Date: 12/31/15 06:21 am Title: Dolls
pls don't end this story like this, update soon?????
Date: 01/30/13 07:34 pm Title: The Mentor
this was awesome! as usual! Lovesss babe!
Date: 01/09/13 10:04 pm Title: Hallucinations
I really hope they get to Bill soon! I love the suspense!
Date: 01/09/13 10:03 pm Title: Hallucinations
Another great and very descriptive chapter! Loved it!
Date: 01/07/13 11:44 pm Title: Hallucinations
Tomi Can save Bill I know it!!!! It might take all of their strength to get Bill out of the hell he seems to be in but I believe Tom can help him
Date: 01/07/13 01:24 pm Title: Hallucinations
As always beautiful and full of emotions. I like that :)! You wanted me to tell you what you could write the next time so here I go: You could write more about the situation of Bill. Not to many details but just that many to make the readers very curious. Also tell a little more in David's point of view and of course keep up with Tom. You did really a good job Nena!! xx
Date: 12/31/12 03:48 am Title: Dolls
i think i feel the same way that tom does. lol. the mini story of the doll sounds like it could be real.
Date: 12/03/12 09:04 pm Title: The Mentor
poor Bill!!!! Tomi don't let the shadows consume Bill!!! save him...
Date: 12/03/12 06:10 pm Title: The Mentor
Gah cliff hanger! I gotta know if Bill and Tom find each other again! Another great chapter!
Date: 12/03/12 06:08 pm Title: The Mentor
That sex scene was hot, no lie.
Date: 12/03/12 05:55 pm Title: Explosive
Now I'm gonna be constantly wondering if David is going to tell Tom who he is and I'll be wondering what happened to Bill! Great chapter.
Date: 12/03/12 05:53 pm Title: Explosive
Very well written. very good details. I loved it as usual!
Date: 12/03/12 12:11 pm Title: The Mentor
Wow that last part is very good! It leads me to many questions like, where the hell is Bill? I hope you write another chapter soon :) It's beautiful!
Date: 12/03/12 11:30 am Title: The Mentor
awsome job hun, just thought i would let you know that you put the part were, tom is worred about the g's then finds them and smashes a lamp on geos, head in twice
Author's Response:
just changed it thank you for telling me :) and thank you so much for leaving a review it makes me really happy :D
Date: 11/19/12 02:35 am Title: Explosive
very moving, a real page turner or mouse clicker... very well done. surprise ending and unexpected. cant wait to read more.
Date: 11/19/12 02:34 am Title: Zombie
interesting spin on things. this gives respect back to vampires after twilight ruined it. well done
Date: 11/19/12 02:33 am Title: I'll Eat You Up
interesting ending. on the edge of my seat captivating.
Date: 11/19/12 02:32 am Title: Ice-cream
lots of twists and turns, very exciting!
Date: 11/19/12 12:10 am Title: Lies
Lilia's character is very sweet. and just the all around flow of how the characters interact is very well done.
Date: 11/19/12 12:07 am Title: Normal
very funny and sweet.