Date: 03/24/12 09:51 am Title: Who Am I?
For some reason your new chapters are not posting. :(
Author's Response: Yes u know I am very sorry. I think its my laptop, it has been acting up for a while know and when ever I'm on it it crashes when I'm on the website .... I will be getting a new one soon :) .. and I have never seen you commentt before.
Author's Response: Yes u know I am very sorry. I think its my laptop, it has been acting up for a while know and when ever I'm on it it crashes when I'm on the website .... I will be getting a new one soon :) .. and I have never seen you commentt before.
Author's Response:
Yes i know I am very sorry. I think its my laptop, it has been acting up for a while now and when ever I'm on it it crashes when I'm on the website .... I will be getting a new one soon :) '.. and I have never seen you commentt before. I aging very sorry. Also exuse my English its not t
Date: 03/20/12 06:41 am Title: Guilt?
This story is like a movie! I want to know what happens next , the plot is so perfect , please update soon. :)
Date: 03/19/12 06:37 pm Title: Pieces?
OMG O.O interestiiing :D
Date: 03/18/12 04:51 pm Title: Guilt?
Oh Tomi....Anyway... I'm realy nervous for Bill. I don't want anything bad to happent to him. This must still be so strange and scary for Bill. I hope Tom can save him from what is coming to get him. :(
Date: 03/18/12 11:54 am Title: Guilt?
:) like it. Thanks for writing
Date: 03/03/12 02:00 am Title: Pieces?
Was wondering why only chapter 4 updates anymore? I was really interested in reading the rest of the story.
Author's Response:
im have really bad peroblems with it chappter 5 should be up by know but they are i will keep tryiing to update then i peromis . i will get my knew laptop soon so the peroble sould go away :) sorrry for the wait
rnrn
Date: 03/02/12 08:39 am Title: Pieces?
Why does it keep updating just chapter 4 that's all?
Author's Response:
im have really bad peroblems with it chappter 5 should be up by know but they are i will keep tryiing to update then i peromis . i will get my knew laptop soon so the peroble sould go away :) sorrry for the wait
Date: 02/25/12 06:42 am Title: Pieces?
It's getting really interesting and I can't wait to see what happens next :) I love your style of writing, by the way, it keeps the suspense alive ;D
Author's Response:
really wow so glade you liked it aslo could you please email me thank you :)
Date: 02/18/12 08:27 pm Title: Who Am I?
I love this story, one of my favorite on this site. Do you think you could email me the story please? I have a glitch where it says you update it but I can't see the chapters :(
Author's Response:
really im your favorit that make me soo happy. aslo here what you can do go ahead and log out for 18 hours dont long in at all and the chappters will showe up i gess it happends cause soo mamny people are on the site at one but i can tell you im only on chappter 4 so dont worry but go ahead and email me :) ill help
Date: 02/18/12 07:41 pm Title: Pieces?
Heh i like it :) lets see what happens next. Btw if i can give an advice which could help u with the story, try to make the scense more descriptive, real so us readers can be transfered to the place. I really like ur writting u just need to work on telling us exactly what u want us to see and feel...? :D hope i helped
Author's Response:
Email me ashap plesase
Date: 02/18/12 07:10 pm Title: Remember?
Ohhh i really like it so far. I wonder what happened to Billa... Why Do i get the feeling Gordon isn't an easy case...
Author's Response:
YOU juat made my heart explode with joy!!! and very glade you liked it also you'll see * winks at you *
Date: 02/13/12 08:46 am Title: Pieces?
Well... That was rather unexpected! aha, Poor Tom, excellent work can't wait for more :)
Date: 02/13/12 07:35 am Title: Pieces?
Think I help up my end of the bargain pretty well :) Xxx
Date: 02/13/12 07:34 am Title: Pieces?
You have to update again soon :) not just because I know how awesome this is going to be but because its already so awesome...you're welcome, lol ;) xx
Date: 02/13/12 07:32 am Title: Pieces?
Also, YOU KEPT MY CHAPTER NAME :) just coz you can't think for yourself...jk, you know I love you and your ideas :) mine are just better xx LOVE YOU!
Date: 02/13/12 07:30 am Title: Pieces?
*blushes* I'm not that God damn awesome...well maybe a little...but I'm EXCITED coz I know what lies ahead :) xx
Date: 02/13/12 12:25 am Title: Pieces?
I don't understand the ending. But I thank you for writing.
Author's Response:
well ask and ill answer :)
Date: 02/13/12 12:10 am Title: Pieces?
Wow that is scary :( poor Bill and poor Tom for having such aweful dreams all his life. Soldiers they are making clones!!!? Clones out of sweet little Bill?
Date: 02/10/12 06:17 pm Title: Hospital?
Please update!!!! This is SUCH a good story!!! You left us hanging TT__TT But I still love you!
Author's Response:
thank you fo revewiing the reviews are th only thing that make me updat :)