Date: 02/21/12 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 19
Is screaming "run to Anis" too obvious? It's too late I did it already.
I love it but it's seriously breaking my heart.
Author's Response: You did, you did - seems others are jumping on the Anis bandwagon, even though Tom's being so good. Which surprises me with all the diehard T/B's out there. Thank you for joining me on this tragic journey, and for letting me know you're out there :)
Date: 02/21/12 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 19
i love you i love you i loveyou for posting so soon! and for the future post that will be so soon too!:D:D (did u note the pressure? no biggy! :D) aaaanyway.... this is braking my heart just as much as its braking Bushidos. I want to turn into a bitch right now and say that I want Bill to go back to Bu and never ever again look at Tom (T-T Tomi...).
Poor Tom...he;s trying so much.....but i bet hes screwing someone right now...i totally agree that hes a sex addict... byr-byr Tomi! :D:D:D
Author's Response: Going as fast as I can, honest! I know how you feel, too - that last chapter was so wonderfully sad. Poor Bu, poor Bill. And I'm wondering about Tom, too. You did read that last part, right? Just sayin...... Working on the next chapter, it should be up by Sunday!
Date: 02/21/12 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 19
Was vaguely put off by the comment about the Indian kids, but otherwise, this continues to progress nicely.
Author's Response: Sorry! This was more actually my way of making a social comment about how the fashion industry really makes a lot of money, off of the backs of disenfranchised people in third world countries. Yay, Prada.
Date: 02/21/12 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 19
Oh dear lady u're just killing me for I have absolutly no idea about how it is gonna end up
Author's Response: So glad you're sticking with it!
Date: 02/21/12 11:39 am Title: Chapter 18
awwww Bill, sshh baby don't cry, :( aw poor him.
Bill with little breast betta be so cute :P
Author's Response: I think so, too!
Date: 02/21/12 05:42 am Title: Chapter 18
Sorry I didn't review earlier but I was sick yesterday. I really loved this chapter. So much happening. I feel sad that Bill is kind of getting swept along in the tide of all the baby stuff. I know he did want a baby and it was Tom who wasn't so keen, but I think he's gone into it for the wrong reason...rewarding Tom for good behaviour, not a great reason to have a baby. Plus he did want to take things slowly but the appointment the next day is really jumping in with both feet. As much as Tom now want a child I'm actually a bit surprised that he is okay with all the body modifications Bill has to got through, surely there must be a lot of risks involved. Or is Tom kind of thinking he'll get the best of both worlds with Bill growing breasts and being pregnant, sort of a man and woman in one package. Tom is being very, very sweet and I loved the scene where he brought Bill a snack...BUT I have a feeling that he's got an alternative agenda somehow. I don't know, I'm kind of expecting him to mess up again or reveal alternative reasons for wanting a baby. I'm sure part of his reasoning is to keep Bill with him if they share a child together, but I don't know...Anyway, I'm also expecting Tom to warn Anis off or have him beaten up at some stage or something because that jealousy is still a big issue. And I can really sympathise with Bill in that last sentence because I've had a migraine and was in bed most of yesterday, so I know just what that feels like. So, yeah, loved it all as usual.
Author's Response: Hi! Sorry you had a migraine yesterday, I get hideous ones, no bueno. rnI think Tom is wanting to have a baby (rather, for BILL to have a baby) because he's feeling very insecure about their marriage. What better way to ensure that Bill will stay? But I'm not sure Tom is actually aware of his ulterior motives. Subconsciously, he may fear that he'll slip up and make mistakes in the future - he's having to change a great deal of his behaviors, which is a very difficult thing to do - and if there's a baby, Bill would be more likely to forgive him. And maybe Bill was right a couple chapters back - Tom did break with his father, almost lost his husband, and feels a bit unsure and afraid. He might be desperate for some grounding in his life, and having his own little family would provide that. rnThanks for your review, love that the story has you thinking about it like this :)
Date: 02/20/12 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 18
Fuck! Poor Bill! If he is going to have a baby I hope everything improves. Tom is so cute! Supporting Bill and caring for him *----------------*
Date: 02/20/12 08:33 am Title: Chapter 18
OMG yes tom and bill are happy again please let this happen and end them together ^_^
Author's Response: One step at a time, E.L.A., one step at a time ;)
Date: 02/20/12 06:34 am Title: Chapter 18
OH NO NO NO NO, I hate that response of yours: "They're good, they're good..... (whistles, looks at ceiling, wanders off.....)" Just... NO! I really don't mind Bu, but... NO, lol.
