Date: 02/03/12 08:43 am Title: THERE'S SOMETHING TOM WANTS TO SAY
It was good, really love it!
Author's Response: Teehee, Thank you!! It makes me happy to hear that. :)
Date: 02/02/12 03:48 pm Title: PSYCHIC CEREAL
The Gs are so horrible... and fun. I love how they were spot on with their guessing, or at least, spot on what Bill probably had in mind.
Tom is really, really in deep trouble here. I feel sorry for him, and sorry for Bill.
Author's Response: Yeah, I had to include the G's, it's not a TH fic without at least a bit of them being assholes. Lol. I thought the fic needed a little humor, cuz poor Tom n Bill are both so distraught. :( I don't know who I'm more sad for too, Tom or Bill, but don't worry Ch5 (last chapter) is coming very soon! There's still hope! :) Thanks for reviewing! Hope you'll stick around.
Date: 02/01/12 04:13 pm Title: WORM YOUR WAY OUT OF THIS ONE
I like it very much.
I kissed my friend when we were drunk and she is like a sister to me. We spent two weeks ignoring eachother, then we started talking again and last saturday after party we spoke about it and Im so happy we were agreeing on this subject and not beeing mad at eachother.
I can relate to this story
Author's Response: Oh wow, that's so cool that u can relate to this like that! I hope I made it all at least a little bit realistic or plausable from your POV then. Good luck with your real life situation, lol, and I also hope u enjoy the rest of my story too. :) I'm like 99% done w Ch5... so after I post it, u gotta tell me if that's how u and your friend ended up too! LOL. Jk. :)
Date: 02/01/12 03:12 pm Title: PSYCHIC CEREAL
This is torturous for poor Tom. Yes, he really is causing them both a heart break when he really wants the same thing as Bill but prevents them both from having it.
I really look forward to what you're hinting at in your note :) Great job as always :D
Author's Response: Awww, thank you. I'm really glad u liked the last chapter. I think it's sad too. :( He's trying so hard to "do the right thing" and be realistic about it though. Always trying to be a good big brother. I'm looking forward to Ch5 too!!! It's LONG. Eeek! lol.
Date: 01/31/12 02:36 pm Title: PSYCHIC CEREAL
Okay, pep talk coming up. Stop procrastinating please and post the next chapter. This story has just got better and better and I want to read the 'stuff' that's in the final chapter. Pretty, pretty please.
Author's Response: Awwwww, lol. Thanks for the motivation. I will, I promise. I've been working on this story for like a year now, and I'm soooo close to the end. I'll git 'er done for sure. :) Your review put a big smile on my face. I'm so glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for the positive review. Lol.
Date: 01/31/12 11:11 am Title: PSYCHIC CEREAL
clapss chapter five chapter five cant wait for chapter 5
Author's Response: Lol!! Good! I'm so happy u like it. Thank u. :) I'll work on getting Ch5 done.
Date: 01/29/12 10:30 pm Title: THERE'S SOMETHING TOM WANTS TO SAY
nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! So glad u liked it. :). Ch4 is coming soon!
Date: 01/27/12 06:07 pm Title: THERE'S SOMETHING TOM WANTS TO SAY
I really, really like this fic and everything about it. I think its just perfect the way you've portrayed the twins and you can really feel the tension between them. I can't wait for more! :)
Author's Response: Yessssss!! Thank u so much! Your review just put a big smile on my face. :) Glad the tension is palpable. I was hoping to make it all intense like that. Hehe. Thank u! Ch4 is coming very soon. :)
Date: 01/27/12 04:13 am Title: THERE'S SOMETHING TOM WANTS TO SAY
Jealous Tom gets me off like a rocket. But even more I love the mixed-up Tom who knows he can just walk up to his brother and do him right in front of the mirror.
But even more I love when Tom goes there and grabs Bill and tells him how good he smells and how beautiuful he is... he seems almost a little high, so cocky, it's so sexy it HURTS.
