Date: 01/31/12 12:07 am Title: Chapter 4
Just wanted to pop in and say, Congrates on the Feature! :D I've only still read this far to chapter four, but hopefully I'll have enough time this week to catch up on this story, which I must say is wonderful! ^.^
Author's Response: Thank you on both accounts, that is very, very sweet of you to say. I was so excited to get featured, you would not believe. Glad you're liking it so far, thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/30/12 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 9
a;sldkfjaslkdfjsadklfjskdlfs.
i hate tom.
for once in my entire life, i hate tom.
i want bu <3
bring bu back!
i want bill and bu!
bu's so much nicer and sweeter and better than tom. that asswipe.
grr.
it's Trumper Senior isn't it? the guy who's out to get Bill. i bet it is xD
BTWS: THIS IS AWESOME! i just wish tom would go away. and bill would stop going back to him. obvs he's gonna cheat again. I WANT BU <3 bahaah
keep it coming love!
xx
Author's Response: Lovely, wonderful, fabulous review! If I made you hate Tom, I feel I have done my job! Bu is coming back....next chapter, tomorrow..... Just wait ;)
Date: 01/30/12 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 9
I feel so sorry for Bill. He loves Tom and wants to do whatever to please him even after all his cheating.
Date: 01/30/12 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 9
Where's the Billshido??? oh God, I can't wait for those two, too much Tom/Bill for my taste, sorry... I love Tom as the protective big brother, but being realistic, Bill's behavior is frequent in a marriage of convenience. I mean, despite the fact that Bill indeed love his husband, from the beginning, he had already planned his perfect life and Tom just showed up and it was the perfect opportunity to make his dreams come true. Actually, I think it's kind of sad that some people in real life prefer being humiliated and accept an adulterer partner than giving up richness and wealth... I expect a real relationship with Bu in this fic, please?... Did I express myself properly? hehe
Author's Response: Patience, Grasshopper. Good things come to those who wait. But I shouldn't speak too soon, actually....the last chapter of the story isn't done yet, and Bill hasn't let me know if he's going to try to repair his marriage (he does love Tom, after all), or leave. And if he stays, is there a sequel...(don't forget the hints of mpreg...)
Date: 01/29/12 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 8
Tom is a sex addict!!! I want that Tom feel more jealousy in this fic ;)
Author's Response: Sex addict, that could explain things. He's a pretty jealous guy, doesn't even want Bill talking to poor Bu!
Date: 01/29/12 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 8
OK they are gross: sex nos shwoer, no teeth brushiing
Tom is such a selfish jerk even in the way he's having sex, it's all about him Bill is just a hole, a sexy one for sure, but a hole how can he not see him
Andi is definitly the crazy guy for sure
Author's Response: Everyone's entitled to be a lazy sex-slob once in a while! But just because the teeny tiny details aren't in there doesn't mean it didn't happen - maybe Bill got up in the middle of the night to pee and did a quick clean up. Maybe not. They are both normal, hygenic guys, so an occasional "don't feel like brushing so ain't gonna do it" won't hurt anyone. And yeah, Tom is a bit selfish!
Date: 01/29/12 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 8
is Tom a sexual addict? no wonder he's cheating Bill,he can't keep his pants on...
Bu has an interesting theory.i hope that is not Tom *big hopefull eyes*
:*:*:*
Date: 01/29/12 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 7
This story is really intriguing and well written, I keep wondering who is behind the attacks and how much longer Bill will be able to cope with a spoiled husband and a beast of a father in law. And how long will he resist Bushido's charme. And I cannot wait for the mpreg! Thanks for sharing this
Author's Response: Reviews like this is what it's all about! It's been a very fun story to write, and knowing there are people out there enjoying it makes me very happy. I'm glad the suspense shows, I was worried this would be too easy to figure out! As for Bushido, well, he's not going anywhere. The Mpreg is just hinted at, but I wanted to keep that option open, as I found myself actually enjoying a few other authors' mpreg stories. Thanks for reading!
Date: 01/29/12 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 7
This story is really intriguing and well written, I keep wondering who is behind the attacks and how much longer Bill will be able to cope with a spoiled husband and a beast of a father in law. And how long will he resist Bushido's charme. And I cannot wait for the mpreg! Thanks for sharing this
Date: 01/29/12 06:41 am Title: Chapter 7
This is very exciting. Always I am looking forward to new chapters.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! Here's another one for you. More tomorrow!
