Date: 06/03/12 10:51 am Title: The Specialist?
Nooooooo....gotta finish it!!
it was getting really good! (^_^)
Date: 05/16/12 12:09 pm Title: Hospital?
Yay! Bill get's to live with Tom! :D Tom's all cutesy with Bill (I don't think cutesy is a word but I'm going to use it anyway xD) And protective over him still :D can't wait to go and read the next chapter
Date: 05/16/12 11:27 am Title: Remember?
Awie! Poor Billa, I think it's cute that Tom's protective over Bill, but it was sad when he got scared by the shower and stuff. It makes me want to cry. I could just imagine his hair being all bloody and mucky, and then it being clean. I'm exited to go and read the next chapter now! :D
Date: 05/16/12 11:18 am Title: Who Am I?
Hey there ;) I told you I'd review again, I just got round to reading this again and it had the same effect on me as last time. I feel so sorry for Bill, It brought me to tears at the end and I loved how Tom reacted to Bill. I could just imagine him blushing a little bit while stuttering His name. So cute. I'm off to read the next chapter now! :D
Date: 05/13/12 02:17 pm Title: The Specialist?
OMG, this chapter was so full of action and drama. Who would have thought that Gordon was involved with David. I'm really hoping that Tom will get the tracker out and they can throw the damn thing out of the car window, or crush it to bits. Poor Simone, left all by herself and not in her right mind. Tom must have been so torn to leave her behind. The connection between Tom and Bill is amazing, though. I can't wait until everything is really explained.
Author's Response: Thank you for ur wanderfull reviewrn :) o have a question for I though, I was wandering what u ment by "everything really explained " ?
Date: 05/13/12 12:57 pm Title: The Specialist?
nooo! I need to read the rest right now :(
anyway great update :D
Date: 05/13/12 02:13 am Title: The Specialist?
Poor Bill!!!. Tom must be so nervous but he can do it. He can do it for Bill! So hard to leave their mother but if it will save them then I guess it is what has to be done. I really hope they can get away and that Tom can get the traker out without hurting Bill too much. I'm so scared for them now.
Date: 05/12/12 09:25 pm Title: The Specialist?
Tease! You just had to cut the chapter off when it was really getting interesting. This chapter at least explained Gordon and why he seemed more, I don't know. . .. off to me in other chapters. *shrugs* I want another update Nena!
Date: 05/12/12 07:28 pm Title: The Specialist?
NENA KEEP WORKING ON THIS STORY FINISH IT DAMN YOU FINISH IT... YOUR SUCH A TEASE BABY BROTHER!! ARGH!!! :-)
Date: 04/25/12 03:52 am Title: His Thoughts?
Stumbled across this on Tumblr... WOW!
I had to hunt it down and I'm glad I did.
Update soon, please?!
Author's Response:
hi there :) im glade you like it and if you would fallow me on tumblr you will find out exacly whenim going to update and other pr storyes.... also it would be the world to me if you would comment for all the chappters becuase i wanna know what you thoughts and feelings were during them, thank you and sure thing :) and im sorry for my english
Date: 04/23/12 05:32 pm Title: Hospital?
i think i can see where the end of this chapter might be going with this :) i will continue reading!! meanwhil keep up the good work :)
Fern xx
Date: 04/22/12 06:28 pm Title: Who Am I?
Great first chapter, cant wait to read the rest :)
Fern xx
Date: 04/20/12 09:43 pm Title: Who Am I?
Ooh~!
Great Cliffhanger chapter one!
Date: 04/20/12 08:59 pm Title: His Thoughts?
I've just read this from the beginning and its an amazing story. It's really got me hooked. I'm looking forward to more updates.
Date: 04/20/12 08:02 pm Title: His Thoughts?
Still not sure what to think about Gordon yet but you've got Simone down really well as the loving, supportive mother. Poor Bill :( so mistreated by people. David is one character I'm curious about. Granted that could be because he's a bad guy in this story and I'm still trying to get use to the idea. Hope you'll write another chapter soon Nena!
Date: 04/20/12 01:46 pm Title: His Thoughts?
Although I haven't dropped a review in quite some time, I was still reading this story the whole time :3 This is getting even better as it progresses, so keep up the good work ;D I'll be waiting for updates! :)
Date: 04/19/12 12:21 am Title: His Thoughts?
dun dun dun! whats gonna happen next i wonder?!?!?!?!
Date: 04/18/12 07:48 am Title: His Thoughts?
*whines*....NENA.... seriously I'm all in this story and what do you do sir? You leave me hanging!! OH PLEASE OH PLEASE finish this story.... as a friend I beg you! *pouts*
Date: 04/18/12 07:15 am Title: Guilt?
....next chapter...
Date: 04/18/12 06:34 am Title: Pieces?
yess..on to the next chapter...