Date: 02/28/12 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 22
GAAAAHH!!! TOM U BASTARD!!! shiet..i rly hoped they would get back but now NO WAY! so now bill/bu r gunna b together u gunna tell wat happened to tom? MAKE HIM SUFFER! X'D god this fic bringsout so many emotions specialy hate and anger LOVE IT! but i rly hate tom atm XP *stabs him with needles*
Author's Response: Needles!! Oh, god, that would fucking hurt! He deserves it though, rotten bastard. We're not going to find out much about the long term in this story. You have to wait for the sequel that Judith182 wanted, since she was the 100th reviewer, and which I will be starting this week. It's wonderful that this is making people feel so riled up! Yay! I feel so good! Oh, except that Bill is so sad. :(
Date: 02/28/12 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 22
I. Fucking. KNEW IT. GODDAMMIT THAT ASSHOLE
But now Bill and Bu are gonna be together at least. Right? Right?!?
Author's Response: Well, I think the ending of that chapter bodes well, don't you? Maybe? Hopefully?
Date: 02/28/12 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 22
Don't know what to say. I think I feel almost as devastated as Bill must do by Tom's actions. I cannot believe that he was fucking Jasmine while expressing undying love to Bill. God, I am so sad by how this is turning out. I didn't trust Tom, but even so, for Bill's sake I hoped...and I even felt sorry for Tom that he'd fucked up before and was trying so hard to regain Bill's trust. Bastard. You see what you've done to me with your amazing writing, I'm getting all emotional over it. And now you have me wondering just how this is all going to end. You are incredible.
Author's Response: Oh, lord, thank you, what a wonderful review! I hate that you feel so wretched about it, but at the same time, I'm thrilled to hear the effect this had. I'm thinking that Tom just got careless, slipped up a few times, and whoops, got a girl knocked up. But if he hadn't, and Bill had gone through with the pregnancy thing, it would have ended up so much worse later on. rnNow, we'll have to see how Bill deals with all this. Most of that, though, is going to be in a sequel!rnThanks for writing, Helen!
Date: 02/28/12 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yup! I knew it. Tom didn't fool me for a second (though I do think he was sincerely trying, but he has a problem). I also think the therapist knows about all of this...
Date: 02/28/12 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 22
This story is amazing! Love it!
Author's Response: Thank you, and thanks for letting me know, it's very appreciated :)
Date: 02/28/12 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 22
first of all i have to say i think you're an amazing writer. i just started reading this fic yesterday and i've been really enjoying it. you have a great way with words and you always know how to set the mood perfectly to help the reader relate the best to the story and characters. i also really admire your attention to details! i think it's most noticeable in tom's behavior, be it his tongue slips or his actions that are just this side of 'too rough' or 'too careless' and his constant search for reassurance from bill. not to mention his exaggerated need to placate bill...
with that being said, i am soooo disappointed with where this seems to be going :( sorry haha. i was rooting for you, tom! whyyyy
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to point out what you liked about my writing! It's really nice to know it's been noticed. rnrnAnd this Tom seems to have disappointed a lot of people. But, as you said, his true colors were all over the details! He's very, very selfish, to the point of being self-destructive. Came back to bite him in the ass.
Date: 02/28/12 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 22
Fucking Tom! I was rooting for their marriage to work too.
Author's Response: :( I know, a lot of people were. Even Bill was trying. Damn it, Tom.
Date: 02/28/12 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 22
Tan tan tan taaaaaaaaaaan! I see a divorce coming... *evilgrin*
Author's Response: Well, would YOU stick around?? I know I wouldn't.
Date: 02/28/12 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 22
And OMG I forgot about that... O_O Is Bill going to have Bu's baby?!!?!?! .____.
Author's Response: You'll have to wait for the sequel to find out what's going to happen next!
Date: 02/28/12 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 22
Uhm, did Tom... just... OHHHAGHDGAJDK WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK?! ;____; damn, this complete moron *throws fits*
Ugh! You and your whistling! *glares*
Author's Response: *Hiding from glare laser beams behind a plutonium shield* Yes! Tom did it! He's bad! Bad Tom! You knew it was coming, I warned you!
Date: 02/28/12 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 22
no, why would you do thiis??? Why cant Tom and Bill mek it??
im gonna cry T.T
Author's Response: Um....Sorry? This was the plan. I know it's going to disappoint all the ones who were hoping Tom had really pulled his shit together. :\
Date: 02/28/12 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 22
That douche Tom, I knew he was lying!! Just let Bill be with bu.
Author's Response: Damn it, Tom! Such a jerk.
Date: 02/28/12 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 22
OMGOD I love this story so much! It's just so, so good and dramatic, and exticting and angsty and just EVERYTHING. Awesome stuff.
Author's Response: Holy cow! Thank you! I'm so glad you're liking it and letting me know, thanks!!!
Date: 02/28/12 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 22
Ohmygod, I knew something would come up, but I didn't expect Tom fuck up so big.
Poor poor Bill!
Author's Response: Tom made a boo boo... I feel so bad for Bill, too. It's all so sad.
Date: 02/28/12 10:43 am Title: Chapter 21
Man. This is so not going to end well... Haha... I like masochistic Bill. Tom/Bill is nice in a weird way. I think I am sadistic.
Btw, the Tom, Bill and Bushido in this story are totally different from the real deal, and it seems to be heading that way. They could have been any other characters with BTB slapped on them. Peace! No offence! Just a comment. Looking forward to the next chapters!
Author's Response: A little sadism never hurt anyone! Well, okay, maybe it did, but only in a good way. rnrnAs for them being different from the RL folks, well, I know - I have to write AU. I couldn't do the RL ones because I just don't know that much about them, lots of really excellent stories have already been based on RL, and I'm just more interested in making up my own little world. And so, they won't behave like the RL guys, because then it would be "Bill of Tokio Hotel as a coffee barista, and his twin, Tom, as the hip hop loving stranger who walks into his life on a rainy day." Their personalities have to match the story. You're right that AU could have other characters replace TH, but we like to picture Bill and Tom and Bushido and whoever else in the spots. Thanks for the review, hope you like what's coming up next :)
Date: 02/28/12 10:03 am Title: Chapter 21
Yeah, my suspicions of Tom lying are still there. I don't think the whole 'talking with Jasmine' story is true at all.Especially when he almost slipped up and said weeks instead of months. There is no doubt in my mind that he's still cheating.
I guess I'll just have to wait and see if I'm correct =]
Author's Response: What!! You doubt Tom's sincerity??!! Gasp! Oh, the nerve! Everyone else seems to think that B/T are doing very well, thank you! (which actually surprised me*cough cough)
Date: 02/28/12 02:17 am Title: Chapter 21
So glad Bill and Tom are working on their relationship
Author's Response: I know, they're doing better. Bill had to accept that he made this choice. And because he knows Anis sees the door as closed, maybe he can start letting him go as well. Maybe.
Date: 02/28/12 12:43 am Title: Chapter 21
Ooh. Bill's mood is changing. He's a lot more responsive to and understanding of Tom. Yay. Good work!
Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, I think Bill is starting to accept the choice he made to stay with Tom. That makes a huge difference.
Date: 02/27/12 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 21
ugh! tom is so up to no good! poor bill, please don't let his heart get stomped on!
Author's Response: I may have to respond to this after the next chapter.....pls remind me....
Date: 02/27/12 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 21
oh! wonderfull cap. I love it really so much! XD i hope that their baby come up soon well no so soon but come up... hehehehe y im dying for the next cap... really dying
Author's Response: No, no dying allowed - you won't be able to finish the story!