Date: 07/30/12 03:07 pm Title: HE Knows?
Well, that was a surprising twist to the whole story. Paranoia comes in handy. Took me a minute or two to get use to the layout of this new chapter. Must be your difference with betas.
Date: 07/30/12 02:43 pm Title: The drug?
The glimpse into Bill's memory was a nice bit of information. You left the whole Simone and Gordon bit at a nice cliffhanger. ;-)
Date: 07/30/12 02:25 pm Title: HE Knows?
Hey :) i try to read the last chaper but sth was wrond and u lost all Return :(
Date: 07/30/12 01:53 am Title: HE Knows?
Don't Open the door Bill!!! Remember that Tom said he had keys and not to open it to anyone!!!
Date: 07/29/12 05:20 pm Title: HE Knows?
Ooh good Gordon and Simone are alive....but sadly they are in David's captivity...
I shouldve known Katie is working for David...my gosh this is getting very interesting...
My gosh I wish that was me in the sexy shower scene..lol
keep it comin Nena I love itn!
Date: 07/17/12 09:42 pm Title: The drug?
hey am I the new beta that is going to be great? You guys have been ignoring me and I kind of miss you!
Date: 07/17/12 07:46 pm Title: The drug?
amazing character development. I love the plot of this story! can't wait for the next chapter:D
Date: 07/16/12 04:33 am Title: The drug?
I love! New chapter, please?!?
Date: 07/09/12 04:39 am Title: The drug?
Poor Billa! :( He's been so abused and mistreated. It's good to see Tom taking care of him, especially after a nasty flashback like the one earlier.
Simone's pretty BA, keeping calm and not panicking like anyone else being chased with a dying man in the car. I liked that. She wasn't screaming and crying and getting Gordon killed.
At the end, I saw that Bill wanted to get his hair cut. I'm wondering if Tom will do the same, too. It's kinda hard to hide dreadlocks, just because they're not that common, but if he just shoved it in a hat or changed how he kept it, he might be able to pull it off. Dying it without changing the hairstyle will still make him look the same. >.< Other than that, great job with the story! Can't wait for the next exciting installment! :3
Date: 07/09/12 02:25 am Title: The drug?
So many scary things must have happened to Bill. I really really hope they make it to safety.
Date: 07/08/12 08:44 pm Title: Remember?
damn son xD This is really good!
Date: 07/08/12 08:38 pm Title: Who Am I?
o.o powerful opening.
Date: 07/08/12 05:10 pm Title: The drug?
Ooo you didnt tell me you made another chapter..
I like this one...its a shocker Simone and Gordon went off the road..hopefully they make it thur in the next few chapters.
Are you gonna turn Bill blonde and Tom with cornrows?
Date: 07/08/12 04:55 pm Title: Nothing Matters?
Im speechless but I really enjoy this chapter..
Im glad Simone got out of her shock..
Date: 07/08/12 02:36 pm Title: The drug?
Awww don't make Bill cut his hair too short pweez u.u