Date: 02/01/12 12:13 am Title: Chapter 11
I KNEW it was taht bad bad Andi! Grrrr! and Tom srsly needs to behave. Love this - thank you!
Author's Response: Laffin... cookie for you! Thank you for letting me know you're enjoying it. And Tom, well...maybe he learns to behave? Maybe? Um....maybe.....
Date: 01/31/12 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 11
First and foremost, I agree whole-heartedly with your end notes. lol Moving on, I am a little frustrated with this chapter and I can't quite put my finger on why. Although, it could have something to do with the build-up of hot Billshido sex only to have that fire squelched. Or it could have been the mention of Bushido possibly bottoming...oh the horror,so not sexy. That kind of made me a little nauseous while reading the rest of the chapter, but of course, this is just one woman's thoughts. I really like how you explained the bisexual vs. gay situation, extremely well done. I still love this story immensely along with the fact that you update so quickly. I wonder what will happen between Bill/Tom and Bill/Bushido now. The plot thickens. :)
Author's Response: LOVE this review. I'm so glad you pointed out things you didn't like! I'm trying not to rush the Bill-Bu sex thing, because they're both in pretty complicated emotional situations right now. Poor Bu, so burned by his ex. And Bill, who is MARRIED! Ahahahaahaha!!! And as for the bottoming thing, well, Bill is just thinking through some issues. I doubt even HE could imagine topping that hirsute man. But at least Bu shows some willingness to make Bill happy! (can I hear an "awwww"). Hearing that you love the story is wonderful, thank you!
Date: 01/31/12 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 11
I knew it!!! I figured it was Andreas when he went up to Bushido at the bar and said his name was Drea!
I have to say, I'm not normally a fan of Bill/Bushido fics but I really like this one! It sucks that Tom is such an ass, though!
I cannot wait for more! =]
Author's Response: If you don't normally like Billshido but you like this story, that is the best praise I could hope for! I know, Tom is bad. Spoiled, always used to getting his way, doing things to please Daddy... Is he just a victim of his upbringing?? Hmmm...
Date: 01/31/12 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 10
You're pretty clever from what I have read so far! I'm not 100% set on Andi being the perp, but....
Author's Response: Why, thank you! Poor Bill..... :)
Date: 01/31/12 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 10
I love this! Seriously one of the best stories on this site!
I have a theory of who the person is that is stalking Bill. I don't think it's Tom's father, but I do think it's someone who knows him. Someone really, close to him. Someone who is clingy. Lol Andreas!
Author's Response: That is some serious praise! (Grins from ear to ear). I'd like to say that I'm much more clever than making the perp someone as obvious as Andi, but.....
Date: 01/31/12 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 10
This story is beautifully written, great plot, and gives great insight to Bill's pain. Can't get enough!
Author's Response: I can't tell you how much this little review means - you said a lot, and I appreciate it very much. Thank you!
Date: 01/31/12 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 10
Billshido yeahhh
Author's Response: I know, I know, I know!!!! I loooove Billshido!!!! Sure wish other people would write more. It's one of the reasons I started writing these! Glad I'm not the only one :D
Date: 01/31/12 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 9
Stoopid Bill really stoopid Bill
Date: 01/31/12 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 10
Tom s an absolut asshole.. i hate him but he´s really damn sexy...
Congrats for you feature! :D
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! And I agree, just because he's a jerkface doesn't mean he's not sexy. Why else would Bill put up with him?
Date: 01/31/12 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 5
I can't believe your fic is making me kind of dislike Tom (and I really love Tom a lot!)
I'm team Bu all the way. now lol
(this is just a useless review)
Date: 01/31/12 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 3
Hey! new reader here *waves*
I just noticed this story & I've only read a few chapters so far. It definitely deserves to be featured.
It has a great plot and it's very well written. I'm loving the characters & I can't wait for more.
p.s. I've added this to my faves :)
Date: 01/31/12 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 10
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!
