This fic had soooo so much potential to me. It really pulled me in. I loved the world you built with the vampires and lycans and the ritual. Very nice! And I am a vampire-geek so I do mean that. I found the descriptions of the Lovax bandmembers a bit confusing and over the top, but once past that I did like them as characters. Half-way through there was this jump in the story that left me a bit confused, but I must say you write action very well! A bit more explinations for the powers used is all that's missing. :-) Random magic flying, you know?

Anyway, I did enjoy this read. And I might just read more from you. ;-) /KSena