Date: 03/01/12 08:09 am Title: Chapter 22
She's 6 weeks along? oO
Can I please kill Tom? I'm so angry right now. How could he throw his chance away like that? And what about Bill, now that he went through all the surgery and stuff... this is so not fair for Bill.
Hope he gets a divorce and has a good life and a lot of kids with Bushido.
Author's Response: Killing off Tom....that would make him a sympathetic character! People would feel bad for him! Ooh, what a deliciously evil plot that would be!rnHopefully Bill will end up happy!
Date: 02/29/12 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 22
Fuck... Fuck... Fuck thats all i got say im sad
Author's Response: I know, me too. Here's a tissue, we'll cry it out together :*(
Date: 02/29/12 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 22
Wait a sec, I'm kinda bad with time so while reading I thought that Jasmine had been impregnated *prior* to his promises to Bill. But people in the comments are saying it was after. If that's the case, I completely condemn it DX
I've been for Tom all this time, provided he'd change, but this gives me pause -- if not pushes me back over to Anis' side.
Author's Response: Push? It's a big fat shove! Six weeks.....Tom started cheating on Bill again almost right away! Maybe just a couple times, after all, he was "trying" to work on his marriage, so I'm sure he wouldn't have gone all out, just a few friskies here and there. Rotten, just rotten!
Date: 02/29/12 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 22
lo sabía..!! Tom no cambiaría,lo siento por Bill que tenía toda la esperanza de arreglar su matrimonio..
me tienes en suspenso..
Author's Response: No, Tom didn't change. He's used to having it all. Bill really did put a lot of hope into repairing his marriage, and Tom ruined it. As for keeping you in suspense, there's another chapter coming soon. Might be the last one for this story, though (but there's a sequel!)
Date: 02/29/12 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 22
Noooooooooo noooo noooooo
Author's Response: :*( Yep.
Date: 02/29/12 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 22
Wow. I'm so mad at Tom. I think he really does want to make this work, but I also don't know that he deserves any more chances. This story is so good, thank you for the update!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you for letting me know you like it! And I'm thinking that Bill was very, very generous the first time.
Date: 02/29/12 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 22
wow!! you threw me off there..jasmine is pregnant? I really want bushido and bill to be happy together, but i'm kinda worried about Tom, he was trying so hard.
I haven't had a chance to catch up with this fic, but I just sat here and read the last 10 chapters.
I'm still loving this amazing story xx
Author's Response: Thank you! And yes, Tom knocked up his mistress. (*shakes head sadly*). Tom made his bed, poor guy, not even imagining the fallout of his actions.
Date: 02/29/12 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 22
OMG. I felt that this would happen.
Date: 02/29/12 11:39 am Title: Chapter 22
Tom is evil! He wanted to kill his own baby and have another one with Bill to have a "perfect" little family!? What a bastard, wealthy scum, he deserves to be castrated with a butter knife... He doesn't love Bill so much after all... If he prefers women why doesn't he go with Jasmine, then? Maybe she is not a complete nasty whore, maybe she's in love with him and now, the mother of his child.
I only hope that Tom can be able to assume the fact that he really fucked up everything and leaves Bill and Anis alone.
God, thanks! I'm happy and satisfied again like a little child after a long breast feeding session =)
Author's Response: lmao! Thank you, that is the best compliment EVER. We'll just have to see what the future holds for these guys....
Date: 02/29/12 10:28 am Title: Chapter 22
Oh how much I love you I know Tom couldn't change at all this fast!!
6 weeks it means a month and half so after he made all his promises to Bill
Hope this time Bill will not act like an escort girl and stay with the only one that really respects him
He can have some money from Tom for the divorce and love from Anis.. So all is good!
I had no idea of what could happen and how it would end .
The Jasmine thing.. good job girl, really
Author's Response: I was waiting for your review! Knew how much this would tickle your toes. I love Billshido! Not that Tom/Bill is a bad thing, but they're both pretty boys, and I like the strong guy with the fem, makee mee happee! Thanks for sticking through it!
Date: 02/29/12 07:57 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm also glad Bill and Bushido are together. I'm glad to see Bu in a better light as its usually Tom who's the hero and Bu the villain but I love how you've changed the roles.
Also like I said before, cheaters never change haha! Tom really fucked up this time. I think Bill and Bu belong together because Tom just didn't learn to treasure what he had. He wanted to trap Bill with the pregnancy and I am so sad Bill had to go through all the medical procedures for such a scummy husband! I think Jasmine should dump Tom's ass too (I know I'm being mean but I couldn't resist xD). Anyway I loved this chapter and can't wait for the next one! :3
Author's Response: I somehow missed responding to this review, sorry! Bushido tends to get used as a plug-in villain in most stories. Glad you like the reversal! And you saw what Tom was doing - great! A lot of people seemed to think that Tom was being sweet and wanted to start a family! Aaaaahhhhaahahahahaaa! No. He's scummy. Thanks for reviewing, I love to hear different points of view!
