Date: 06/27/12 01:44 pm Title: Remember?
there are a couple grammar mistakes, but the character development is good. have Tom and this boy met before? is that why Gordon won't talk?
Date: 06/27/12 01:26 pm Title: Who Am I?
captivating! I think there's a bit of gender confusion in the beginning (the stranger is referred to as a "she" and then a "he") but overall very good.
Date: 06/27/12 11:46 am Title: Running?
OMG! This story is so cool! I love how you write everybody's feeling, it makes me connect with it.
Author's Response: Awe thank u :). I try my best when I write I sit there for hours till its done.
Date: 06/26/12 08:33 pm Title: Pieces?
So great, this story is awesome!!
Date: 06/26/12 04:41 pm Title: Nothing Matters?
This is great!
Date: 06/26/12 04:40 pm Title: The Specialist?
Favorite chapter :)
Date: 06/26/12 04:39 pm Title: His Thoughts?
I love this story!!
Date: 06/26/12 04:37 pm Title: Pieces?
This story just gets better and better ^.^
Date: 06/26/12 04:36 pm Title: Hospital?
This doctor gives me the creeps >.
Date: 06/26/12 04:06 pm Title: Who Am I?
Wow great story!! :)
Date: 06/23/12 11:20 pm Title: Hospital?
Wow, Nena, this is great, I am wondering what is gonna happen next...
Date: 06/23/12 11:13 pm Title: Remember?
This is so great, keep writing more!!
Date: 06/23/12 11:10 pm Title: Who Am I?
Omg, this is such a good story, I seriously cant wait to read the next chapter!
Date: 06/22/12 03:42 pm Title: Remember?
Hey Nena,
Like I said to you, I come reading again your story, I like it :)
There are so much mysterious ... I'm about reading the next :)
Date: 06/15/12 05:33 am Title: Who Am I?
I really love your story Nena, all is so misterious. I love that sort of story dear, and I'm really curious of the next chapters :)
Date: 06/13/12 01:55 am Title: Running?
I need more to read! Such a cliff hanger!
Date: 06/13/12 01:18 am Title: The Specialist?
So intense! Can this story get any better! So good :)
Date: 06/13/12 12:53 am Title: His Thoughts?
Love love loved it! Can't wait to read more :)