BILL FINALLY CHEATED!
such a badass. i'm so proud.
hate tom.
still.
don't know how you managed that, but awesome job! ;D bahaha
awesome fic! loving it so much!
keep it coming and coming and coming!<3
xx
Author's Response: Thank you! And if you still hate Tom, and root for Bill to cheat, I am doing my job! Thanks for your review!
Date: 01/31/12 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 10
And finally! I don't think Tom is a bad person per se, but he takes what he wants just because he can and he has never been denied before. Bill is getting in serious trouble, he is really in love with his husband and an escapade with Mr fantastic PI will just complicate things.
Author's Response: That's some good insight! Tom is spoiled. Bill is upset. And playing with your private eye....well, complications can be fun!
Date: 01/31/12 02:01 pm Title: Chapter 9
This part of the phone I played once. Just when we were not having sex.
Date: 01/31/12 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 10
This is so good! I love it! Tom is an idiot asshole.
Author's Response: LOL! Yes, he is!
Date: 01/31/12 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 10
oh fuck!!! yes please...let bill be with bu cuz he deserves
i bet it'll be very passionate or i hope...
Date: 01/31/12 11:35 am Title: Chapter 9
Oh my god. Poor Bill. He had to hear all that finally from Tom ob their vacation get-away. :( And Andi is being such a bitch. Damn. Haha. I think I see where this is going, but I hope you'll surprise us all and twist everything.
And sorry, but I've only been able to review this chapter because I just started reading this story today. I read all 9 chapters in the last few hours. I'm excited for more.
Author's Response: Still thinking about the ending, honestly. It's almost all written but maybe the last 2 chapters (usually my stories are completely done before I post, but I just wanted to start getting this one in). Thanks for reviewing, they do make all this worthwhile, and as long as you're letting me know you're out there, I'm thrilled!
Date: 01/31/12 03:22 am Title: Chapter 9
This is such a soap opera I love it. I'm on the edge of my seat...I can't wait for the next chapter. Awesome job
Author's Response: Thank you for letting me know that! Working on the next one now, and thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/31/12 02:54 am Title: Chapter 9
i like aggressive Bill and Tom likes it too! I'm starting to understand how the men are thinking:they fuck without feelings and that's why they don't consider that they cheat and don't feel guilty,and they still can go home to the one they "love" without shame.i wanna read a chapter where tom catches bu with bill:d
Author's Response: You'd think Tom just needs one of those super controlling, jealous, constantly on the watch type spouses to keep him in line. Sadly, though, I don't even think that would help! Poor men, they really do think with their weenies.
Date: 01/31/12 02:15 am Title: Chapter 9
Quite frankly, you're tearing my heart out. This right here, is the reason I don't read WIPs. Especially WIPs with other pairings, because even though I read other pairings, if the twins are together, I like them to end up together, and this... This doesn't look like they are going to end up together.
When Bill was piecing everything together and remembering all the times Tom had 'business calls', my heart was breaking right along with him. Their honeymoon? That one got me. And the fact that this getaway was supposed to be about them, and Tom couldn't keep away from his floozy for two days.
It doesn't happen often, but every once in a while, a story comes along and it's just written so damn well that it gets to me. This is one of them, and I just... can't even. This is one mess of a review, so I apologize, but this story has got me so squirmy and their dysfunctional relationship makes me feel wrong, because they're supposed to be lovey and happy and... I think this is the only story where I'd be ok with Bill serving Tom divorce papers.
I'm going to shut up now and just say GOOD JOB
Author's Response: I can't tell you how much you made my day with this review - it's the sort I leave on other authors' stories when they kick my emotional ass. I never expected to get one like this for myself, makes me want to print it, frame it, hang it on the wall! And I too hate wip's, but this one will be all done and up in a week - I would never, ever leave a story unfinished. If my arms get cut off in a farming equipment accident, I will learn how to type with my toes!