Date: 05/18/13 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 1: Not Alone
please update this story or write something new, your writing style is so lovely! I'm a big fan of "Over the Years" and really hope there will be a chance to read something new from you!
Date: 01/28/13 12:36 am Title: Chapter 6: Bill
^.,.^ YAYYY fishy bill!!!!
Author's Response: Lol, I was really excited starting this but after getting little to no feedback I lost my inspiration to continue. I may go back an change things. Maybe, I dunno. But thanks for reading :)
Date: 03/14/12 05:11 am Title: Chapter 6: Bill
this was a good good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 03/13/12 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 6: Bill
Very much like this story! Thanks for writing and good luck on your surgury thingy.
Author's Response: thank you kindly :D
Date: 03/12/12 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 5: Feeling Lonely
This story is adorable :3 I really like how you added some originality to it by not making Bill a full mermaid, but still giving him fishy traits lol
Also, throughout the chapters your writing just keeps getting better and better so I really hope you continue with this! 'Cause I'd really like to read this to the end. :)
Author's Response: aw thank you :D i needed a little boost to write a chapter tonight and your comment is just the thing for it :) yes, i was wanted a sea creature with a kind of an avatar feel, can you tell? XD still cant decide if i should go back and give him a tail or not :/
Date: 03/07/12 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 5: Feeling Lonely
Really nice story!! But I think you mixed up the names Bill and Will a few times ;)
Author's Response: lol damn it, his names supposed to be Will XD
Date: 03/07/12 03:14 am Title: Chapter 5: Feeling Lonely
this chapters were really good!
i cant wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: thank you! :D
Date: 03/07/12 12:35 am Title: Chapter 5: Feeling Lonely
I love it :D
Author's Response: Yayness!
Date: 03/06/12 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 1: Not Alone
Love this story!!!
Author's Response: yay! :D
Date: 03/06/12 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 4: Disaster at the Door
"drama queen black girl diva attitude" these attitudes can be really overbearing lol I should know.
Author's Response: lol I'm glad someone liked that. My own little brother sometimes acts like that. Even smokes pot too XD
Date: 02/15/12 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 3: Release the Cracken!
im glad your cat is okay
Author's Response: thank you :) the little shit won't take his medicine XD
Date: 02/15/12 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 2: Creature in the Tub
this is a great story!
could you do a picture of the creature please?
Author's Response: I wish, but I'm afraid my drawing skills aren't the greatest. I can copy but I can never draw things in my head. :( I was kind of thinking Avatar-ish, but with more sea creature-like qualities. i.e. flat feet, webbed fingers, things of that sort. I can't decide if I want to give him a tail or not.
Date: 02/15/12 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 1: Not Alone
Continue please! :D
Author's Response: I shall! :D
Date: 02/15/12 05:09 am Title: Chapter 3: Release the Cracken!
nice chapter!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
i hope your cat feels better soon!
Author's Response: aw, thank you so much :)rnhe's sleeping with me right now :3
Date: 02/03/12 06:48 am Title: Chapter 2: Creature in the Tub
this looks like a really good story!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 02/02/12 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 2: Creature in the Tub
Hmm. This is pretty interesting so far. I am definitely very intrigued by this. But, I must say, your first chapter had quite a few little mistakes. Tiny things. I just suggest you go through and re-read the chapter with fresh eyes before you post. And, you are right so far I wouldn't call this a furry. You could remove that warning and catagorize it as a CreatureFic. I think it would be more fitting.
Can't wait to see more of this! Keep up the great work! I will see if I can't come up with a good title tomorrow. ^_^
Author's Response: yaaay my first long review :D I'll have to go back through and read my chapters to correct my typos, I tend to make a lot of those. Creaturefic is far more fitting, thank you :) cant wait to hear from you again, ive been busy but i plan to write another chapter soon.
Date: 02/02/12 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 1: Not Alone
I like the story so far. Maybe you can name it "Not alone" or "Deep" or something like that. Thanks for writing this and can't wait for more.
Author's Response: maybe i should call it "rolling in the deep" XD haha no but seriously, i appreciate the comment :)
Date: 02/02/12 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 1: Not Alone
Love it! Keep writing :)
Author's Response: I shall :D