Date: 04/21/12 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 16- Uh oh
oooooohhhh no the poor girls . first they think they get stood up , rent a car and get lost and then stop for instructions then the car gets toad away . if he was late he could have at least sent someone ,(Tom) to go and pick them up . can`t wait to see wat happens , hurry please .
Date: 04/21/12 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 15- A New Life
ohhhhhhh hahahahah this trip will mbe intresting with her sister along with her . hope she meets Tom again on this trip ? ( hint hint hint) hahahahahahah.
Author's Response: Hahha you will see soon!!! :) im so glad you like itt!!
Date: 04/21/12 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 15- A New Life
i totaly loooooved this chapter :):):)
and at this moment loooove the little sis...she has the guts :):):).GO GIRL GOOOOO :):):):):
CANT WAIT FOR MOOOOORE :)_
PLEASE UPDATE SOOON :)
Author's Response: I will update later on today dont worry!!! :DDrnrnIm glad you like it hon<3333
Date: 04/21/12 12:54 am Title: Chapter 14- A broken heart
Aww.. this brought a tear to my eye. =.( I hope things get better. And fast too. And I wanna know how Tom is taking it.. he must be in pretty bad shape too. =/
Date: 04/20/12 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 14- A broken heart
aaaaaaaaaawwww poor Nat and Tom . Tom broke up with her so she wouldn`t get hurt any more . hope something will bring them back together .
Date: 04/20/12 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 14- A broken heart
i am sad because they broke up :( ....and now her mother understood that they had to be suportive????
please update soooon :)
cant wait for mooooooore :)
Date: 04/16/12 11:44 am Title: Chapter 13- The Right Decision
noooooooo Tom please don`t break up with her . please update soon
Date: 04/15/12 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 13- The Right Decision
Oh my fucking God.. how much more fucked up can this situation get.? Wow.. I can't wait for more and hear Tom's decision.
Date: 04/15/12 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 13- The Right Decision
oooo thats bad :(
please update sooon :)
Date: 04/15/12 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 13- The Right Decision
Bill is kinda being a jerk. & more please soon! It's amazing,.
Date: 04/12/12 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 12- Broken Relationships
loved it! can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 04/12/12 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 11- Mags Troubles
loved it!
Date: 04/12/12 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 10- Chantelle Issues
loved it!
Author's Response: I'm glad you did!
Date: 04/12/12 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 9- The Date
loved it!
Date: 04/12/12 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 12- Broken Relationships
oh p4 her , all of her family is against her . hope she doesn`t dump Tom . hope she will see him on the side . i hope they come up with some plan . can`t wait for more . Enjoy disneyland , have fun
Date: 04/12/12 09:16 am Title: Chapter 12- Broken Relationships
I'd be like Fuck that.!!! Fuck you guys you can't make me do shit.. then I'd go and see Tom. Lol. Just saying. Can't wait for more and hear how Tom is going to handle this.!!!
Date: 04/12/12 04:04 am Title: Chapter 12- Broken Relationships
wow....awesome chapter :)
please update soon :)
keep up the goood work :)
Date: 04/11/12 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 11- Mags Troubles
Awesome chapter, once again! Totally loved it! Tom is so sweet! Marissa is kind of a bitch. Reminds me of my sister.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it!!! And yeah I have to agree but she starts changing a bit more(:
Date: 04/11/12 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 11- Mags Troubles
oh no , here is was trying to protect her sister and now she is mad at her . Tom seems to want to protect her , hope she doesn`t get hurt with tom . can`t wait for more .
Date: 04/11/12 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 11- Mags Troubles
Ho-ly fuck.!!! And all hell breaks loose and the shit hits the fan and the can of worms have been opened and any other cliches you can think of to explain this situation.!!! God damn.!!! Tom took that a lot better then I thought. Haha.