Date: 04/15/23 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 06/07/14 07:25 am Title: Chapter 7
I don't know, what can I write... It was also absolutely amazing. You are very talented. I don't like this type of stories, but your is great. I saw between lines a very much of their love.
Thank you for this story.
Date: 02/08/14 11:34 am Title: Chapter 6
Loved this chapter. Can't wait to try it out on my future husband someday.
Date: 02/08/14 10:59 am Title: Chapter 6
Loved this chapter. Can't wait to try it out on my future husband someday.
Date: 02/06/14 07:21 am Title: Chapter 7
This is so well done, amazing story!
Date: 04/12/12 01:28 am Title: Chapter 1
simply fantastic! Its writers like you that give me the edge I crave in xD I look up to you as a fellow THwriter! Job well done love. XOXO
Author's Response: Thank you! I myself found a wonderful mentor here at THF so I really appreciate the idea of someone feeling that way about me. As weird as this site is, you can grow a lot from it if you go at it the right way.
Date: 03/29/12 08:37 am Title: Chapter 7
Spectacular. Enough said.
Author's Response: You're making me blush. ;0)
Date: 03/29/12 08:15 am Title: Chapter 6
I feel exhausted now too:-)
Author's Response: I was definitely exhausted at points while writing it too. LOL
Date: 03/29/12 07:57 am Title: Chapter 5
It almost brought me to tears. The moment between them in the end of the chapter was so incredibly powerful and intense... you desribed it tremendously well.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! A lot of people have surprised me by saying this series has made them cry, including my husband.
Date: 03/29/12 07:34 am Title: Chapter 4
Nice:-)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 03/29/12 07:05 am Title: Chapter 3
Here it comes again, a funny moment: “And yet you were swinging from the doorframe like an ape from a tree,”... so adorable.
The bathing of Tom was delicious. You could easily just go on and on and on and I would't mind one bit:-)
Author's Response: I was trying to figure out a way to humiliate Tom specifically, and somehow it seemed right that implying he was anything less than immaculate in appearance or hygiene would work. Thank you!
Date: 03/29/12 06:32 am Title: Chapter 2
Some of the moments in this chapter made me laugh... clinging on coala Bill, pretty funny...
You balance it out so nicely...Bill's needed roughness with Tom to get the job done combined with ever so present, deep underlyinging care and tenderness for each other. It's such a dreamy scenario, when you know the other so well, in and out...
Author's Response: I have this thing for writing the twins scuffling with one another, I realized recently I've done it in a number of my fics. I guess I just find the image both endearing and somewhat believable. LOL Thank you!
Date: 03/29/12 06:01 am Title: Chapter 1
Such a great beginning. It's amazing how detailed your stories can get. I can imagine everything you described Bill has been doing so well. It feels as if I was in the house with them:-)
The game has just started:-) and Tom is for a treat:-)
Author's Response: I'm glad you feel like you can "see" the house. It's important to me to convey setting well, it's the readers doorway into the story after all. Thank you!
Date: 02/19/12 03:19 am Title: Chapter 7
I love this series. I'm with Amdee (love her Billshido,Tomshido shorts). Your writing is wonderful. I've never done bdsm, but the way you write makes it seem like a beautiful world to play in. Your writing is smooth, subtle, flows so very well. It's carefully crafted but not in an obvious way. I love what you've done with B/T in these stories. Twins couldn't be close enough, lovers couldn't be close enough, this bdsm is so deep it eclipses those. Wonderful!
Author's Response: Isn't Amdee amazing? She leaves me speechless at times. Thank you! For me, it really is a beautiful world to play in because I lean so heavily into the part of it that explores truly caring for someone else. Thanks so much!
Date: 02/19/12 01:31 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm soo glad i got to read this!! This is by far one of the best BDMS i've read. Your style and descriptions put me on cloud nine xD Thanks for posting
Author's Response: Thank YOU for reading and enjoying! That's a great compliment since doing BDSM well means a lot to me. :0)
Date: 02/16/12 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 7
*gasp!* I can't believe I never reviewed the final chapter of this. Other reviewers have pretty much said everything I want to convey. The power-play, the emotions...
Hands down, you have the best BDSM writing I have ever read :)
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for that!
Date: 02/14/12 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 7
just because im a seasoned vet at this, i should point out that this was NOT safe breath-play so it shouldn't be tried at home. But i liked the sequel!!! will there be another one with Bill underneath? i luv dominant Tom...*sigh*
Author's Response: I actually argued back and forth with myself a bit over whether or not to include a disclaimer that said something along the lines of, "do not EVER try the asphyxiation shit at home - it killed Michael Hutchence for a reason." In the end I didn't do it because I figured common sense would win out for most readers. Thanks for the review! The next installment will actually be another prequel of how this relationship started, basically an expansion of something that's mentioned in Absolution. After that, yeah - I'll probably go back to Dom Tom, I love him too.
Date: 02/05/12 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 7
Okay... Holy shit... I'm trying to write something coherent here, but I'm not sure if I can. I'm in emotional mess right now. I really am.
This is how you write perfect BDSM. It's not about technical details or complicated patterns, but it's in deep, primal, shaking emotions. BDSM is love like no other, it goes so deep in us, to areas we are scared to let to come to our knowledge.
You managed to capture that emotional depth so perfectly. Thank you. I mean it.
I don't think I've ever been in situation where I wanted to cry when reading smut, but now I did. I weas emotionally so involved and present that in that scene where Bill fucked Tom in the troat, I felt like I wanted to cry, because it was so pure, so overwhelming, so beautiful. It wa so much like love.
Your writing is very talented as well and I absolutely love this fic. Woah, I'm still shaking. The tension, it weas perfect. Straight to fav's!
Author's Response: Thank you Amdee! You should know I've been reading your work as well and you write so beautifully. I'm really enjoying your fiction! I completely agree with your views about the emotions behind BDSM, it is all about the relationship for me, and about caring for someone else completely. I'm so glad you get this!
Date: 02/03/12 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 7
Squee, too cute. To absolutely wonderful.
Are you trying to kill me, woman?
Seriously, this was really sweet and I love all the little gestures they make to each other and even the last sex-scene was very intense and fitting- just that last tip over the edge. :)
It really showed just how pliant Tom has become after their little 'session', as he could simply enjoy it without struggling because it was sore. It wasn't forced, just okay, because they trust each other.
I also really liked the explanation of how, when, how long etc. It was a small part of the chapter but, as always, very significant. Bill's shoulder will never be quite the same.
Loved the story and I do hope to see more of where this came from
(though I'm also still secretly hoping for an update on 'incepted' *whistles*)
Take your time, though, a good story takes time ;)
With love as always,
Dawn
Author's Response: I'm not trying to kill you, I would miss hearing from you! LOL I have another one percolating in my head, but in the meantime I do want to try to finish Incepted first. It's been sitting out there in progress for over a year. How the heck did that happen? Bah, I'm too easily distracted...
Date: 02/03/12 05:23 am Title: Chapter 7
this was a good story!
an i cant wait for the next story!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed, and there will certainly be more eventually.