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Reviewer: CrimsonClaudia Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/12 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

-giggles- can tomi beat him up? or atleast punch his nose?

Author's Response: Oh yes, definately :)

Reviewer: CrimsonClaudia Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/12 03:24 am Title: Chapter 6

can we bury that kris guy alive now please, he not aloud to fuck Billa any more, shoot he not alout do go within 10,000 feet of him >.>

Author's Response: Haha I cant bury Kris alive just yet, sorry :L There's gonna be some stuff happen involving him soon, next chapter should be up soon :)

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/12 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 6

nice chapter!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thankyou :)rnNext chapter should be up either tonight or tomorrow,

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/12 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 6

it's about time...i just hope everything continues to go somewhat smoothly...



Author's Response: Haha, do you think i am going to let things go smoothly :L I have so much planned for this :)

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/12 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 5

dear god...there is so much tension...it has to be resolved...and soon...

Reviewer: onion5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/12 11:28 am Title: Chapter 5

Wow, this is awesome! I Bet Tom is feeling really confused haha! :D

Author's Response: Haha. Thanks :D yeah poor Tom, I would be pretty confused aswell though haha :)

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/12 05:36 am Title: Chapter 5

nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thankyou :) I'm working on the next chapter now and hopefully it will be up tonight :)

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/12 12:07 am Title: Chapter 4

I have a feeling things are gonna get worse?

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/12 12:06 am Title: Chapter 3

:( Bill totally has frontal lobe damage based on his behavior this chapter.

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/12 12:05 am Title: Chapter 2

WHOA. Maybe he had frontal lobe damage. It results in a loss of inhibition, judgment, attention, memory, planning, decision making, and abstract thinking. People with frontal lobe damage are socially inappropriate and they know no better.

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/12 12:02 am Title: Chapter 1

O_O Those are like the symptoms of a stroke... and then he had closed head trauma on top of it. Poor Bill!

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/12 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 4

wow...but you can't help who you love...

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/12 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 3

i can understand how he feels...really...but this isn't the way to handle it...they gotta figure it out...

Reviewer: EjTh Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/12 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 3

love this chapter, waiting for more ^_^

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/12 12:52 am Title: Chapter 3

nice chapter's!
i just dont like kris whit bill!
i would like bill an tom together much better!
i cant wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: ladyfarcly Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/24/12 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 3

interesting

Reviewer: EjTh Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/24/12 09:08 am Title: Chapter 2

a kiss ^^
can't wait for more, I love it !

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/12 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 2

he doesn't remember it's his brother...maybe because he was harboring these feelings and at least now he can kinda act on it...nice...

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/12 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 2

ookkk
looking forward to more

it WOULD make more sense though, if he had forgotten the G's too

Reviewer: MONSTERLOVER Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/12 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 2

Awww! This is awesome. But I have never heard Of "Billa" like ever.

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