Date: 11/19/12 12:05 am Title: Fliped
very well written. very interesting. good chemistry between characters.
Date: 11/19/12 12:00 am Title: Im Real
the way that Bill's character was inductance was very creative. and Tom's protectiveness over him is very sweet.
Date: 11/18/12 11:57 pm Title: Midnight Blackout
love the way you introduced the characters relationships.
Date: 11/18/12 11:41 pm Title: Heaven
Interesting opening. The ending of the chapter leaves a lot of questions.
Date: 11/18/12 01:33 am Title: Explosive
They made it out of this alive but what happened to Bill? He was so brave to cast the spell to save them but at what cost? Poor Tom if he never gets to see Bill again :( Maybe by some mirical Bill can come back to Tom's world?
Date: 11/17/12 05:50 am Title: Explosive
BEAUTIFUL!! Expecially the parts i wrote ;) No just kidding. I really love the chapter!
Date: 11/12/12 11:52 pm Title: Dolls
Even though this is just the beginning of the story, it is very exciting and gripping. And very well written.
Date: 11/02/12 12:47 pm Title: Zombie
more. more now please! :P this was a cliff hanger and I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!
Date: 10/27/12 02:32 pm Title: Dolls
This was the chapter that made me fall in love
Date: 10/21/12 10:02 pm Title: Zombie
So cool! I see you ended on a cliffie. You evil....>:D
I bet the people went crazy over this. Yay! Really looking forward to the next chappie. We're gonna have some fun c:
Date: 10/21/12 09:24 pm Title: I'll Eat You Up
Wut. I have no clue what the hell just happened, or why. But I love it.
Author's Response: You mean the yummy sex.?? :D
Author's Response:
You mean the yummy sex.?? :D
Date: 10/21/12 08:56 pm Title: Dolls
Interesting... Mmmmm... This is a different plot. I'd like to see where it will go
Date: 10/21/12 07:29 pm Title: Fliped
I've only known you for a couple hours. but could I teach you how to jerk off? XD I'm just playing with you, it was very sexy hexy. ;)
Author's Response: XD hell ya :) ..... thank u for reading
Date: 10/21/12 05:32 am Title: Zombie
Tom's dad being bitten by a werewolf was not expected! loved this chapter too!
Date: 10/21/12 05:30 am Title: Zombie
The suspense of what is going to happen next is going to kill me! Can't wait for more!
Date: 10/21/12 05:07 am Title: I'll Eat You Up
That sex scene! *dead* so good!
Date: 10/21/12 05:05 am Title: I'll Eat You Up
Omg I seriously thought Andreas had Tom inthe beginning until Bill got to Andreas first! Loved that part!
Date: 10/21/12 04:36 am Title: Ice-cream
I like how even though there are suspensful parts in this chapter, there are also little cute moments :)
Date: 10/21/12 04:35 am Title: Ice-cream
The suspense of Bill knowing that something was wrong at the park and having to run killed me!
Date: 10/21/12 04:08 am Title: Lies
Oooh Bill is the new singer for the band! Can't wait to see how that goes!