Date: 03/17/12 03:59 am Title: Chapter 1
ah, interesting, this reminds me a lot of the beginning of my first story, Rescue Me From Hell (on hiatus, but I am in the process of finishing it...:/), different plot, but similar take on abuse. take a look if you're interested in the comparison (just cuz they could seriously be cousins :)) i really let mine get out of hand though...45 chapters and I still haven't wrapped it up...I have a couple chapters on my hard drive, but I want to finish it before I post again to avoid another hiatus.
anyway, interesting. I've always had a thing for Bill being used, abused, and loved back to life...:3
Author's Response: Haha yeah I shall definately go and take a look at that, sounds pretty cool :)
Date: 02/05/12 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 6
Awwww it ended!!!! It was so small!!!! But i liked it a lot! Can't wait for the sequel!!! ;) :)
Date: 02/05/12 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 6
looking forward to the sequel
Date: 02/05/12 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 3
his head to his chin? huh?
lol
great story
Date: 02/05/12 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 6
yessssss!!!!! a sequel pleaseeeeee!!!!!! im glad bill is finally in home...very short cap but good ;D
Author's Response: Yeah sorry its short, sequel will be up tomorrow. Thanks for the review :D
Date: 02/04/12 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 6
I felt so bad for Simone at the beginning of this chapter; she must have been going crazy thinking another of her twins had gone missing. But then they arrived home and damn that was a lovely scene when she knew Bill was her lost little boy. And the ending was so moving with her watching over her boys as they were cuddled up on the sofa. Regarding what comes next, it depends whether you want to carry on from where you left off with this chapter or maybe move things ahead a few months and show how Bill is settling back into family life or whether he's having trouble adjusting in which case you could make it a sequel. Whatever you choose to do I'll look forward to reading it.
Author's Response: Thanks again for the great review. I had the same problem with this chapter as the last, not sure if it was capturing the right emotion but again you changed my mind. I was thinking about doing that, like Bill going to school or something, Im not reall sure where I can go from here without moving it forward a few months, so a sequel is looking like a better idea the more I think about it. :D
Date: 02/04/12 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 5
I'm playing catch up here because I saw the next chapter was up and I hadn't read this one yet. What an amazing chapter. So much happened, so many emotions. I'm glad they got the guy who had abused Bill and Andreas, and thank God they got Matt out of there. And the last part when Bill realises that Tom is his brother had tears in my eyes. I'll read and review the latest chapter now.
Author's Response: I thought it would boys got to land a few punches on that guy, ya know a bit of revenge. I wasnt sure about the bit when the twins met i didnt think there was enough emotion in it so thank you for saying that, you have changed my mind :D
Date: 02/04/12 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 6
Aw! this is so cute! you should carry it on here! Maybe about Bill having some kind of trouble with his recent 'owner'? :)
Author's Response: Hmmm yeah maybe Im not sure though. Im going to play around with a few more chapters and see what reads best....I definatly want to make this a series though so there will be more stories than this one.
Date: 02/04/12 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 5
YAY! Twins are reunited ^_^ But aww poor Bill for being shaken up.
Date: 02/04/12 06:06 am Title: Chapter 5
Aw! That's so cute, I feel sorry for Bill having to go through all that shit... I would probably go and take a big flamethrower if anyone actually did that.. don't underestermate my POWAH! ;) anyway, amazing work! can't wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Aww thank you things are going to start looking up for Bill soon though....I will not underestimat the POWAH...I dont think I would like being chased with a flamethrower haha :D
Date: 02/04/12 01:16 am Title: Chapter 5
por el bien de los dos pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee salgan de donde esten y q tom lleve a casa a billlllllllll........ me muero de angustiaaaaaaaaaaaa :D
Author's Response: Hey I'm sorry that I cant reply in spanish I dont really speak the language, but dont worry Tom and Bill are gonna go home together, soon :D
Date: 02/03/12 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 5
Aw, this was very touching. Poor Matt, he's so sweet :( didn't deserve that! And finally, after 10 years the hide and seek game has finished! Tom found him! :) now I want to see how Simone reacts to Bill's return! *-* questioooooon: did Tom sleep under the bridge with Bill and the others? Simone must be worried! XD
Author's Response: Thank you for another awsome review. To answer your question Tom did sleep under the bridge with the others which means Simone is going to be crazy, whats going to happen in the next chapter?? Hmm. It will be up later on promise. :D
Date: 02/02/12 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 4
I like it!!!!!! Thank you for the new chapters!!!!!! I don't like when people stop posting or posting after a looong time!!! :P I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!
Author's Response: HaHa your welcome. I hate it too, when you get halfway through a story and it just sort of stops, and it was just getting interesting. I am determined to finish this story and post all of it. I've put the next chapter up, just need it to be validated :)
Date: 02/02/12 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oooh...Tom's getting that gut feeling now. That was sweet of Bill to buy the food and blankets for everyone ^_^ Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Teah I wanted some cuteness in this story because it has been a pretty depressive so I thought that it would be pretty cute to have Bill do something like that. Tom sort of knows but isnt too sure. Next chapter will be up soon :)
Date: 02/02/12 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 4
Aw, they met! :3 and Tom thinks Bill might be his brother! *-* what a smart kid. XD can't wait to read more :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Yeah the twin's have met but dont know who they are yet, if that makes sense. Next chpter will be up soon.
Date: 02/02/12 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 4
Aww! Atleast Tom has a hunch about it! I hope Bill will be alright 'cause picturing him upset is sad ahah :) great work as usual :)
Author's Response: Hey thank you so much for the review, I'm glad you like this. Bill is going to have to go through a lot of stuff in this and picturing him upset is sad but it might be a while before he is happy :( Sorry about that.
Date: 02/02/12 10:50 am Title: Chapter 4
The fist part with the boys goofing around with the shopping trolley was really funny. I can understand Tom not wanting to tell his mum right away about the boy, not to get her hopes up because it likely isn't her lost son. Bill was so kind to buy stuff for Sarah and the others. Are they staying in squat or somewhere? I'm looking forward to reading more and how Tom will discover the Bill is indeed his brother and what Bill will feel when he learns who Tom is.
Author's Response: Hey thank you for the review as always I really appreciate it. The boys are going to find out really, really soon so you wont have to wait too long :D
Date: 02/02/12 10:23 am Title: Chapter 4
i hope sarah can help tom or he knows some other way ;D nice cap. waiting the next :D...
Date: 02/02/12 01:09 am Title: Chapter 3
at least he found company... but i already want that he meet with tom!!!! and simone... i wonder how will be? post quickly pleaseeeeeeeeeeee!! and sorry my english i hope you understand it :D
Author's Response: Hehe dont worry the twins will meet...eventually. Not sure how that will be, I havent written that far yet, but I promise it will be good. :D
Date: 02/01/12 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh, I wanted them to meet :( hope they see each other soon!! Although I'm happy Bill found people to be with! Tell me, how does Bill remember his name? I mean, normally when little kids are kidnapped, the kidnapper charges their names so people won't know it's the missing child. Unless they are sure they won't be caught. Anyways, I like this and I am looking forward to reading the 4th chap soon! :)
Author's Response: hey thank you for reviewing, much appreciated. The twins will be seeing a lot of each other so dont worry about that. And about the name thing, I'm going to go into detail about that sort of stuff later, but yeah they basiclly thought that they were not going to get caught and they never thought about Bill escaping. I will explain all later on in the story. Next chapter will be up soon.