02/04/12 12:07 am Title: Chapter 1
Very good (and sexy) first chapter! Im intrigued to read more, cant wait for the rest! :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked this! Bill and Gustav can't help but be sexy, but I hope that they'll be even sexier if they ever get together. :P Thank you very much for reading, and I hope you enjoy the rest!
Date: 02/03/12 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this story. Is it just a one-off or is there going to be more? Will Bill actually get to act out his fantasy of bottoming for Gustav? Would love to read that.
Author's Response: I'm really glad you enjoyed this first chapter! Thank you! ^__^ There are actually three more parts to this, so I hope you like the rest as much. I'll be posting the next chapter Saturday. Thanks again for reading!
Date: 02/02/12 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
I am totally and determinedly leaving this comment because I love you and I love this story and not out of obligation or trying to make you feel better (you're already amazing, btw). Thank you so much!!! I love you dearly, Zephilynn. :D
Author's Response: I love you because you are wonderful and incredible. Thank you so much for reading and encouraging me (even if I'm not sure that's always a good thing). I hope you enjoy the rest of your story just as much, my darling smooshy marshmallow.