Date: 02/29/12 04:50 am Title: Chapter 22
Wow. Not entirely unexpected though. xD
Author's Response: Nope, I didn't think so either ;)
Date: 02/29/12 03:56 am Title: Chapter 22
I should just “let go, let flow” ain’t that the Buddhist way. I’ll try to accept but it’s hard but somehow I might get there. Curse my stubbornness I need to kick its ass to stop siding with Tom. But I still don’t really like Bushido only sometimes. Maybe if his name wasn’t Bushido I could accept it. Actually if this story was written with the characters having different names I would definitely be for the Bill character to be with Bushido if their names weren’t that. God I need to shut up. You have been wonderful by letting me complain all the time I have been reviewing about how I don’t like the pairings I bet you get frustrated with me. sorry. But yeah I guess because the whole cliché that Bill and Tom must always be together regardless of the situation has been really imprinted in my head. In the beginning I knew what I was getting myself into when I continued reading the story I could of just stopped and never looked back. But I know a good story when I read it. So I have gone through this journey with complains but gladly. I can’t help but read it before class I’m always looking for some type of update in THF (I’m and addict. Sue me.) I definitely won’t hate you like I said you have been wonderful for taking some of my suggestions and I feel honored that you have. (I just hope that if Bill were to have a baby it’s Tom’s, that would be the biggest blow to both of them, Bill because he will be having a baby with the man that cheated on him and on Tom because he is going to have a kid with Bill but they might not be together again. Maybe no happy family for him.) I’m going to hell for this but I hope that Jasmine has a miscarriage. =( yeah I’m definitely going to hell. Ummm…you are wonderful and awesome and thanks for reading and responding to my rants when I review. I still can’t wait for the next chapter like I said I will be waiting at the edge of my seat. Are you really doing Tomshido because I will definitely be reading that. I finally realized why I don’t like Bill and Bushido together because it’s an mpreg and I love when Tom and Bill have babies and live happily ever after…I’m complicated. Believe it or not I sometimes don’t mind Bill and Bushido…I’m complicated. =)
Author's Response: If I sue you for being a THF addict, who's going to sue me? I only started writing them because I couldn't read them at work! (no cell phone with internet, I live in the dark ages). Not irritated at all by your rants, rant away! I know how you feel about having a favorite story style, I do too, and believe it or not, I love happy endings. And I like the B/T preg stories, too! I don't have anything vested in the real people, so Bushido as a person doesn't affect me one way or the other. I'm glad you're sticking with it, which just shows that, even though some things rub the wrong way, you're enjoying the rest of the story, which makes me very happy. As for Jasmine having a miscarriage - you won't go to hell for thinking that. Evil little thoughts are perfectly natural and funny! I laughed when I saw that. BTW have you read Raiju's King of Kingz? I bring it up whenever I can because it's the best story on this site, and if you can handle B/B, it's unbelievable! As for Tomshido.....yes, once I'm done with your sequel, I think that will be the next one! Love your long winded reviews, keep them coming!
Date: 02/29/12 02:08 am Title: Chapter 22
Oh, you'd better run fast :D
Anywho I think Senior knocked up Jasmine and they've come up with this plan to push Bill out of the picture. :)
Author's Response: Laffin....I think...rnSenior knocking her up...what a great plot twist! But then I'd be writing this story for another year, and Leichenwasser, I ain't. (Not even close to being that good, either ;)rnAnd I want to get this wrapped up, get the sequel done, and get on to the TomshidoIdidnotsayTomshido I have planned!
Date: 02/29/12 01:01 am Title: Chapter 22
whaaaaaaaattttt????????????????
But....but... but....
There is no going back after this!!.. That was the lowest thing that Tom could do to Bill... 6 weeks??? 6?? that´s almost a month!!.. so he was with that slut recently D: .. I still don´t understand why he wanted to have a child so much.. because he knew he was going to have a child with that whore and wanted to somehow compensate that situation??.. But now I do understand why he was so desperate to hear "I love you" from Bill..
But.. is not fair to Anis.. he was about to move on!!! ..Bill makes me angry too.. because he is so selfish.. he doesn´t want to be with Anis but he doesn´t let him find someone else grrrr .. I mean.. I understand him but still!!.. Omg I don´t know what to think really, I don´t know what to feel.. what is the right thing to do.. I dont know anything anymore waaaaaaaa .. I know I said before that I wanted bill to cheat on Tom.. but.. I dont want Tom to suffer that much.. well.. maybe a little.. I don´t know :(
P.D: So you would like to visit peru?? How cool!!.. I live in Lima :).. near to Miraflores.. When TH came to Peru they stayed in a hotel in front of larcomar.. with a great view of the sea :) .. I have a video on my Facebook in front of the hotel.. singing and stuff :D Hope you´ll come one day!! ohhh..and GREAT CHAPTER!!
