Date: 04/18/12 06:06 am Title: Hospital?
I'm so gald my fucking sister left...lol You know I'm a fan Nena... so on to the next chapter... ;-)
Date: 04/18/12 02:47 am Title: His Thoughts?
Poor Bill... Tom's thoughts and now the storm. At least Tom took care of Bill during the storm and hopefully came to terms a little with his feelings. I'm really scared thougth. IF those people find Bill again will Tom and his family be able to keep him safe? I don't want Bill to have to go through any of those terrible things again. The poor thing has just found a family and some one who cares very much for him.
Date: 04/17/12 09:57 pm Title: Remember?
WOW....*goes to next chapter*...
Date: 04/17/12 09:11 pm Title: Who Am I?
First of all...brava I'm captivated from start to finish of this chapter! I particularly liked the funny but cute remark Tom made by stating the obvious that they were in his house! :-)
Date: 04/17/12 04:15 pm Title: His Thoughts?
I loved this chapter! The cliffhanger really leaves me on edge, awesome stuff:)
Date: 04/15/12 07:51 am Title: Pieces?
I'm so sorry, love. I didn't mean to make it sound like the writing's horrible. It's amazing. It's just that I really don't like the way these twins are being treated in the story. Please make them happy soon? PUPPY DOG EYES!!!
Oh, and gummybears and skittles.
Date: 04/15/12 07:49 am Title: Guilt?
Okay, okay. I'll be nice. I loved this chapter, the writing's amazing. And you know how to build suspence really well. And really I love this story...
Date: 04/15/12 07:46 am Title: Pieces?
GRMBL, i don't even know what to say to this chapter.... It's motherfucking horrible! But now I shall know the end!
Date: 04/15/12 07:35 am Title: Hospital?
Wait wait, huh? SO IS IT BILL?!
Nah, can't be.... Btw, you know i still love it right. But you're torturing me here you asshat!Now, next chappy!
xxx
Date: 04/15/12 07:19 am Title: Remember?
Hun, i love all the details. It makes the story so much more realistic. But what is it with those bitching parents?
Argh, you're making me go nuts here. I really don't get it. But really, the way you tell the story is amazing!
xxx
Date: 04/15/12 07:11 am Title: Who Am I?
AWWWWWHHH, the first chapter is awesome! but that last part was soooo saaaadddd!
I don't understand....
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First chappie done and done!
Date: 04/12/12 09:41 pm Title: Guilt?
Good start but the story is far from over. Nena, when are we going to see a new chapter?
Author's Response:
updateding in two days :)
Date: 04/12/12 09:01 pm Title: Pieces?
Aww the grandma part almost made me cry.
:( Jost as a bad guy!?! Hahaha I could get use to that idea.
Date: 04/12/12 08:37 pm Title: Hospital?
I love how you have the relationship between Tom and Simone. It shows how close they are. Gordon seem kinda funny to me for some reason.
Date: 04/12/12 08:09 pm Title: Remember?
The sentence structure and grammar is really good for this chapter. Your beta deserves props for all the help. I'm gonna keep on reading. Gotta find out how he wound up being held hostage.
Date: 04/07/12 04:33 pm Title: Guilt?
I was like O.o !!!!
Date: 04/07/12 04:16 pm Title: Pieces?
Oooooh I see. Now I'm starting tounderstand. It's all Coming together now. Very interesting!!!
Date: 04/07/12 03:22 am Title: Hospital?
Ok the ending of this chapter has me totally confused!!!! Help!
Date: 04/07/12 02:49 am Title: Who Am I?
Damn it! Nena! I never wanted to ever read a twincest but after this chapter I MUST know what happens next!!!! So far so good :-)
Date: 03/24/12 08:11 pm Title: Guilt?
Am I living in the twilight zone or was this chapter up already?
Bill's mom has really taken a liking to him. It's like she was waiting all along lol