Date: 05/03/12 09:37 pm Title: Week 11: Und hält Dich das auch nicht zurück (Part II)
I knew it!!! I just knew it! I knew their mother was trying to kill Tom. It was easy to tell, on how you wrote it, and I must say I loved it so much! Sadly that is the end, but of course I loved it very much!
Date: 04/24/12 02:34 am Title: Week 11: Und hält Dich das auch nicht zurück (Part II)
Actually it's a good place to stop. It has enough closure but also a place for you to continue if you wanted to in the future. If the idea you had is complete then you did your job. The twins will always have eachother. They will always need eachother and that point was made.
Date: 04/23/12 09:05 pm Title: Week 1: Stomach Aches + Week 2: All work, no play makes Tom a sick boy
Its so sad! yet brilliant!
Thanks for writing this story.
Date: 04/23/12 04:02 pm Title: Week 11: Und hält Dich das auch nicht zurück (Part II)
You're so welcome. I've thoroughly enjoyed your story and this last chapter was so sweet. I'm glad Jorg apologised like that and the twins forgave him but, as you said, the main point really is that the twins will always be there for each other and don't actually need anyone else. I'm going to miss the updates but will look out for other stuff you write.
Date: 04/05/12 10:54 am Title: Week 11: Und hält Dich das auch nicht zurück
So sad that Simone killed herself, and that the twins loved her so much they don't blame her for what she did and are still devastated by her death. It was good to see Jorg and Gordon's POV. I do think Jorg is wrong to want to take the twins away from their home and everything they know. It's not as if he's going to be there for them all the time. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 03/09/12 02:55 pm Title: Week 10: It's true. We're all a little insane
Now knowing it's a metal disorder, I can now feel sorry for her. I hope she can feel better.
I really like your story. Thanks for writing.
Date: 03/09/12 12:57 am Title: Week 1: Stomach Aches + Week 2: All work, no play makes Tom a sick boy
oh ok
Date: 03/08/12 04:44 am Title: Week 10: It's true. We're all a little insane
Excellent chapter. Very touching but also a bit creepy with Simone's disorder and her reaction to Tom. I have heard of the illness before, there's been a couple of cases in the news over here in the UK a few years back. I can kind of understand it because when you're pregnant and then when you have a new baby you get lots of attention, but that dwindles away as your kids get older and then sometimes it seems like you just get ignored so I can see where the need for sympathy and attention over having a sick child might lead someone to do stupid stuff. Very sad really, but seriously twisted too. Anyway, I think you've done a good job of showing how the condition affected Simone, the twins and Gordon. Mustn't forget Gordon, the poor man stuck between hsi wife and the boys he's grown to love like sons. Great stuff, looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 03/08/12 02:56 am Title: Week 10: It's true. We're all a little insane
Poor Twins :( I just hope that Simone can stay where she is and not hurt them anymore.
Date: 03/08/12 01:34 am Title: Week 1: Stomach Aches + Week 2: All work, no play makes Tom a sick boy
what i ment was, i didnt think that people only caring for a child has it. I thought that could have it and NOT be caring for a child
Author's Response: Munchausen by proxy is kind of classified as the urge of a caretaker to harm their child. The urge to kill children in someone who's not a parent is a completely different Psychotic disorder.
Date: 03/07/12 10:44 pm Title: Week 10: It's true. We're all a little insane
i didnt think that muchousen had to with JUST a mother
i thought it could happen to anyone
Author's Response: It can happen to anyone. I chose for Simone to be the one suffering with it but, fathers, uncles, anyone in a position to care for a child can suffer with Munchausen by Proxy.
Date: 02/27/12 01:55 am Title: Week 6: I don’t want to start any blasphemous rumors but I think that God's got a sick sense of humor and when I die, I expect to find him laughing.
Oh my God, seriously? Simone is the evil bitch? *wrings hands*
Date: 02/27/12 12:29 am Title: Week 9: Eure rechnung ist mit uns nicht aufgegangen
I'm not going into that deep religion stuff because I dislike doing that, and that isn't what this review is about. It's about how deep this chapter can be when looking past "who's god?" stuff.
In other words, cool chapter. Can't wait for more. Thanks.
Date: 02/26/12 08:37 pm Title: Week 9: Eure rechnung ist mit uns nicht aufgegangen
that is such a sweat chapter
i loved it
Date: 02/18/12 05:10 pm Title: Week 8: Mama, we all go to hell
(O.O) whoa...
Date: 02/18/12 01:42 pm Title: Week 8: Mama, we all go to hell
Wow. Did not seen that coming. The thought of calling someone evil have never been so strong as I read this story. Thank for writing and write quickly! I can't wait for more.
Date: 02/18/12 02:07 am Title: Week 8: Mama, we all go to hell
Thats woman is sick in more ways than one!!! Lets hope Bill can out smart her. Poor Tomi :(
Date: 02/17/12 11:24 pm Title: Week 8: Mama, we all go to hell
I KNEW IT
I KNEW something was wrong with Simone when she rubbed her hands together after hearing Bill's confession.
Please update soon
Date: 02/17/12 11:56 am Title: Week 8: Mama, we all go to hell
How horrible, Simone trying to kill Tom just for attention. And wanting Bill to take his life too once Tom was dead. She is seriously deranged. I feel so sorry for the twins and Gordon when they learn thr truth. What must Tom be feeling now, with his mum being dragged off for attempting to smother him. Great chapter, please update soon.
Date: 02/17/12 09:11 am Title: Week 8: Mama, we all go to hell
O.O Okay, Simone is definitely insane. This goes way beyond desperate for attention. Hopefully the hospital can put her into a mental health care center now that they know she's not quite right in the head.