Date: 02/03/12 02:05 am Title: Chapter 7
Lovely final chapter. The whole story was amazing and I'll be so, so happy if you write another. Thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm working on a few non-BDSM pieces right now, but I won't be able to resist Dominant Tom forever, I'm quite sure. LOL
Date: 02/02/12 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 7
nice end to this chapter looking forward to more
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 02/02/12 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 6
I missed the fifth update as well and had two chappies to read :)
Amazing. Now I know where the title came from :)
(Don't forget to check the "complete" box!)
Author's Response: I will, when it's finished. One more chapter to go! ;0)
Date: 02/02/12 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 6
this was fun and beatifull all together, you are great, thank for this incredible story, jaja, I`m drooling
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and enjoying!
Date: 02/02/12 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 6
I love these stories of yours! Where do you get these kind of ideas? Have any personal experience? :D Anyways, I hope you plan on writing a lot more of these kind of fics. Love, MyPrecious
Author's Response: BDSM is definitely a niche I'm comfortable in, so there should be another one along sometime. I was thinking of going way back to the first encounter that began it all. And yes, I am drawing on some personal experience combined with research. The actual strangulation experience itself is pure fiction though, that's never a smart idea in practice. lol
Date: 02/02/12 11:52 am Title: Chapter 6
Hmm, lots of love for this one as well, really pretty climax to a well-build story, i must say.
Well described and lovely as always and I adored how after his breaking point, Tom was strong enough to come back to himself, though cleansed of tension.
And honestly, i really can't believe this all happened in a doorstep. Smh, XD
either way, I'm really curious as to how you're going to continue this, now that it's 'over' though I'm confident that, whatever it is, you're going to do it well.
hope you'll update soon,
love,
Dawn
Author's Response: It's not quite over yet - I have one last chapter that will post later tonight. I'm so glad you enjoyed this, thanks for sticking with me!
Date: 02/02/12 04:58 am Title: Chapter 6
Amazing final chapter. This whole story has been so downright sexy and dirty but so tender and caring at the same time. Great stuff. Thank you.
Author's Response: There's still one chapter left to go that I'll put up later this evening. Thank you for reading!
Date: 02/02/12 01:02 am Title: Chapter 6
nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! The final chapter will post later tonight. :0)
Date: 02/01/12 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 6
sigh just cant get enough that was fab totally fab
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 01/31/12 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 5
beautiful, very pretty indeed. This is discribing real BDSM. I mean, the kinky shit is fun and all, but- to my personal unprofessional opinion -this is what the dominant/submissive relationship is really about. Trust, love and responsibility. Trust from the submissive, responsibility from the dom and love from both sides.
I think you're describing that really well and I love how you're taking the audience with you on Tom's breakdown, other than simply stating him breaking down. I feel like we sort of go along with him and it's great.
Outside of the lovey-dovey talk, though, this WAS especially hot. The image of a completely submissive Tom is.. idk, really something, because he's so completely not in RL and most stories. The image you described when Bill re-entered the room. *chills* I'm telling you.
Now that he's broken, though. What will happen... ? :O
I hope to find out soon!
love,
Dawn
Author's Response: Trying to pull that flip where Tom is submissive and Bill dominant was kind of tricky. For me I guess it helps that I think we're seeing from both of them most of the time is a protective mask, so who knows what's under there? Heh. Thanks!
Date: 01/31/12 04:51 am Title: Chapter 5
This is one helluva hot story. I can't wait so read more. I have really enjoyed the Safeword, and this is a perfect sequal with role reversal. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you! I have thoroughly enjoyed writing both!
Date: 01/31/12 04:07 am Title: Chapter 5
I don't know how you do it, but you made this chapter both intensly sexual and sweet and tender at the same time. You have a real talent.
Author's Response: I guess it's my love for the subject matter. Heh. Thank you!
Date: 01/31/12 03:38 am Title: Chapter 5
Beautifully written.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 01/30/12 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 5
nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Final chapter coming up, thanks!
Date: 01/30/12 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 5
wow missed yesterdays chapter and saw it today a two'fer so excited and you did not disappoint. wow. just wow wow wow.
Author's Response: Thanks for all the "wow" - glad you enjoy!
Date: 01/30/12 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm finding myself a bit bored with the story. Though your writing is built up well, I just don't see any plot behind it besides BDSM smut...Sorry.
Author's Response: No problem, to each his own.
Date: 01/30/12 09:48 am Title: Chapter 4
I love this story.
Author's Response: Thank you! I aim to please.
Date: 01/30/12 07:11 am Title: Chapter 4
nice cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Next chapter incoming...
Date: 01/30/12 05:59 am Title: Chapter 4
OMG, you left Tom's cock wired up to the mains!!! Let's hope there's not a power surge. Or maybe let's hope there is! LOL!!! More soon please.
Author's Response: You're sadistic, I can really appreciate that about a person. lol Thanks!
Date: 01/28/12 10:08 am Title: Chapter 3
holy shit!!! this story is amazing, please you have to continue because this canīt stay like this, itīs way to good to stay like this
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm uploading the next chapter tonight, soon as I'm done with responses. :0)