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Reviewer: Callypyge Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/12 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 13

greatgreat great

Author's Response: gracias, danke, arigato!!

Reviewer: prozac Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/12 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 13

Iīm dying to know ehatīs gonna happen between Bill and Tom... I see s big fight coming!

Author's Response: Eeeeheeeheeeheeee!!! We'll see! After the next chapter, things might just get a bit more complicated for poor Bill...

Reviewer: stilldoll29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/12 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 13

OMG..!! casi lloro cuando se despidieron...
Me encanta esta historia.

Author's Response: OMG! I almost cried reading your review! mucho gusto, muchas gracias!

Reviewer: emolittleangel Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/12 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 13

OMG ^_^ cute i loved it even thou i am a tom/bill person but this is cute :3 great great great great loved it

Author's Response: Thanks, e.l.a.! Glad you're enjoying it and dealing with the Billshido ;) Oh, and in one review, you said you were 16...I'm pretty sure that's a typo, right? You meant 18? ;)

Reviewer: TomsCanadianGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/12 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 13

This chapter hurt my heart =[

I could feel all of the pain and emotion as if I was right there with them.

Even though I am all for Tom/Bill stories, I really hope Bill ends it with Tom and goes to Bushido. They both deserve a happy ending =]

Author's Response: Aw, I'm sorry! (pets wounded heart). It'll get better! Then worse.... but then better!rnI did my job when everyone is rooting for Bu! But the next chapter.... well, you'll see

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/12 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 2

A gloved person? (Black? Leather?) Tall? Youngish? Sounds like Tom. Though God knows I don't *want* it to be him.

Lol, Bill is *really* hiding something. Oh geez. And I'm not sure if he's intending to be flirty with Anis/Bushido or not DX

Author's Response: I think Bill is just used to putting on a flirty act with men who oggle him. Has to act a certain way in his circle, maybe? I'll have to think about that.

Reviewer: szasz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/12 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 13

it's a good story.

Author's Response: Thanks!!

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/12 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 13

So lovely and sad. You are a genius the way you portray emotion so graphically. Wish I had half your talent. Next chapter I guess will be Bill's confrontation with Tom. Can't wait to see how that goes.

Author's Response: Oh my, what a sweet review! Thank you - this is the kind of thing that makes me want to write, and to constantly improve. Yes, B&T is next....I'm still not sure how it's going to turn out myself! Thinking about having another vote, like Digging in the Dirt.... Hmmm

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/12 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

First off, I pretty much can't stand Bushido XD I avoid like 85% of the fics wherein he's a major character.

But man, this really hooked me. I'm finding that I like his POV.

Author's Response: I've gotten reviews from a few people who've said they feel the same way, so I am extremely flattered that you all think I've made Bushido such a sympathetic character! Thanks for taking a chance - I like sweet soft Bill to have a nice manly man for balance. SOoooo romantic ;)

Reviewer: fiamme Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/12 08:54 am Title: Chapter 12

Great chapter, there are two things I loved: how Bill bad Bushido both understood that "playtime" was over, and that phrase about Tom, an not knowing being sure if ever truly loved Bill or was just sorride to l'omosessualitā someggino he considers his.
Thank you for sharing.

Author's Response: Thanks for telling me what you liked. We'll find out a little more about Tom next!

Reviewer: prozac Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/12 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 12

I love this ;D

Author's Response: Thank you!!!!

Reviewer: emolittleangel Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/12 09:49 am Title: Chapter 12

:'( this is soo sad i was soo sdifjhfdkhgjfkghfdj throu the whole story love your writing i rele do and andi omg i thought u were the gud one and i can't believe tom and his fuckin dad :(

Reviewer: emolittleangel Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/12 09:44 am Title: Chapter 5

OMG okay ya bill should go have sex with anis and show tom how much it hurt :'( how dare you tom i kinda liek tom but hate him :/ sonno i might not review for a couple of chapters cuz i wil be too caught up

Reviewer: emolittleangel Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/12 08:38 am Title: Chapter 4

OMG tom you mother fucker ,son of a bitch , sick ass, shit prick, asshole , ass head , pussy sucker dickvgainabitchslutwhoreassprickjerkdouche OMG i need to calm the fuck down i can't believe tom you know i love the band for their music the whole band but in personalities i love bill cuz he is sooo fragiel and tender and i loved tom ya just to be wiht him cuz i knew he would treat him best but WTF i am gonna kill u tom who has bill and cheats with sum SLUT SHIT -.- i am sooo pissed

Reviewer: emolittleangel Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/12 08:13 am Title: Chapter 3

okay i rele loved this chapter ^_^ totally love the risk taker bushido i wasn't tht intersted in him at first but i am not rele picky cuz i am bisexual XD and a virgin and never kissed anyone i am saving myself and i am 16 done XD

Reviewer: emolittleangel Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/12 08:10 am Title: Chapter 2

you are now one of the realy great writers i really enjoy this story it is such a page flipper it keeps drawing me in great way of writing each writer had thier own way of writing and i liek yours keep it up (btw so u hvae any idols here i am at the start of writing trin to become the perfect artist but i just need alot of things first 0//////0 i rele love mohanrocks and the founders of this page and the admins are all amaizing writers also xJellyRollx and Majestrix and a couple others i think by the end of this story ur gonna be on my list and i am gonna have to read every single one of ur stories and ask u for advice :3 ^_^

Author's Response: Hi, emolittleangel! Loved all your reviews! I'm glad you started reading my story, and I can't tell you how amazingly flattered I am that you're putting me up there with the authors who blow me away! Mohanrocks?? The Founders??? Majestrix?? NO WAY!!! I can't believe I'd ever be compared to them, in a good way! If you read the others, keep in mind I'm a Billshido fan, so that's in all of them. And Tom isn't a super nice guy in the Digging series, either. Sorry I made you mad at Tom in this one :( As for being bi, it's the best of both worlds, hope you'll have lots of fun with that! Thanks for all your reviews, hope you stay a fan if you read the others :)

Reviewer: Nonconman Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/12 07:54 am Title: Chapter 12

this is the first time I want Bill be with Bu than with Tom. reading this story is same like watching a very cool movie; everything was so well planned and unguessable. the best detective fic I've ever read on THF.

Author's Response: Score one for Billshido!!!! I'm so glad you're having fun reading this, I've been awed by how you've all been telling me how good it is! Thank you!!

Reviewer: emolittleangel Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/12 07:54 am Title: Chapter 1

love the starting ^_^ never saw things frm bushido's POV i think i liek him more now i just don't i donno not a bushido/bill lover but i think i liek this bushido :') ur an amazing anther love your writing

Reviewer: Nonconman Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/12 06:01 am Title: Chapter 11

if you mention Bill's "muscular" arms I'd have stop reading. Andi! I thought it's Tom!

Author's Response: Thank you!!! OMG, his body was so perfectly slender and pretty and perfect for all these wonderful stories on this fanfic site, and he....he....he RUINED it!!! I'm here for the gay love stories, and I'm sure the band is great and all (I would never ever ever be stupid enough to say otherwise on this site), but I'm not here because I love TH. I'm here because I want to read about beautiful, skinny, effeminate Bill being screwed into the mattress by sexy men!! His arms used to be so pretty! So hold-downable! ...rnIt's okay, it's okay, in my mind, they still are...shhhh.....no scary gorilla arms....

Reviewer: judith182 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/12 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 12

Though the pairing isnt how i want it...i still think this is an amazing story you are a very good writer because im sticking with this story till the end.

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