Date: 01/29/12 05:20 am Title: Chapter 7
I think Andi is all behind it
Date: 01/29/12 02:29 am Title: Chapter 7
i bet it' andreas doing all this.
Date: 01/26/12 07:21 am Title: Chapter 6
ohhh the last chapters were intense...first the kiss with Anis and then jealous Tom (by the way i love possesive Tom)and then the baby talk and the sex scene...mind blowing
i like how dark is the story ,it feels real ,not like other stories where all is pink ...i like this kind of atmoshpere.
i wonder who wants Bill dead...i bet is Tom's father or maybe Tom...nooo that can't be cuz with all the cheating ,he seems to love Bill...in his on way.
thx for uploading 2 chapters :*
Author's Response: Thanks for the review - I'm glad to hear it's coming across as intense as I'd hoped. And Tom (yes, the possessive Tom is soooo fun) ....well, he's not as perfect as Bill thought. Working on the next chapters now, should have a couple more soon! Thanks again, I can't tell you how great it is to see "mind blowing" pertained to my story!
Date: 01/25/12 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 4
Expected that Tom is cheating Bill. I'm not that clever I was, behaved like Bill. I smite there Tom. I love the stories and to finish them. This story is very good.
Author's Response: I have to say that your "accent" is adorable! Tom - what a bad boy. But is Bill really that good? Hmmmm.... Thank you for reading!
Date: 01/25/12 08:09 am Title: Chapter 4
You know what? To be honest, I'm not fond of twincest, and with Tom being an asshole in this story, I think it's perfect and even more interesting the plot,how Bill realises his husband's true nature and having a strong, handsome and sexy investigator to help him, protect him and offer a looot more hehe. I canīt wait to know what's next! Any typo? Sorry...
Author's Response: I think it's very interesting that someone who isn't in to the 'twincest' aspect of B&T comes to this website! I'm thinking you must be quite open-minded to read the stories anyway. I am a Billshido gal myself, and try to make up for everyone using Bushido as the plug-in "bad guy" whenever they need someone to rape Bill. As for Tom in this story - he seems pretty easy to make into a slightly darker kind of guy. I had fun with that in the "Digging" stories. Thanks for taking the time to review, it actually means a lot!
Date: 01/25/12 08:03 am Title: Chapter 4
i like the plot and it's well written...
i like Tom's character ,very realistic and i don't like that most of the chapters are written from Bushido's pov;) u should write at least one from Tom's as well,cuz i'd like to know his feelings towards Bill and what he's thinking.
i'm excited that i have a new story to read that captured my interest
Author's Response: I'm glad you like Tom! He probably won't get a chapter, I've kind of got the story based on Bill and Bushido :\ I hate to disappoint you!
Date: 01/25/12 12:34 am Title: Chapter 4
I feel so sad for Bill. I truely believe that Tom cheated on him.
Date: 01/24/12 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 4
This chapter was amazing. I loved Bill's POV and starting to learn more about him and what he's about. The tension between Bill and Tom was so palpable and the sex scene was so well written. You really captured the intimacy, the denial, the distrust, the hurt, the love,etc. It was like being a fly on the wall. They're so beautifully broken now.
Author's Response: What a great review. Thank you for taking the time to let me know not only that you're enjoying the story, but WHY. It's very, very appreciated!
Date: 01/24/12 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 4
oh dear Lord
It's been such a long time since I last red an interesting,e xciting, well written story with a possible billshido. Every thing is just perfect:the characters, the doubts, the pain we can feel, the sex scenes, the atmopshere, the plot. Great job doll you rock and thanx for sharing this and updating so often
Author's Response: I am bowled over by your review! Thank you so much! I know how you feel about getting excited about finding a good story, and I'm very flattered someone feels this way about MINE!! One thing I always make sure of is to FINISH THE STORY....and in a timely manner...because it's awful to invest emotion in one that never gets finished. So give me a week or two and it'll be all done. Thank you for letting me know how much you like this, reviews really do matter!!
Date: 01/24/12 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 4
I quite like the plot, but I can't stand Tom, shame on him! I'm looking forward the Billshido, though =)
Author's Response: Tom is not the most sympathetic character in this story (next one, he'll behave better, I promise). Billshido....gotta have it.