Author's Response: Tom screwed up, irrepairably, I think. And here's how guys like Tom work: he doesn't want to lose Bill - that's who he married, his property, what he wants for his home life. He could mess around with a dozen women a week, but he'd still claim to love Bill and only Bill. So, knowing that his cheating could make him lose Bill, he wants to get him knocked up so that Bill would be a lot less likely to just up and leave. Tom would have his little family in one area of his life, and a bunch of women in another. He wants his home life secure. rnrnOh, and Anis....he wasn't ready to move on. He was just forcing himself to try. I don't think he and Micah would have gotten far anyway - Anis is just too closed off emotionally right now. rnrnBill wants Anis! Don't be mad at Bill por favor! He really wants Anis - but he chose to try to fix his marriage with Tom because to him, it was the right thing to do. But he really was in love with Anis. rnrnTom, well, he's probably going to be suffering now....not forever, he'll pick up and start a new life without Bill. He'll be hurt, he'll miss him, but he'll know it's his own damned fault! rnrnYes, I'll be visiting Peru. Definitely staying in Miraflores. There are so many interesting archeological sites to see outside of Machu Pichu! Going to Caral and Pachacamac! Hope to go this summer. rnrnMuchas Gracias!
Date: 02/29/12 12:15 am Title: Chapter 22
I would be lying if i said that I didn't see this coming. The only surprise to me was Bill going to Bushido but then you did tell me you were keeping Bushido involved in the sequel. I'm just quite disappointed that he might keep Bill. Even if Tom did wrong and I want to cut off his d**k for doing such a stupid thing. I got to get use to this different Tom than what I usually like to read. Why do you always cause me to have panic attacks by posting right when I have class and the same class that I told you caused me my other panic attack. shame on you. ;) anywho I can't wait till the next chapter I'm at the edge of my seat and ready to be hospitalized for waiting. ;) stay awesome!
Author's Response: Deep breaths, Judith, deep breaths. It's going to be okay. Best way to handle difficulties is to take the Buddhist path of acceptance. This Tom is not the Tom of other stories. Accept....accept.....deep breaths.....Anis might just be keeping Bill....Tom is not worthy......And quit reading this before classes!! Well, at least you'll get some peace and quiet in hospital, you can digest the difficulties and learn acceptance. Told you Bu would be in the sequel, your sequel! Oh....I really hope you don't hate me after that's all said and done.....
Date: 02/28/12 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 22
oh, thank goodness for bu! tom - you're a turd.
Author's Response: Laffin
Date: 02/28/12 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 22
tom is the most stupid man on the world! i cant believe that him did that to bill! well yes i can believe cause he is impossible change of a day to otherand this goin to happen later or sooner but he and bill wishing have a baby .... and bill starting to having and jasmine that b"""""! ahhhhhh me da tanta rabia! poor bill afortunadly bill have bushido but TOM!!! you la fregaste bien grande here!
Author's Response: I know, I know! Tom! Convincing Bill to do all that to his body! I'm in a rage about it, too! Anis will help Bill, though (violin romantico en el fondo). Si, Tom la fregaste, enormemente!
Date: 02/28/12 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 22
Waoooo!!! No me esperaba esto, empezaba a dudar de Tom, pero jamas pense que ya estuviera engañanado. Al parecer nunca dejo de engañar, es un total mentiroso!!! Y lo mas triste es que Bill practicamente se habia vuelto a enamorar de sus esposo, creo que la relacion con Bushido va a ser complicada tambien.
Author's Response: Okay, Perez, let me see if I've got this translated right! I'm glad you were one to know that Tom wasn't to be trusted. But he really was more deceitful than you expected! He really dropped a bomb, I know! Lying about never cheating again. Muy terrible! Bill was trying to accept Tom, trust him again. And yes, his relationship with Bu will probably be complicated, but we'll see! (How was that? My god, I really need to learn Spanish!)
Date: 02/28/12 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 22
You know what they say, once a cheater, always a cheater.
I am pretty surprised at how things have turned out, but I can't say I wasn't expecting it. I hate that I was right and that Tom was still in some way, cheating on Bill. I feel terrible for Bill.
Although Tom did seem sincere, it's quite unfortunate that that isn't going to help him in this situation. At least he knows that he screwed up, but he really should have kept it in his pants lol.
I'm so happy Bill went to Bu's! He is exactly what he needs right now. Someone to hold him and just be there.
This was a fantastic chapter (even though it was sad and heart breaking)! I felt like I could feel exactly how Bill was feeling.
I don't know if I've told you this before, but you are an amazing writer! I look forward to more! =D
Author's Response: I think Tom felt invincible - that he was working on his marriage, things were going to get better, that he loves Bill, and as long as he loves Bill, why not have a little fun? I'm so glad you're happy Bill went to Bu's! That was what I was hoping for, but I'm thinking some of my readers were a little upset, hoping for B/T to still work out. Me, I'm all for the big strong Anis holding sweet sad Bill til he falls asleep ;) rnThank you for letting me know that I put you there, feeling what Bill felt. Don't know if I told you this before, but you are an awesome reviewer! Give me a couple days, you'll get more!