Okay, I'll just pretend that I didn't see it... *sigh*
Anyways, lovely chapter! :D I'm really proud of Tom and their progress! And... Omg, this response *sob* OH, um what was I saying? Yeah, awesome job! Can't wait for Bill's pregnancy! :)
Author's Response: Okay, I laughed. Guess I made you nervous, huh? Didn't mean too. Bill and Tom are in couples therapy, their marriage is being rebuilt, and they're planning a family together. There's hope that this will all work out! rn(no whistling. None. Not even an accidental "breathing out the nose too hard and making a whistling sound" whistle).
Date: 02/20/12 03:36 am Title: Chapter 18
Ooh. I feel so proud of Bill and Tom for the advances they're making. Yay for Tom for really, really trying to be a good husband, and for Bill for admitting his feelings, and standing up to the challenge of carrying a baby. Can't wait to see pregnant Bill. :)
Author's Response: They're doing so good, aren't they! I was a bit worried about Bill's commitment for a bit, but he seems to be allowing Tom back into his heart. We'll have to see, though, if Bill goes through with the whole baby thing. ;)
Date: 02/20/12 03:21 am Title: Chapter 18
This is getting very near to a novel. But its wonderful.
After all the confessing with Anis one would of expected something else.
I just noticed how when Tom cheated, Bill just stood there and took in all the incriminating details. But he couldnt stay near Anis when he said he was just dating someone. It seems to me that his two loves are simply on different levels.
I still dont care who he ends up with, all this story is too good to be concerned with such trivia.
Your writing is getting better with each story (now that I have read them all...)
Author's Response: Nice observations! And thank you for letting me know you're enjoying this one - it is turning into quite the epic, and I'm not sure how much longer there is to go (this is the first one I didn't have done before I started posting, but I was sure I was ALMOST done. Um, I underestimated how long the ending would be). It's good to know my stories are getting better. The "Digging" ones were my first, and "Silent Bill" was absolute fluff that I wasn't terribly happy with and really had no idea why the idea wouldn't get out of my head. They were all fun to write, though. Thank you for letting me know that - it'll definitely keep me working harder for more improvement!
Date: 02/20/12 12:44 am Title: Chapter 18
Oh cute cap. I love it! Poor bill !a lot of pain haha but im happy that he and tom are ok again.... I hope! :D
Author's Response: Thanks! And um.....yeah. They're good, they're good..... (whistles, looks at ceiling, wanders off.....)
Date: 02/19/12 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 18
It's funny when I started reading this chapter and it said that Bill was at the wharf because before I even got on the computer I had just come from the wharf. i must of missed Bill ;) hehehe. anywho I'm really excited about the pregnancy and I just want to hug Bill and kick the Doctor and the nurse in the shin for hurting Bill. GOOD JOB! I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: That's really funny! I wondered if there were any City folk reading this. I've only ever visited a few times, but I love it there and would live there over any other city in the states if I thought I could tolerate living in a cardboard box and having no money. But I need real walls, gotta have art. I've been doing research to make sure every business I mention (except the spa in chapter....two?...that's made up) is real and I've even checked menus. The condos B/T live in are real. The bar Bu and Luke went to is real. Oh, the only other made up place is the first bar Bu went to, where he was bumped into by Andreas. So, if you're familiar with the City, hope I bring it to a realistic life! rnrnI'm kind of excited about the mpreg too, although most of it will probably be in the sequel. Let me know if the proceedure doesn't seem realistic enough? All I know is, stem cells are medical magic, and they really can be formed and manipulated into anything, so I'm trying to make the mpreg as realistic as possible. Thanks for your reviews, your opinions, your thoughts - love hearing from you :)
Date: 02/19/12 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 18
Pienso que todo esta un poco normal ahora...pero que pronto seguira una tormenta. Es que tristemente Bill ya no ama a Tom, y se esta mintiendo a si mismo. Si quisiera olvidar a Bushido de verdad tendria que poner distancia entre ellos y él no quiere...ademas le miente a Tom diciendole que Bushido es solo un amigo... I'm glad that you understand in spanish because im really bad writing in english :(
Author's Response: I actually had to have some of this translated by a friend! I wish I knew more Castellano, I'm so ridiculously lazy. rnI think Bill could fall in love with his husband all over again. What he loved before wasn't real, so maybe this is their chance to start all over. However, I think he's being pulled by Bushido. He doesn't feel like he's lying, he wants Anis to be his friend, since they can't be together. He's determined to keep him in his life. Thanks for helping me practice mi Espanol!
