Date: 01/30/12 10:40 pm Title: An Olivia Ecstasy.
:O those sound like some AWESOME chapters to come! Ich liebe Billcentric things!
This was a wonderful chapter, but it does pose a question. How do they keep this quiet from the other guys at school? Or don't they? Cuz I would think the only way the whole jealousy thing would work for Olivia is if whatshisface didn't know she paid for the date...
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Haha, thanks! Thats another aspect of the business that will also be explained later on in the story :D
Date: 01/29/12 11:45 pm Title: An Olivia Ecstasy.
Can't wait for more! XD
Author's Response: I'll try to update soon! (:
Date: 01/29/12 10:28 pm Title: An Olivia Ecstasy.
nice...i guess since it's a business it doesn't matter what the date is for...i hope it works...and i can't wait t o get an insight to their lives...
Author's Response: Hahha, I can't wait to start writing those chapters :D
Date: 01/29/12 10:27 pm Title: An Olivia Ecstasy.
me like.
xx
Author's Response: Thanks!(:
Date: 01/29/12 09:19 pm Title: An Olivia Ecstasy.
Oh, I would gladly want to know how Tom and Bill met :D
Author's Response: Hahaha, well you'll only have to wait a few chapters more :D
Date: 01/26/12 07:12 pm Title: Of Ties and Corsages.
Why does it tickle me so much that Bill said 'lets rock this bitch'? Wonderful chapter! I like that even though Tom isn't letting her be his manager, his sister is still helping him primp to prepare to get those girls attracted.
Totes looking forward to the next update! Keep up the lovely work!
Author's Response: Thank you! Hahahaaha, I thought it would be pretty appropriate if Bill got that line! (:
Date: 01/26/12 01:55 pm Title: Of Ties and Corsages.
aaaaaand..... i can totally see real life Tomikins doing this. Next chap. Well written.
Author's Response: Hahahaha! Thanks! :D
Date: 01/26/12 10:11 am Title: Of Ties and Corsages.
I love this story. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try to update as soon as possible (:
Date: 01/26/12 07:21 am Title: Of Ties and Corsages.
YAY update!!! but less than a thousand words like this are not enough for me though. Please more!!! I'm curious!
Author's Response: Hahaha, the first few chapters are under 1000 words, but don't worry, after chapter five they become much longer! :D
Date: 01/26/12 03:10 am Title: Of Ties and Corsages.
Tom sounded so sexy. So do I get a discount if I want him for a week? ;) Haha!! I am so happy with this story. Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Date: 01/25/12 11:05 pm Title: Of Ties and Corsages.
this should be interesting...i gather everything goes well...this really is an awesome idea...
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it (:
Date: 01/25/12 09:09 pm Title: Of Ties and Corsages.
Tom with blue eyes is sexy!
Love Bill's attitude at the end "let's rock this bitch" :)
Author's Response: I've always wondered what Tom would look like with blue eyes, so I decided to incorporate it into the chapter! Thanks! I got that line from Mean Girls hahaha! (:
Date: 01/21/12 07:44 pm Title: Being a Whore.
hahahaha omg no no Tom you're not a whore xD xD
Author's Response: Wow, I think you're the first person to say that, haha!!
Date: 01/21/12 04:28 pm Title: Being a Whore.
The chapter title, and their dialogue, hilarious!
Author's Response: Haha, thank you! I actually take quite a while to think of the chapter titles, so I'm glad you like them (:
Date: 01/21/12 02:07 pm Title: Being a Whore.
ooh~ me like.
this has so much potential!
i hope you continue it! ^^
loving it so far ~
xx
Author's Response: I definitely will be continuing this story! I'm glad you like it :D
Date: 01/21/12 10:01 am Title: The birth of a business.
Wow it's a potential story!!! I find it very funny and I also love the summary!!! begging for more ~
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 01/20/12 02:54 am Title: Being a Whore.
Haha this chapter was definatly funny. Im reading this on my phone because I couldn't wait! :)
Author's Response: Awe, I'm glad you found it funny, haha! :D
Date: 01/20/12 01:46 am Title: Being a Whore.
Haha!! Tom might be a whore, but he's an expensive one!! *nods head happily because she took up for Tom* lol But I love how this is coming along. Surprised Bill isn't jealous from the start. o_O
Author's Response: Haha, he really is an expensive whore! Hmmm, maybe Bill is jealous...you'll just have to wait and find out (:
Date: 01/20/12 12:59 am Title: Being a Whore.
LOL-I feel like I was in the room watching them argue. My favorite line: “Oh no, you’re definitely not a whore,” Bill replied in sarcastic encouragement---LOVE IT and cant wait for more!!!!!!!
Author's Response: HA! That's my favorite line too! (:
Date: 01/20/12 12:38 am Title: Being a Whore.
I'm so happy for the early update! Business seems to be going pretty well for Bill and Tom, I can't wait to read what's next.