Date: 03/03/12 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 4
The end? The end! Why there is the end? Dang, I could have used some gentle more than brotrherly love for few more chapters. :)
Anyway, this was so cute, adorable. I love it how hesitant Tom was and how gentle and supporting Bill was with him. That's the way a truye brother works. :)
Author's Response: Sadly yes that was the end *sad face* I know, that would have been nice... maybe next time ;)Thank you so much :D
Date: 02/29/12 11:39 am Title: Chapter 4
Nice story, really liked it:D waiting for the next chapter:D
Author's Response: Thank you :D Erm... sorry but that was the last one, thank you for reading though :)rn
Date: 02/28/12 04:50 am Title: Chapter 4
Hahaha, this was a cute fic. I like the role reversal, it's unique and interesting. You wrote it all quite nicely too, I just found that it moved too fast. Like, their actions and the plot feel like they're in fast-forward, buzzing by super quick, like on tape kind of. Anyway, it's ok, if I suspend my disbelief, this story is cute and funny, and your characters are good. I liked it, well done. :)
Author's Response: Thank you :)Erm yes, I know it might have felt like that and I'm sorry about that. It was never meant to be this long really and I just tried to move them along to the end, making everything move too fast.Thank you for your review :D and sorry again
Date: 02/27/12 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 4
So sweet and romantic. I loved the ending. Loved the whole story. :)
Author's Response: Hehe, well yes I tried :)Thank you for your reviews and for reading :D
Date: 02/27/12 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 3
Yes, Bill was very gracious towards his brother. I bet inside he's probably praying that Tom wants to do more. I guess I'll just have to go and find out. Loved this chapter. :)
Author's Response: He was yes *nods* and yeah I think he was praying xD Thank you again :)
Date: 02/27/12 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 2
Bill the womanizer! LOL Loved this chapter and can hardly wait to see what Alana will get Tom to do next. On I go. :)
Author's Response: Haha, well if Tom's the virgin, Bill should be the womanizer right? ;) Thank you :)
Date: 02/27/12 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was an awesome beginning. I can't believe that Tom is still a virgin but stranger things have been known to happen. I love this and now I'm on to the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: Thank you :DHahaha, yeah I know but somehow Tom came to me as the virgin instead of Bill which happens more :)
Date: 02/26/12 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 4
aw sweet
will there be a sequel
Author's Response: Thank you :)No, I don't think so, but with me you never know. I do have a half-formed idea in my head :')
Date: 02/26/12 06:20 am Title: Chapter 4
this was a really good story!!
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Date: 02/25/12 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 3
Aww, that was sweet. We all know Tom is billsexual after all, so they were meant top find each opther that way :). I'm glad that Tom didn't have to find it outr by experimentimng with other, meaningless men.
Author's Response: Hehe. Yeah, we all do know that :) Well, he's still afraid that Bill will find someone else to do it for him... but Bill will help him see not to fear *nods* Thank you :)
Date: 02/25/12 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 2
Interesting, very interesting :). It feels so weird to read Tom's character like this, like so... not what we are used to. Yet there's something hot in thinking of his hesitation, fear and Bill's guidance. Up to the next chapter immediately... :)
Author's Response: Thank you :DI know. It was easier than I thought it would be though. Tom like this came really easy to me, as did this Bill. Thank you again :)
Date: 02/22/12 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
yeah
lol
Author's Response: Hehe. Ah well, maybe next time ;)
Date: 02/21/12 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 3
I can't wait for the hands-on lesson to begin ;) (And about the previous review, I'm sorry if it came off as a critique D: it was just something I was curious about and I understand now that you want to do just a short story lol, so details are not a focus here)
Author's Response: Haha, yeah I think even Bill can't wait n_n Tom might be a bit reluctant though ;)It didn't feel like critique, don't worry :) I can understand that you would want to know that. I never really realized that it would be confusing... like I said it never was supposed to be long :)Thank you again :)
Date: 02/21/12 12:57 am Title: Chapter 2
OOoh I like where this is going :) the title is very well-chosen, it's actually what drew me in and then after, discovering that Tom is actually a virgin, wow that is original XD but I would have put more details as to how he has achieved that, and how he actually lived all these years (although maybe we'll see that in future chapters? :))
Author's Response: Thank you :)I could have done that if it had been longer than it is (it's only 4 chapters long really... just now remembered I forgot to mention that yikes). For now it's only meant as an entertaining story about Bill teaching him the ropes xD To tell you the truth I was trying to write an oneshot and it became a little longer than that :')But who knows maybe I'll actually try to write a short story with more detail ;)
Date: 02/20/12 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 3
thnk u may we have another sexy chapter change that rating to nc17ish maybe
Author's Response: Hehe, thank you :) No, I'm sorry... R is as far as this is going... but it will be sexy, I promise n_n
Date: 02/20/12 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 3
great story
i pictured this
"I like kissing, but kissing girls doesnt do anything for me"
and BIll says
"Let me ask something, and dont go all freakazoid on me, ok?"
Tom laughed, "uh, ok."
"Are you gay, Tom?"
lol
Author's Response: Thank you :DHahaha, I somehow wish that was what had come up in my head as well... would have made a very interesting turn of events ;)
Date: 02/20/12 09:42 am Title: Chapter 3
nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you, it'll be up as soon as possible :)
Date: 02/19/12 12:44 am Title: Chapter 1
This was fun! How often do we see a virgin Tom? XD
Author's Response: Thank you :D Not that often it seems hehe xD
Date: 02/13/12 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow this is gonna get interesting :) Can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thank you :) More will be up as soon as it's checked ;)
Date: 02/13/12 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 2
roflmao
Author's Response: Glad I could make you laugh :) Thank you