Date: 02/19/12 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 18
I'm sad for the break up between Bill and bushido
Wonderful chapter tho
U perfectly describe the anguish and pain of going thru the process of IVF
Author's Response: Just between you and me, C.p., I am, too. Poor Bu! Story ain't over yet, though.... And thanks for letting me know you liked this one. I'm so glad you think I got Bill's pain right! Needles! (shiver)
Date: 02/19/12 06:00 am Title: Chapter 17
I love this story. I really want to Tom to grow and change and be sincere. I want Bill to stay with him, but only is Tom does all the work to deserve him. However you end this I just want Bill happy...but I am rooting for Tom. Ani can have Micah--nurses are wonderful! And he could heal him up when he gets hurt. =)
Author's Response: I thought Micah would be a very convenient boyfriend for Anis, too. Hopefully, Bill will end up happy. With someone. Maybe Tom. Could be. Hm...this story is going on a lot longer than I planned, and there have been changes. And with a sequel, I still wonder about tweaking it. Thanks for the review!
Date: 02/18/12 04:45 am Title: Chapter 17
so wait bill now loves bushido and hates tom :/ ?
Author's Response: well, he finds out Tom has been cheating on him since, oh, forever, and with lots of women, and basically right in front of Bill. Tells his dad, the evil monster, everything about their private lives, and doesn't want to hear about the stalking. I'm pretty sure I understand why Bill might have fallen out of love with Tom rather quickly. On the other hand, he's got a stable, nice, handsome (to some) man who seems the exact opposite of Tom. Trustworthy, mature. No surprise. But we'll see what happens!
Date: 02/16/12 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 17
Omg.. I stayed up until 2:00 am reading this chapter.. I just couldn´t have gone to sleep if I hadn´t finish reading!! .. (hope the verb conjugations are all right) ..anyways.. I really think that Bill should leave Tom.. seriously.. I always want that Bill and Tom end up together.. always!! but this is a different kind of story.. I mean..yes Tom is trying to change and suddenly want to have babies (which is adorable!) but come on this is the worst time ever to even think about having children!.. but.. at the same time I want that they have a child :´( .. and also want Bushido and Bill in a relationship.. can they be in those open gay marriages that once I saw in MTV?? :D!!! ..
Ok.. seriously you know what I want??... I want Bill to cheat on Tom many times.. and one of those times I want Tom to find that out and feel extremely angry and sad.. poor Tom I know but he deserves it! >:(
I love this fic so much!.. I´m looking forward to read more fics from you!!! :) excellent job!!
P.D: The other time you asked me where I was from.. well I´m from Peru.. nice to meet you hehehe ;)
Author's Response: Hola! Mucho gusto, encantando! I keep planning trips to Peru. I want to see Lima and Caral and Miraflores and so much more! But Mexico City is so close, so I go there a lot. I'll make it to Lima one day!rnrnSorry to have kept you awake til 2 am (Fyredancer has done that to me many, many times!) I am so glad you're loving the story. I agree with a lot of your points (Bill cheating on Tom "many, many times" - that's kind of hot ;) If you want the open relationship thing, read Silent Bill. I love the idea of polyamory. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 02/16/12 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 17
awww bill seems to really love bushido:)
i think that their relationship will be more than just sex on the oppsite of tom and bill
Date: 02/16/12 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 17
So sad :( Que dificil que ahora que Tom quiere cambiar, Bill ya no lo ame. Bill esta haciendo lo correcto queriendo salvar su matrimonio, pero creo que es una mision imposible Noooo!!! Pobre Tom tambien!!! Y bushido tiene razon Bill debe parar y poner limites, porque va a terminar haciendo lo mismo que Tom
Author's Response: I think I got the gist of it....I can't imagine Bill NOT trying with Tom. At least as long as Tom is trying to improve. But change isn't easy. Bushido is something to compare Tom to, as well. Sigh....I really need to work on my Spanish. Considering how close I live to Mexico, and how often I go there, and that I lived in Spain, you'd think I'd be better at it. Lo siento!