Their fight and the desperate feelings ring so true. And it's facinating to see Bill's almost weird way of looking at it; as if he really can't see the problems of the relationship he wishes for. I guess it's good for him that he comes to some kind of realization during their fight, even if it's very brief. It's heartbreaking when Bill says "Why would you make us live like that?!" -- heartbreaking both because they can't have it, and because Bill really seems to believe that it is possible. Well I hope it is possible but Bill seems bordering on delusive. Not that I mind -- I love his stubborn desire. But I must admit that it's almost scary to see how our stories parallell each other in certain ways... (still not, mind, but there is just something...) and also facinating, because I love to think that someone else has such a similar (fictional) mindset about the twins. :D
Author's Response: Thank u very much for your in depth review. I love when ppl tell me what parts they liked. It helps a lot. :)rnThe bit where Tom tells Bill he smells good n is beautiful, I know he comes off as really seductive, but I wanted ppl to understand that even tho that's how Bill sees it, Tom is actually saying those things from a totally different place- for Tom it's full of love, he doesn't realize he's being inappropriate and I hope that came thru as well. I wanted to capture Tom's feelings progressing... that he's actually more like Bill than he thinks, cus what he thinks is brotherly isn't what others would think so.rnAs for Bill, he does understand what he's asking for, he just got past the "oh my god" of it way before Tom and is having trouble coping with Tom still acknowledging the societal values he's gotten over. So he comes off as pushy. It's just us he thinks Tom n him are the same n is impatient with Tom's learning curve. He doesn't slow down to consider the enormity of it all very often, only when he takes a step back he can see it from Tom's POV as well. rnYou keep saying the way our characters behave is similar..... it's making me really interested to read your fic!! Finish it soon do I can read it already! Lol. :)
Date: 01/27/12 02:42 am Title: THERE'S SOMETHING TOM WANTS TO SAY
well done
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 01/23/12 12:51 pm Title: DOWN THE RABBIT HOLE
The tension is terrific. Poor Tom though, just reading this makes me on edge just like him. There is no mercy where Bill is concerned. He goes for the jugular and hangs on until he gets Tom to admit they're on the same page. It's very fascination, and you're so good at it :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the insightful review Maria. I appreciate it very much. I'm so glad to know the tension is coming through cuz that's something I fight with when I write. I always feel like the palpable tension is what draws me into a story so I hope I can do that in my own fics. As for Bill, he's a bit desperate. Lol. Thanks again. I hope you'll stick around til the end. :)
Date: 01/23/12 09:29 am Title: DOWN THE RABBIT HOLE
nice chapter!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank u!! So glad u liked this chapter too n you're sticking w my story. Ch 3 will be up in 1-2 days. :)
Date: 01/23/12 08:38 am Title: DOWN THE RABBIT HOLE
I find it highly enjoyable. The way Tom is conflicted by his feelings, and Bill too, even though he tries his best to hide it behind his flirting an open attempts on seducing Tom. Tom's conflicting feelings takes me on a ride as a reader, and no matter how much he wants to think it's wrong (and does) he obviously can't help being very attracted to Bill and the thought of going to that place Bill suggests.
I love how Tom's hand on Bill's chest keeps coming back, and how Tom becomes calm by feeling Bill's heart beat. In all, again, highly enjoyable.
"We don't live on Mars", no, you certainly don't. Which is sad in a way.
Author's Response: Thank u thank u thank u!! This review makes me so happy. You totally get their feelings! And I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter. :) I try my best to put in all the difficult feelings that a situation like this would bring up between brothers, that it's not just hunky-dory or simple, and that yeah, it's also sad in some ways. Thanks again for a thoughtful review.
Date: 01/22/12 03:00 pm Title: DOWN THE RABBIT HOLE
I feel sorry for both of them and a little bit angry with Bill for keep trying to push Tom into an incestuous relationship he doesn't want. It's sad that Bill thought all his dreams had come true when Tom kissed him in the previous chapter, but its also sad that Tom just wants to go back to how it was before but Bill keeps pushing him. You write very well and get the emotion over from both sides. Looking forward to your next chapter.
Author's Response: YAY!!! This review makes me soooo happy. Thank you!! I love hearing reactions to what I'm writing. Sometimes u don't know if the difficult emotions are coming through all right, but you get it. The floodgates have been opened for Bill and he's just too hopeful to shut up. And Tom, he's still battling between how he's normally really open and close w Bill and his repulsion to taking it too far. I'm looking forward to posting the next chapter soon too. I hope I made their relationship progress smoothly and logically. Let me know. ;)
Date: 01/22/12 02:09 pm Title: DOWN THE RABBIT HOLE
I love it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Author's Response: Thank u! Glad u like it! Next chapter will be up in the next 1-2 days. You won't have to wait too long. :)
Date: 01/20/12 02:52 am Title: WORM YOUR WAY OUT OF THIS ONE
Very nice picked up from Atlas. I look forward to what happens next. The tension here is to die for :)
Author's Response: Oh YAY!! Thank you for saying that. It makes me really happy to hear it's good so far. :)
Date: 01/19/12 10:35 pm Title: WORM YOUR WAY OUT OF THIS ONE
this sounds like a really good story!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! :) Glad u like it so far. Next chapter will be up pretty soon, next 1-2 days.
Date: 01/19/12 03:28 pm Title: WORM YOUR WAY OUT OF THIS ONE
Very beautiful gesture when Tom massaged Bill's palm. So intense, so beautiful with all the longing and the pain and the forbidden desire. And how intriguing to find a fic that parallells my own yet is so different, I just love it. :) I'm really looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you for your lovely review. :) I also love that moment between them! I love when they touch eachother for comfort and it's not sexual, just meaningful.
*Looks u up*... you're writing "Impressions", cool, I actually have it tracked. I usually read whole stories after an author has finished posting. I'm looking forward to reading yours too! :)
Date: 01/19/12 01:27 pm Title: WORM YOUR WAY OUT OF THIS ONE
I loved this first part of your sequel. the twins' confusion really shone through, as did their love for each other. Looking forward to the remaining chapters.
Author's Response: YAY! First review! Thank you very much, so glad to know that stuff came acress. The next chapters are coming up in the next few days. Still need to proofread Ch 5. :)