Date: 02/01/12 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 3
Aw yay for Bill comforting Matt, that made me smile.
Author's Response: Yeah I thought this story needed some cuteness after all the depressing drama.
Date: 02/01/12 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 2
I loved it!!! I want more soon!!!!!!
Author's Response: Very glad that you lved it, the next chapter has been added it just needs to be validated, hopefully IT WONT TAKE LOND :)
Date: 02/01/12 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 2
Yay! Bill escaped! And Tom's seen him even though he doesn't know who he is. Tom's so kind to think of inviting in a strange boy. Lovely chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review I am happy that you liked the chapter, next update will be here soon :)
Date: 02/01/12 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 2
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh he found him!!!! :D
Author's Response: Haha yes he found him, but how long is it going to take for them to properly find each other?? Next update will be here soon :D
Date: 02/01/12 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh my derp Bill and Tom's! This is amazing! I liked this chapter so much, I honestly can't put it into words! Can't wait for the next update! :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review, I'm so glad you liked this chapter. Next update will be here soon :)
Date: 02/01/12 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 2
Why so short? :( I want to know what happens next!!
Can't wait to read the next chap!
Author's Response: Yeah sorry about the short chapter, I have made the next one longer and you wont have too wait long I have updated just now. Just need it to be validated, hopefully wont take too long...Thanks for the review :D
Date: 02/01/12 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 2
*Cues suspenseful music* Oooh! I'm curious to see how its gonna go down when they meet...again lol. Really really good chapter.
Author's Response: Hey thank you so much for the review. The twins might not meet for a while yet, not properly anyway, but I promise it's gonna be good when they do
Date: 01/31/12 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
Omg, poor Billy. :(
No person should live things like these! But sadly, it happens... Everytime.
Looking forward to mooooore! :)
Date: 01/31/12 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
O_O Oooh! I like it! You've got me hooked and can't wait to read more.
Date: 01/31/12 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
looking forward to more
Date: 01/31/12 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Poor Simone going frantic looking for her little boy. And God, what Bill has to suffer. What will happen to him now he's beencaught stealing from his abuser? this was a vrey powerful first chapter. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Hey thankyou for the review. will post the second chapter tomorrow so you will find out what happens then. Im glad you liked this chapter and thanks again for the review :)
Date: 01/31/12 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Woah! Okay, so I really love suspense stories like this, I can see this will turn out to be good, you've got the basis for a very good story! I can't wait to read more, Poor Bill, It's sad to think that he'll be getting abused in this story, but I guess it will make it more sad when Tom and/or Simone find him, knowing that he's been abused and stuff, anyway, see you next time :)
Author's Response: Hey thanks Im glad that you liked this chapter, It took me a while to writemit so Im very happy about the great comment. Thankyou and I hope you keep reading, next chapter will be posted tomorrow. :)